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by cidjen
Mon Jan 29, 2018 4:27 pm
Forum: Story Discussion
Topic: [1509] - "the floor is lava"
Replies: 85
Views: 3217

Re: [1509] - "the floor is lava"

Also unrelated-funny, how do the buttons on the hospital robe don't just pop off, as she's jumping around the platforms, but when she was acting the death scene, she had to take a time-out to pop them back together again... :)
by cidjen
Mon Jan 29, 2018 4:21 pm
Forum: Story Discussion
Topic: [1509] - "the floor is lava"
Replies: 85
Views: 3217

Re: [1509] - "the floor is lava"

The burning floor is not a problem, as it would be totally self-cleansing, lol, but I would not appreciate having to use bedlinen and upholstery made of asbestos :) and burning off my and my date's clothes... Also AC would kill the entire hotel's profits biiiiig time... and insurance.... moh dia.
by cidjen
Mon Jan 29, 2018 4:16 pm
Forum: Story Discussion
Topic: [1509] - "the floor is lava"
Replies: 85
Views: 3217

Re: [1509] - "the floor is lava"

(Also from gaming history : does this room speak to you more Montezuma's Revenge, or some other game ? ;) I don't see any burning ropes... although this could be a level with chains, not ropes) (Short poll : what other rooms would there be in this hotel ? And how would a night look like in a Pac-man...
by cidjen
Mon Jan 29, 2018 3:52 pm
Forum: Story Discussion
Topic: [1509] - "the floor is lava"
Replies: 85
Views: 3217

Re: [1509] - "the floor is lava"

If I was just recently talking with the girl who had dumped me two years ago, and who I even for a while thought she was a guy, because she made me think so while dumping me, who dumped me so harshly, that I regretted ever starting to talk to her, and if I had recently revealed to that girl, that m...
by cidjen
Sun Jan 28, 2018 8:06 pm
Forum: Story Discussion
Topic: [1509] - "the floor is lava"
Replies: 85
Views: 3217

Re: [1509] - "the floor is lava"

paarfi wrote:
Sun Jan 28, 2018 6:35 pm
Also, I notice that Kimiko is calling him "Piro" now, rather than "Piro-san".
She did do that too in 1504.
by cidjen
Sun Jan 28, 2018 6:54 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: [Fanfic] Saved - A Megatokyo Story - Chapter 4 : Bad Sight, vol 1
Replies: 0
Views: 158

[Fanfic] Saved - A Megatokyo Story - Chapter 4 : Bad Sight, vol 1

- So when were you going to actually tell me who she is ?! - ahrg... Let go... hey, you know your knees are actually dislocating by ribs now... You don't need another death on your conscience do you...? He looked into my eyes, then stood up. I sat down on the floor, then, not letting him out of sigh...
by cidjen
Sat Jan 27, 2018 7:46 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: [Fanfic] Saved - A Megatokyo Story - Chapter 3: An Author's tale
Replies: 0
Views: 118

[Fanfic] Saved - A Megatokyo Story - Chapter 3: An Author's tale

I woke up in the morning. Or was it almost noon? I did not remember how I got home. Then I looked at my apartment. They were here. Sleeping on any sleeping surface they could find. My new bar friends. Must have carried me home. I looked back to my bedroom, and found a female, I haven't seen before, ...
by cidjen
Sat Jan 27, 2018 12:23 pm
Forum: Story Discussion
Topic: [1507] "Being Yourself"
Replies: 46
Views: 2335

Re: [1507] "Being Yourself"

There might be no better way to have Piro not win and not lose. The primordial cyberfoil vanishes back into the historic mists from whence she arrived. The art team partner romance lady blends into the story-absorbing simulacrum machine. Which, that morphing Kimiko and Ping into one entity would be...
by cidjen
Sat Jan 27, 2018 7:17 am
Forum: Story Discussion
Topic: Fan-made Summary - Story - chapter 11 : Remanence v5
Replies: 27
Views: 982

