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- Sat Jun 29, 2019 5:31 pm
- Forum: Story Discussion
- Topic: [1558] Getting through
- Replies: 105
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Re: [1558] Getting through
Aww, Paarfi beat me to it for the most part. But I will say, "HorusHound, what the effing hell?!" I will be nicer than I'd planned. You've either been selectively reading, or fooling yourself. Hell, when she first started dealing with Largo, she OUTRIGHT ASKED him if he would go away if she slept w...
- Sat Jun 29, 2019 4:32 pm
- Forum: Story Discussion
- Topic: [1558] Getting through
- Replies: 105
- Views: 340244
Re: [1558] Getting through
"And then you screwed all those guys" Really? REALLY? Why the heck would you make that a part of her lore? What the hell were you thinking? You've just lost yourself a reader. That was horrible and I can't believe you'd essentially make her a goddamn whore.