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Fan-made summary - Story - Chapter 12 : Broken [stub] v4.7

Post by cidjen » Mon Jan 22, 2018 6:22 pm

v4.7 : update of recent events (to state as of [1524])
v4.6 : updated resume where appropriate.
v4.5 : again deleting some more TMI moments, actual descriptive sentences of key story moments look like would be FTW.
v4.1 : affecting just 1 paragraph, shortened the TMI on what happens at Junko's. Not justified to make entirely new version.
v4 : more condensing and rearranging.
v3.1: shortening the TMI.
v3: more rewording & rearranging, condensation (but not only, the grrl at the ninja compound may actually not be Junpei's sister, right ?)

Chapter 12 : Broken

Miho wakes up after a heart surgery, panics and wreaks havoc in the hospital, trying to defend herself. Komugiko learns from Kimiko what happened at the flat, and asks Junpei to help and save Miho.

Kimiko dresses up as Miho and performs a death scene to distract the Horde, while Junpei carries Miho away, Piro, Largo and Erika witness Kimiko's performance.

After Largo, Erika and her fans clear out the path for Piro to carry Kimiko away, Piro and Kimiko are hidden away by Megumi in a love hotel (The Foxhole).

Junpei hides Miho in, and later jumps with Yakugashi to his room at the ninja compound, where Miho is then told of Kimiko's and Piro's whereabouts.

At Junko's, Ping undergoes another 'character change', interferes with Junko's messages and sets off to meet Junko's date in her stead, leading Ping to close vicinity of The Foxhole.

Meimi and Cha-san accidentally 'restore' Zom-zom to human form.

Yutaka asks Yuki to find and help Ririka, who was injured during the battle between the Horde and Erika's fans, and is found out by Yutaka's mom, a former magical girl, to also be a magical girl.


To Be Continued, as more comics arrive :)
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Re: Fan-made summary - Story - Chapter 12 : Broken v1

Post by cidjen » Wed Jan 24, 2018 7:17 pm

Chapter 12 : Broken

Miho wakes up after a heart surgery in the hospital. She is panicking so much about it, that the nurses have to restrain and sedate her.

Piro sees Miho wake up, but is then sent away by the nurses, and goes to visit Largo instead.

Kimiko intends to visit Largo, but goes to Komugiko's room with Yakugashi instead, where she relays what happened at the Megagamers flat.

Komugiko tells Kimiko about Miho's heart condition and is surprised and shocked when she hears that it's been fixed.

Erika talks with Piro about what happened, Largo is shocked as he hears that Piro has 'healed the evil one'.

Meanwhile, Miho uses her powers to set herself free of the hospital bed, and wreaks havoc in that entire part of the hospital.

Hearing the rumble resulting of Miho's moves, Komugiko calls for Junpei, and asks him to help and save Miho.

Miho tries to fight Junpei, but is interrupted when Kimiko arrives and tries to calm down Miho. Kimiko then prepares for a 'person swap' scenario to facilitate Miho getting away.

Piro, Largo and Erika use a wheelchair to get to the disaster zone; Erika uses her 'power of Moeko-chan' to call her own fans to help fight the Horde.

Kimiko, dressed up as Miho, acts a death scene in front of Piro. Largo and Erika with help of Erika's fans clear out the path for Piro to carry Kimiko away.

Fleeing from the collapsed part of the hospital, Piro encounters Megumi, who sets off to bring her car to help them.

Junpei carries Miho away to his family compound and leaves her there to rest. He goes back to the hospital, helping Piro by neutralizing the Horde members and Megumi by clearing a path through the security forces.

Miho encounters Junpei's sister, and tries to come up with a credible ninja story, but fails.

Piro and Kimiko depart the hospital site hidden on the back seat of Megumi's car. Megumi breaks out of the security ring with more help from Junpei.

Meimi and Cha-san attempt to make Zom-zom 'less poisonous', enchanting (or returning Zom-zom to) a human form.

Yuki goes to find Yutaka after seeing the hospital collapse partially. Yutaka asks her to find and help Ririka, which she does, together with Largo, Erika and Erika's fans.

Piro and Kimiko arrive at The Foxhole - a love hotel owned by Megumi's family, where she tells them to lay low and hide from the Horde and other fans.

Yakugashi calls Junpei and orders herself to be carried to Miho's hiding place.

