[filk] Poor Miho, Way too easy, but...

This is kinda weak, mainly because the song's short and repetitive, but it popped into my mind and I couldn't get it out...

Poor Miho
With apologies to Royksopp

Poor Miho
Where you'll cry, I'll flow
Where you'll cry, I'll glow
Where you'll cry, I'll dance on...

Poor Miho
Where you'll cry, I'll flow
Where you'll cry, I'll glow
Where you'll cry, I'll dance on...

Poor Miho
Where you'll cry, I'll flow
Where you'll cry, I'll glow
Where you'll cry, I'll dance on

Poor Miho
How you weep alone
On the Cave's dance floor
Cry while we just dance on

Poor Miho
Where you'll cry, I'll flow
Where you'll cry, I'll glow
Where you'll cry, I'll dance on

Poor Miho
How you weep alone
On the Cave's dance floor
Cry while we just dance on

--

Poor Leno

Poor Leno
Where you'll be, I'll go
Where you'll be, I'll know
Where you'll be, I'll find you...

Poor Leno
Where you'll be, I'll go
Where you'll be, I'll know
Where you'll be, I'll find you...

Poor Leno
Where you'll be, I'll go
Where you'll be, I'll know
Where you'll be, I'll find you

Poor Leno
Have you due in time
Reunite as one
Please, I almost find you

Poor Leno
Where you'll be, I'll go
Where you'll be, I'll know
Where you'll be, I'll find you

Poor Leno
Have you due in time
Reunite as one
Please, I almost find you

Simple, but says how the feelings of Miho are, very well. Also the main emotion of all Miho-fans, recessive or dominant. Nice, simple song.

~Chun

Like you said, the base song is repetitive (and simple), but it's a good work.

Unfortunately Miho and Ping are very sexy sorts of topics to discuss right now, so the forumites are cheating on you with them. ^.^;;

It's not too bad. Not every filk has to be "Bohemian Rhapsody" or "Phantom of the Opera." You did change pretty much everything you could, so it's still worth a full credit in my book.

It's technically sound with the meter/rhyme scheme. Most importantly, you got across the feeling intended. Good job!

Same opinion here.

Simple and wistful, I like it. To atone for its shortness, you must bring us another shr.. er. filk!

Hut hut *punt*

I like royksopp.

For those of you that care: The letter o in Royksopp (only where marked blue) is a replacement for the letter ø in Norwegian.

To pronounce Royksopp more correctly, english speaking people would have to pronounce the o like the u in the word hurt.

English speakers would also have to change the way they pronounce r, Norwegians pronounse their r`s like Japanese people and like some Germans (depends on where in germany they come from)

anyway, nice Brent Dax..simple and clean

SONG'd!

Very nice song, it depicts greatly what I PARTIALLY feel about this. But.. I still think she kind of deserved it for the manipulating.

..but she's still cute!