Fan-made Summary - Story - chapter 10 : AFK v5.5
Posted: Sat Jan 20, 2018 9:16 pm
Hey, not sure where this actually fits, but I felt the need to write a condensed version for the Megatokyo / Story page ... pls don't shoot me if this does not belong here
v5.5 : slight edit
v5.0 : yet another attempt at more condensed resume. Looks like it now could condense to less than a page of text, if excessive gap lines are removed, but not doing it here for to not turn it into a wall of text. Added bold to the title so it's more apparent where the changelog ends, and text starts.
v4.0 : attempt at slightly more non-linear condensation
V3.0+ : changed title as suggested by Sackett, thanks!
v3: All the while, it was much much too long. It's supposed to be condensed ... contributions to condense more are welcome
(previous version will be re-posted as a reply in this thread)
v2: tweaks and paragraphs by Ningen, thank you!
also added : lost line about Yuki reading the chat logs, removed in v2.1, redundant.
also s/bouncers / Kenji and Komugiko
Chapter 10 : A.F.K.
Piro and Kimiko talk about possibly getting Piro a job at Lockart.
An after-school encounter between Largo, Junko and Ping is disrupted by Ping's translation module still malfunctioning after Largo's 'reference material' overload. Junko, appalled by how Largo treats Ping, storms off, and Ping follows her and rescues from a nearly-certain accident. Afterwards when Junko and Ping talk in a cafe, Ping manages to finally explain what she is, and Junko suggests Ping to post photos and videos she made while staying with Miho, to the Internet.
Yutaka reveals to Yuki the existence of material posted by Ping.
During dinner at Sonodas' house with Erika and Largo, Yuki chats with Yutaka, and decides that she wants to go the Cave of Evil to look for Miho. Largo sets up a distraction to allow Yuki to set off.
At the same time, Piro and Kimiko work on Piro's portfolio. Piro calls Largo's phone when, members of NPC interfere in his computer. Yuki (who borrowed Largo's phone) takes the call, reveals to Piro the presence of Miho's 'embarrassing photos' posted by Ping.
Piro reveals presence of Miho's photos and their chat history, on his old laptop, and then explains to Kimiko (and Yuki eavesdropping) why he feels about Miho the way he does.
Kimiko decides to use her free Cave of Evil pass to look for Miho. Largo and Erika also decide to go to the Cave of Evil.
Looking at the online response to Ping's postings, Junko decides to confront her father, who also went to the Cave of Evil, and Ping follows her, only to become Ed's target again.
Yuki is intercepted by Kenji at the entrance of the Cave of Evil and reunited with Yutaka. In CoE office, Yuki reads the chat logs off Piro's laptop that she's stolen earlier.
Yuki departs CoE and finds Miho at the Analog Support Facility. While Yuki tries to talk to Miho about her and Piro's feelings, Miho taunts Yuki and causes her to drag Miho to the Cave of Evil.
In the chaos that ensues, Ibara senior (Junko's father) neutralizes Ed, and Largo blows up the club to facilitate everybody's escape.
Piro decides to go to the ASF, only to find Miho's room empty with signs of physical struggle.
Miho tries to go home, but finding it surrounded, turns around and goes in a different direction.
v5.5 : slight edit
v5.0 : yet another attempt at more condensed resume. Looks like it now could condense to less than a page of text, if excessive gap lines are removed, but not doing it here for to not turn it into a wall of text. Added bold to the title so it's more apparent where the changelog ends, and text starts.
v4.0 : attempt at slightly more non-linear condensation
V3.0+ : changed title as suggested by Sackett, thanks!
v3: All the while, it was much much too long. It's supposed to be condensed ... contributions to condense more are welcome
(previous version will be re-posted as a reply in this thread)
v2: tweaks and paragraphs by Ningen, thank you!
also added : lost line about Yuki reading the chat logs, removed in v2.1, redundant.
also s/bouncers / Kenji and Komugiko
Chapter 10 : A.F.K.
Piro and Kimiko talk about possibly getting Piro a job at Lockart.
An after-school encounter between Largo, Junko and Ping is disrupted by Ping's translation module still malfunctioning after Largo's 'reference material' overload. Junko, appalled by how Largo treats Ping, storms off, and Ping follows her and rescues from a nearly-certain accident. Afterwards when Junko and Ping talk in a cafe, Ping manages to finally explain what she is, and Junko suggests Ping to post photos and videos she made while staying with Miho, to the Internet.
Yutaka reveals to Yuki the existence of material posted by Ping.
During dinner at Sonodas' house with Erika and Largo, Yuki chats with Yutaka, and decides that she wants to go the Cave of Evil to look for Miho. Largo sets up a distraction to allow Yuki to set off.
At the same time, Piro and Kimiko work on Piro's portfolio. Piro calls Largo's phone when, members of NPC interfere in his computer. Yuki (who borrowed Largo's phone) takes the call, reveals to Piro the presence of Miho's 'embarrassing photos' posted by Ping.
Piro reveals presence of Miho's photos and their chat history, on his old laptop, and then explains to Kimiko (and Yuki eavesdropping) why he feels about Miho the way he does.
Kimiko decides to use her free Cave of Evil pass to look for Miho. Largo and Erika also decide to go to the Cave of Evil.
Looking at the online response to Ping's postings, Junko decides to confront her father, who also went to the Cave of Evil, and Ping follows her, only to become Ed's target again.
Yuki is intercepted by Kenji at the entrance of the Cave of Evil and reunited with Yutaka. In CoE office, Yuki reads the chat logs off Piro's laptop that she's stolen earlier.
Yuki departs CoE and finds Miho at the Analog Support Facility. While Yuki tries to talk to Miho about her and Piro's feelings, Miho taunts Yuki and causes her to drag Miho to the Cave of Evil.
In the chaos that ensues, Ibara senior (Junko's father) neutralizes Ed, and Largo blows up the club to facilitate everybody's escape.
Piro decides to go to the ASF, only to find Miho's room empty with signs of physical struggle.
Miho tries to go home, but finding it surrounded, turns around and goes in a different direction.