Junko helps Ping wake up and get to 'useable state' with Pings' hair, eyes and body parameters having seemingly gone random overnight.

To Be Continued, as more comics arrive :)
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Re: Fan-made summary - Story - Chapter 12 : Broken v2

Post by cidjen » Tue Jan 30, 2018 10:06 am

Just posted v3 as top-post.

Chapter 12 : Broken

Miho wakes up after a heart surgery. Unsure of the consequences this could cause to her story, she panics and has to be restrained.
Piro sees Miho wake up, but is then sent away by the nurses, and goes to visit Largo instead.
Erika talks with Piro about what happened, Largo is shocked as he hears that Piro has 'healed the evil one' 'again'.

Kimiko intends to visit Largo and Erika, but ends up in Komugiko's room.
Komugiko tells Kimiko about Miho's heart condition.
Kimiko tells Komugiko that Miho's heart has been surgically fixed.

Meanwhile, Miho uses her powers to set herself free of the hospital bed, and wreaks havoc in that entire part of the hospital.
Hearing the rumble of Miho's moves, Komugiko calls for Junpei, and asks him to help and save Miho.
Initially Miho fights Junpei but Kimiko enacts a 'person swap' scenario, to let Junpei carry Miho away to his family's compound.

As Piro arrives at the scene with Largo and Erika, Kimiko, dressed up as Miho, acts out a death scene in front of Piro.
Largo and Erika with help of Erika's fans clear out the path for Piro to carry Kimiko away

Megumi helps Piro and Kimiko get away from the hospital, hidden in the back seat of her car. Junpei helps Megumi to pass through the security forces.
Megumi drives them to a love hotel owned by her family.

At the ninja compound, Miho encounters Junpei's sister, and tries to come up with a credible ninja story, but fails.

Meimi and Cha-san attempt to make Zom-zom 'less poisonous', enchanting (or returning Zom-zom to) a human form.

Yuki goes to find Yutaka after seeing the hospital collapse partially. Yutaka asks her to find and help Ririka, which she does, together with Largo, Erika and Erika's fans.

While Komugiko is sleeping, Yakugashi calls Junpei and orders herself to be carried to Miho's hiding place.

Junko helps Ping wake up and get to 'useable state' with Pings' hair, eyes and body parameters having seemingly gone random overnight.
While Junko leaves the room to prepare for a meeting with one of her clients, Ping sends her own message to him.

To Be Continued, as more comics arrive :)
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Re: Fan-made summary - Story - Chapter 12 : Broken [stub] v3

Post by cidjen » Fri Feb 02, 2018 4:06 pm

New version 3.1 just posted as first post in thread!
v3: more rewording & rearranging, condensation (but not only, the grrl at the ninja compound may actually not be Junpei's sister, right ?)

Chapter 12 : Broken

Miho wakes up after a heart surgery. Unsure of the consequences this could cause to her story, she panics and has to be restrained.
Piro is then sent away by the nurses, and goes to visit Largo instead, hoping to find Kimiko there.
Erika talks with Piro about what happened, Largo is shocked as he hears that Piro has 'healed the evil one' 'again'.

Kimiko intends to visit Largo and Erika, but ends up going to Komugiko's room. Kimiko tells Komugiko, that Miho's heart has been surgically fixed.

Meanwhile, Miho wreaks havoc in that entire part of the hospital. Hearing the rumble of Miho's moves, Komugiko calls for Junpei, and asks him to help and save Miho. Kimiko also runs there.

Miho at first tries to beat Junpei, but when Kimiko arrives and explains his intentions, Junpei carries Miho away to his family's compound.

As Piro arrives at the scene with Largo and Erika, Kimiko, dressed and coloured up as Miho, acts out a death scene in front of Piro.
Largo and Erika with help of Erika's fans clear out the path for Piro to carry Kimiko away.

Megumi helps Piro and Kimiko get away from the hospital, hidden in the back seat of her car. Junpei helps Megumi to pass through the security forces.
Megumi drives them to a love hotel owned by her family.

At the ninja compound, Miho encounters the Ninja Grrl, and tries to come up with a credible ninja story, but fails.

Meimi and Cha-san attempt to make Zom-zom 'less poisonous', enchanting (or returning Zom-zom to) a human form.

Yuki goes to find Yutaka after seeing the hospital collapse partially. Yutaka asks her to find and help Ririka, which she does, together with Largo, Erika and Erika's fans.

