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v6.0 - attempts at more restyling
v5.51: some more hints from @mistersaxon, thanks! And fixed what Miho tried to do at the shop (walk away) (inline edit, no need for new version) (also zapped a stray comma)
v5.5+ / not warranted new version - proofreading the commas, thanks to @mistersaxon
v5.5 : some slight editing, zapping some more TMI.
v5 : add somewheres, remove somewheres, end up shorter. Originally intended to only do up one paragraph, ended up revamping lots more.
v4 : some more condensation, rearrangement, rewording of the occurences at the flat near the end, thanks to iffy!
(also marked now more clearly where the actual writeup begins... looks like if I removed all the extra lines, it would actually condense to less than 1 computer screen of text... but don't want to do a 'wall of text' of it; might actually think of adding the portion where Erika calls Piro in the morning.)
3+ : lost a word 'arrive' when Yutaka and Yuki arrived at MG. Also added thread organisation disclaimer.
v3: attempt at slightly more non-linear compression
v2.5 : reworded the Megagamers 'explosion' as suggested by iffy, thanks!
V2.0+ : changed title as suggested by Sackett, thanks!
v2 : shortened . previous versions will be reposted as replies when new version is finished.
Chapter 11 : Remanence
After being apprehended at the Analog Support Facility, Piro spends the night in detention. Coming back to the flat, he discovers Miho sleeping there.
Miho and Piro talk (and word-fight) about how Miho thinks Piro has let their story be known to Yuki and Kimiko, how he felt about what she has done to him two years before, and how someone is trying to find her by posting footage of her on the Internet. When Miho finds out that Ping posted the footage, she wants to leave, but Piro tells her to stay and rest.
While Piro and Miho talk, Kimiko calls and recaps her version of events at the CoE, then Largo calls Piro from a train to Sendai he ended on last night with Erika.
Yuki reunites with Yutaka after having left the CoE in a hurry last night, sulking in her bedroom overnight and Meimi trying to comfort her.
Yuki tells Yutaka, that Piro and Miho can not be reunited; Yutaka tells Yuki about Miho's appearance at Piro's flat.
Seeing Dom threatening Piro in the store to force him to choose a side, Miho decides to 'walk away' from there with Piro. Because of Yuki's arrival, they end up slipping outside through 'safety gaps' to a bath house.
Yuki tries to chase Piro and Miho through the store, but is spooked by a cosplay mask. Fleeing at high speed Yuki destroys the store shelves, injures Yutaka and brings the store front and shelves down on Dom.
In the bath house Miho attempts to explain, what the problem with her 'situation' really is.
Meanwhile Yuki tows Yutaka in to the same bath house, and he is discovered by Miho as his injuries start to take their toll. Miho prevents Yuki from towing Yutaka away again.
Komugiko arrives at the bath house when Miho calls her, and takes Yutaka to hospital and Yuki to school. Meeting Piro for the first time, Komugiko reveals to Miho something she did not know about their Endgames characters.
Komugiko encounters Largo, who came back from Sendai, in her class. In the resulting commotion Miho joins the class. Miho tries to drive Piro away, but he refuses to let go and joins the class too; Miho and Piro passing notes are interrupted by Erika, which points Miho out to the Horde, suddenly arriving in big numbers.
Piro attempts to escape with Miho through the window. Miho then attempts to 'get away' embracing Piro but the Horde drags her back. While the Horde destroys the school, Largo, Junpei and Erika evacuate the pupils.
Yuki, dressed as Miho, successfully diverts Horde's attention away from Piro. Piro punches Largo in the face for calling his fantasy 'demented'.
Yuki and Yutaka disperse the Horde with her power of speed, and him laying disinformation.
Ping sees Yuki/Miho speed away, and tries to follow, only stopping after Junko severs her Internet connection.
The injured pupils, Largo, Erika, Junpei and Komugiko all arrive at the hospital.
Kimiko learns of the Megagamers morning devastation and Piro's disappearance and discovers Miho in the flat.
Miho explains her story to Kimiko and what she thinks has happened to Piro. Kimiko tries to calm Miho down, but when Piro unexpectedly comes back to the flat Miho's heart fails. As Piro begins CPR, he directs Kimiko to call for an ambulance.