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darrin wrote: ↑

Tue Feb 27, 2018 11:50 am

mistersaxon wrote: ↑

Tue Feb 27, 2018 9:51 am

my attempt to render chapter 1 as an epic poem.

Wow that was quite good, thanks for linking that.

Thanks! It helps if you already know the story though, so it probably needs to be a bit more descriptive and twice as long

EDIT: yeah right, definitively too many commas :) made v5.5+. But if you care to proofread more, any feedback is welcome :) In most cases, commas were meant to separate a list of names like here : The injured pupils, Largo, Erika, Junpei and Komugiko all arrive at the hospital. This would be slight...

Interesting to see the story summarised thus - it inevitably gives a viewpoint on the story which may not accord with the reader's. Nice work, and more accessible than my attempt to render chapter 1 as an epic poem . Proofreading: you don't need a comma after everyone's name. You do need a comma whe...

eomdal wrote: ↑

Sun Jan 28, 2018 12:20 pm

he previous four comics suggest there is going to be an eventual meeting at The Foxhole of at least three parties: Kimiko and Piro, Miho and Yaku with Junpei, and Ping.

... and Ping's "date" who I theorise may be l33t d00d.

Yl33 D4 N00b wrote: ↑

Thu Jan 25, 2018 10:08 pm

Ping still needs to work on her eye, though......

... and hide her earblades. I guess they'd go inside the classic Junko twintails, more or less, but it'd look pretty strange.

Isn't this going to be a meeting with the l33t m4st3r? He's older, Junko likes and admires him...

... a certain kitsune-owned love hotel would fit the bill, on every meaning of the strip title.

I guess Yaku blames Miho for her mum being in the hospital? That's . . . . fair, actually.

Invisigoth wrote: ↑

Thu Jan 04, 2018 2:24 pm

Yaku has twintails and a Ninja on call so she's ahead of most teen girls at this stage of the game

This is just a really elaborate play on the "twintails" thing isn't it? Actual twin tails.

(Yes, yes, I'm really slow on the uptake...)

Yaku's little ears went straight up! I think she was and wasn't expecting such a very big and in-your-face ninja, quite so fast. She's still adorable though

I assume those two bottom speech bubbles were grandma over a loudspeaker. No, that's the sign language that Ashe (the foxgirl) and Megumi are using. Ashe is deaf (per Fred on the Twitch chat). If this is an "A Silent Voice" ref I am completely 1000% ok with it - both the manga AND the movie were in...

So does that include shipping for the Miho MkII blankets? I don't like to nag but I think it's been a while since they were ordered ...

How much trouble is Yuki in with her very-protective-of-her-son, potential mother-in-law? On a scale of 1 to 10... I mean she's ticked all the threat boxes: X Actualised physical threat X "Stolen his heart" threat X "Capable of replacing his mum" threat (at least as an MG) If Yutaka's dad likes her ...

Commander: "Stand down, it's just a little girl..."

Long-serving grunt: "A what? Oh my God! Run for your lives!!"

Well the theme of MT is "transformation" so why not? As for clothes - I think they'd be magical clothes so the holes won't be a problem (was always the way in Dragon-maid) but surely that tail is bad for your balance? She'll be leaning forward like a velociraptor! And let's not forget that Largo has...

This is an unexpected bit of joy

re-looking over that first panel... didn't realize that Junko is sandwiched between Pings legs.... ooh where the dirty mind goes..... *looks over at mistersaxton* So sax, how does it feel to not get invited to the party? you're a Junko fan-boy and wrote Ping some backstory once (assuming non-canon ...

I can't believe all you folks paying $400pa to have a photobucket account. I'mma find me somewhere else to go for this shizz - although it'd be kinda nice if the server would host avatars directly. Sorry, off topic, but then maybe the image of Ping's eyes is hosted on photobucket and that's why they...

Junko is good people - in spite of it all (and there's a lot of "all" to be in spite of)

jkhartl wrote: ↑

Sun Jul 02, 2017 5:11 pm

Ah, I see that Miho is now sporting a swirly

I've been reading Ménage A Trois and find this comment very disturbing in that context.

Go for it! There was some fun stuff in there. The research I did would now get me put on a watch list for sure though.

I already had my own copies of the GG:USA stuff and some (but nowhere near all) of the campfire story threads. Man those were some threads! I think I wrote close to 50,000 words in GG:USA and I was not the most prolific writer in there. It was all shite of course - at least in terms of commercial vi...

BTW if you link wikipedia.com it works but you get a certificate warning and have to allow an exception (and some browsers may not connect at all). Arguably Wikipedia should get their root cert to cover the .com domain as well since they have registered it and redirect from it but it's probably easi...

Main thing is Piro only relates to the world through the mundane perspective, and right now lots of crap is happening as a result of Miho's waning super-meta supernatural existence. He doesn't have context from which to react to anything. Metaphorical AND literal blanket over the head. Probably jus...