While Komugiko is sleeping, Yakugashi calls Junpei and orders herself to be carried to Miho's hiding place.

Junko helps Ping wake up and get to 'useable state' with Pings' hair, eyes and body parameters having seemingly gone random overnight.
While Junko leaves the room to prepare for a meeting with one of her clients, Ping sends her own message to him.

To Be Continued, as more comics arrive :)
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Re: Fan-made summary - Story - Chapter 12 : Broken [stub] v3.1

Post by arimareiji » Thu Feb 08, 2018 1:50 am

Out of curiosity: Who is the intended audience for these summaries?

It's just that it occurs to me that condensing everything down to what we know now, as opposed to what we knew at the time we were reading a given comic, might do a disservice to people who haven't read it sequentially yet.
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Re: Fan-made summary - Story - Chapter 12 : Broken [stub] v3.1

Post by cidjen » Thu Feb 08, 2018 1:58 pm

I am not trying to anticipate the story; It's more like I am trying to 'report' on what happened (past tense deliberate) and condense to give an idea of the story plot node moments; But I try to make the effort to not include too many details, it isn't a re-telling of the story; If anything, more condensation and removal of details may still be needed; it's a resume - intended audience is of people who want to read the Story page.

Some details will still be removed from the summary of Chapter 12, as more comics arrive, for sure.

The goal is to incentivize to read the story, give an 'idea' of the plot, not to give away the plot. (IMO, YMMV)
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Re: Fan-made summary - Story - Chapter 12 : Broken [stub] v3.1

Post by cidjen » Sat Feb 10, 2018 6:58 pm

v4 has just been posted as first message in thread.
v3.1: shortening the TMI.
v3: more rewording & rearranging, condensation (but not only, the grrl at the ninja compound may actually not be Junpei's sister, right ?)

Chapter 12 : Broken

Miho wakes up after a heart surgery. Unsure of the consequences this could cause to her story, she panics and has to be restrained.
Piro goes to visit Largo, hoping to find Kimiko there. Largo is shocked as he hears that Piro has 'healed the evil one' 'again'.

Kimiko intends to visit Largo and Erika, but ends up going to Komugiko's room. Kimiko tells Komugiko, that Miho's heart has been surgically fixed.

Meanwhile, Miho wreaks havoc in the hospital. Hearing the rumble of Miho's moves, Komugiko asks Junpei to help and save Miho. Kimiko also runs there.

Miho at first tries to fight Junpei, but when Kimiko arrives and explains his intentions, Junpei carries Miho away to his family's compound.

As Piro arrives at the scene with Largo and Erika, Kimiko, dressed and coloured up as Miho, acts out a death scene in front of Piro.
Largo and Erika with help of Erika's fans clear out the path for Piro to carry Kimiko away.

Megumi helps Piro and Kimiko get away from the hospital. Junpei helps Megumi to pass through the security forces and the Horde.

At the ninja compound, Miho encounters the Ninja Grrl, and tries to come up with a credible ninja story, but fails.

Meimi and Cha-san attempt to make Zom-zom 'less poisonous', enchanting (or returning Zom-zom to) a human form.

Yutaka asks Yuki to find and help Ririka, which she does, together with Largo, Erika and Erika's fans.

While Komugiko is sleeping, Yakugashi calls Junpei and orders herself to be carried to Miho's hiding place.

Junko helps Ping wake up and get her to 'useable state' after another 'character change'.
While Junko leaves the room to prepare for a meeting with one of her clients, Ping sends her own message to him.

To Be Continued, as more comics arrive :)
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Re: Fan-made summary - Story - Chapter 12 : Broken [stub] v3.1

Post by SpaceCobraJoe » Sun Feb 11, 2018 4:13 am

arimareiji wrote:
Thu Feb 08, 2018 1:50 am
Out of curiosity: Who is the intended audience for these summaries?
I can see them being helpful for the person responsible for updating the "Story" page.
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Re: Fan-made summary - Story - Chapter 12 : Broken [stub] v4.1

Post by cidjen » Tue Feb 27, 2018 7:58 am

Posted next version as top-post, this is a backup of v4.1
v4.1 - affecting just 1 paragraph, shortened the TMI on what happens at Junko's. Not justified to make entirely new version.
v4 : more condensing and rearranging.
v3.1: shortening the TMI.
v3: more rewording & rearranging, condensation (but not only, the grrl at the ninja compound may actually not be Junpei's sister, right ?)