Re: Fan-made Summary - Story - chapter 11 : Remanence v3

Right... I think I saw it too much from the protagonist (Kimiko's) POV. From that perspective, it certainly looks like 'i almost killed her'... Cause she has no idea what was going on. I'll think of rewording. Thanks ... This though may be painful because the part about shoving Miho against the door...
by cidjen
Fri Jan 26, 2018 7:08 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: [Fanfic] Saved - A Megatokyo Story - Chapter 2 : Letters to K., vol1
Replies: 0
Views: 122

[Fanfic] Saved - A Megatokyo Story - Chapter 2 : Letters to K., vol1

Dear K., I hope this letter reaches you well. I hope I can hold the pen for long enough to write something. I don't sleep all day any more. The doctors say, I'm getting better. Still sometimes, I go to sleep during the day, and when I wake up, i feel like was sleeping for weeks. I told the doctors. ...
by cidjen
Fri Jan 26, 2018 6:36 pm
Forum: Story Discussion
Topic: [1508] Somewhere we haven't gone before
Replies: 59
Views: 2228

Re: [1508] Somewhere we haven't gone before

(Although the time must have warped somewhere, it can't be 2001 in Megatokyo any more... phones are much too flat :) and PS4 was on Ed's t-shirt. )
by cidjen
Fri Jan 26, 2018 6:34 pm
Forum: Story Discussion
Topic: [1508] Somewhere we haven't gone before
Replies: 59
Views: 2228

Re: [1508] Somewhere we haven't gone before

Then... Junko's 'elder admirer' can't realistically be any of the characters we already know. She clearly has got it going on for some time already.
by cidjen
Fri Jan 26, 2018 9:51 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: [Fanfic] Saved - a Megatokyo story - Chapter 1 - The Trial
Replies: 0
Views: 118

[Fanfic] Saved - a Megatokyo story - Chapter 1 - The Trial

- All rise! The Honorable Justice Sands and the jury are now entering the court room. She stood up slowly, looking down at the plea box railings before her, then glanced undetectably at the face of the judge. - Today's trial is : Frances Cotton Hannah O'Neil and her family v. a joint plea of the Sea...
by cidjen
Fri Jan 26, 2018 4:26 am
Forum: Story Discussion
Topic: [1508] Somewhere we haven't gone before
Replies: 59
Views: 2228

Re: [1508] Somewhere we haven't gone before

It's... hmm this just dawned on me, this kind of had happened before... just re-read [661]... it's against Ping's programming to interfere in real/serious relationships... unless she thinks, it's not real/not serious enough (yet) ?
by cidjen
Thu Jan 25, 2018 6:55 pm
Forum: Story Discussion
Topic: Fan-made Summary - Story - chapter 11 : Remanence v5
Replies: 27
Views: 982

Re: Fan-made Summary - Story - chapter 11 : Remanence v3

More thoughts on the concise and compressed summaries... I understand the need to be descriptive, not literally quoting especially on key events. Need to avoid telling the story because their purpose is to describe the action, not to retell it. Also need to avoid emotional involvement. We still want...
by cidjen
Thu Jan 25, 2018 6:39 pm
Forum: Story Discussion
Topic: Fan-made Summary - Story - chapter 11 : Remanence v5
Replies: 27
Views: 982

Re: Fan-made Summary - Story - chapter 11 : Remanence v3

I believe I reworded it ' Miho's heart stops when Kimiko punches her. ' in newest version. Seems fitting without a cause-effect relationship, only by timing... Or is it too strong of a word choice? (the newest version is always in the first post, previous revisions appear as replies. I understand it...
by cidjen
Thu Jan 25, 2018 4:35 pm
Forum: Story Discussion
Topic: [1508] Somewhere we haven't gone before
Replies: 59
Views: 2228