Chapter 12 : Broken

Miho wakes up after a heart surgery. Unsure of the consequences this could cause to her story, she panics and has to be restrained.

She wreaks havoc in the hospital. Komugiko learns from Kimiko what has happened, and asks Junpei to help and save Miho.

Kimiko dresses up as Miho to distract the Horde, Junpei carries Miho away to his family's compound.

Piro arrives at the scene with Largo and Erika. Largo and Erika with help of Erika's fans clear out the path for Piro to carry Kimiko away.

Megumi helps Piro and Kimiko get away from the hospital with help from Junpei; Megumi drives them to a love hotel.

At the ninja compound, Miho encounters the Ninja Grrl, and tries to come up with a credible ninja story, but fails.

Meimi and Cha-san accidentally 'restore' Zom-zom to human form.

Yutaka asks Yuki to find and help Ririka, who was injured during the battle between the Horde and Erika's fans.

Yakugashi orders herself to be carried to Miho's hiding place.

At Junko's, Ping undergoes another 'character change' and interferes with Junko's messages to one of Junko's 'users'.

To Be Continued, as more comics arrive :)
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Re: Fan-made summary - Story - Chapter 12 : Broken [stub] v4.5

Post by cidjen » Thu Mar 22, 2018 5:50 pm

New version posted as the first post in thread.
v4.5 : again deleting some more TMI moments, actual descriptive sentences of key story moments look like would be FTW.
v4.1 : affecting just 1 paragraph, shortened the TMI on what happens at Junko's. Not justified to make entirely new version.
v4 : more condensing and rearranging.
v3.1: shortening the TMI.
v3: more rewording & rearranging, condensation (but not only, the grrl at the ninja compound may actually not be Junpei's sister, right ?)

Chapter 12 : Broken

Miho wakes up after a heart surgery, panics and wreaks havoc in the hospital, trying to defend herself. Komugiko learns from Kimiko what happened at the flat, and asks Junpei to help and save Miho.

While Kimiko dresses up as Miho and plays dead to distract the Horde, and Junpei carries Miho away, Piro arrives at the scene with Largo and Erika. Largo and Erika with help of Erika's fans clear out the path for Piro to carry Kimiko away.

Megumi drives Piro and Kimiko away from the hospital with help from Junpei.

At the ninja compound, Miho encounters the Ninja Grrl.

Meimi and Cha-san accidentally 'restore' Zom-zom to human form.

Yutaka asks Yuki to find and help Ririka, who was injured during the battle between the Horde and Erika's fans.

Yakugashi orders herself to be carried to Miho's hiding place.

At Junko's, Ping undergoes another 'character change' and interferes with Junko's messages.

At the love hotel, Piro faces the real choice.

To Be Continued, as more comics arrive :)
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Re: Fan-made summary - Story - Chapter 12 : Broken [stub] v4.6

Post by cidjen » Wed May 16, 2018 4:02 am

New version is in the first post of the thread.
v4.6 : updated resume where appropriate.
v4.5 : again deleting some more TMI moments, actual descriptive sentences of key story moments look like would be FTW.
v4.1 : affecting just 1 paragraph, shortened the TMI on what happens at Junko's. Not justified to make entirely new version.
v4 : more condensing and rearranging.
v3.1: shortening the TMI.
v3: more rewording & rearranging, condensation (but not only, the grrl at the ninja compound may actually not be Junpei's sister, right ?)

Chapter 12 : Broken

Miho wakes up after a heart surgery, panics and wreaks havoc in the hospital, trying to defend herself. Komugiko learns from Kimiko what happened at the flat, and asks Junpei to help and save Miho.

While Kimiko dresses up as Miho and plays dead to distract the Horde, and Junpei carries Miho away, Piro arrives at the scene with Largo and Erika. Largo and Erika with help of Erika's fans clear out the path for Piro to carry Kimiko away.

Piro and Kimiko are hidden away by Megumi in a love hotel, while Junpei hides Miho in, and later jumps with Yakugashi to, his room at the ninja compound.

Meimi and Cha-san accidentally 'restore' Zom-zom to human form.

Yutaka asks Yuki to find and help Ririka, who was injured during the battle between the Horde and Erika's fans.

At Junko's, Ping undergoes another 'character change' and interferes with Junko's messages.

To Be Continued, as more comics arrive :)
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