Re: [1508] Somewhere we haven't gone before

@Sackett - it could be... For the sake of PG rating let's say it could be just that. (Just saying, in RL, there are more cynical situations on either side of such relationship.... Just sayin.) @Paarfi: in case no one asked this before, would the ninja girl be related to Natsuki, as in (448) ? Super ...
by cidjen
Thu Jan 25, 2018 1:07 pm
Forum: Story Discussion
Topic: [1508] Somewhere we haven't gone before
Replies: 59
Views: 2228

Re: [1508] Somewhere we haven't gone before

Well I thought about this... It is Ed who seems to have a 'mission' to liquidate Ping. Dom's not in 'console' business - he wants the 'real' actresses (note how he doesn't even start talking to Miho about any such business). Dom has been under a front of a building just the previous day. Ed had been...
by cidjen
Thu Jan 25, 2018 8:01 am
Forum: Story Discussion
Topic: Fan-made Summary - Story - chapter 11 : Remanence v5
Replies: 27
Views: 982

Re: Fan-made Summary - Story - chapter 11 : Remanence v2.5

v2.5 : reworded the Megagamers 'explosion' as suggested by iffy, thanks! V2.0+ : changed title as suggested by Sackett, thanks! v2 : shortened . previous versions will be reposted as replies when new version is finished. Chapter 11 : Remanence Piro has been detained by the police in the ASF and afte...
by cidjen
Thu Jan 25, 2018 6:40 am
Forum: Story Discussion
Topic: Fan-made Summary - Story - chapter 10 : AFK v5.0
Replies: 7
Views: 480

Re: Fan-made Summary - Story - chapter 10 : AFK v3.0

V3.0+ : changed title as suggested by Sackett, thanks! v3: All the while, it was much much too long. It's supposed to be condensed ... contributions to condense more are welcome :) (previous version will be re-posted as a reply in this thread) v2: tweaks and paragraphs by Ningen, thank you! also add...
by cidjen
Wed Jan 24, 2018 7:19 pm
Forum: Story Discussion
Topic: [1507] "Being Yourself"
Replies: 46
Views: 2335

Re: [1507] "Being Yourself"

Maybe, but he has not been 'Boo'ed before :)
by cidjen
Wed Jan 24, 2018 7:17 pm
Forum: Story Discussion
Topic: Fan-made summary - Story - Chapter 12 : Broken [stub] v4.1
Replies: 7
Views: 334

Re: Fan-made summary - Story - Chapter 12 : Broken v1

Chapter 12 : Broken Miho wakes up after a heart surgery in the hospital. She is panicking so much about it, that the nurses have to restrain and sedate her. Piro sees Miho wake up, but is then sent away by the nurses, and goes to visit Largo instead. Kimiko intends to visit Largo, but goes to Komugi...
by cidjen
Wed Jan 24, 2018 5:53 pm
Forum: Story Discussion
Topic: [1507] "Being Yourself"
Replies: 46
Views: 2335

Re: [1507] "Being Yourself"

Hmm, I'm sure someone thought of this before (tm), but... Kimiko plays / gives voice to Kotone. Piro could already have the job drawing Kotone. Kotone was the last stage of Mihos' real life. Miho and Piro were lovers before. Remember when Largo met Kimiko, he sensed 'a hidden threat' and potential f...
by cidjen
Wed Jan 24, 2018 12:58 pm
Forum: Story Discussion
Topic: [1508] Somewhere we haven't gone before
Replies: 59
Views: 2228

Re: [1508] Somewhere we haven't gone before

Stupid thought but going to comb over every panel where Junko and Ping were outdoors lately... For signs of possible Ed-dage...
by cidjen
Wed Jan 24, 2018 12:55 pm
Forum: Story Discussion
Topic: [1508] Somewhere we haven't gone before
Replies: 59
Views: 2228

Re: [1508] Somewhere we haven't gone before

I know. Non-h relationships are real... Until one of them is not...