[filks] Filk Machine Ely does it again!, [filks] Filk Machine Ely does it again!
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[filks] Filk Machine Ely does it again!, [filks] Filk Machine Ely does it again!| elyscape |
Posted: Oct 19 2003, 08:56 PM
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[!filk] Filk Machine Ely writes another Ping filk! And it's also a Rammstein Transfilk! [/!filk]
A Jealous Catalyst by Eli Young (Elyscape) Apologies to Rammstein Piro, why not me Why did you choose that girl? What thing makes me Such an unpolished pearl? Could it maybe Be that I don't seem that real? What do you want? Play with me and then erase me? Just go erase me As catalyst I I help things come to pass Bookcase, behind I can hear her class The girl says goodbye But this isn't forever What do you want? Play with me and then erase me? Just go erase me Leave nothing inside me I feel such jealousy I see the sparks flying Between the two of you Neither one of you going To make a move I feel I have to help you And yet it hurts so much I want to be her Yet I know I'll be erased, gone Just go erase me Leave nothing inside me I'm such a jealous link Eifersucht by Rammstein Original Lyrics and Translation [!filk] A Miho filk... [/!filk] Pain by Eli Young (Elyscape) Apologies to Pink Floyd I lie on the floor Drop all my enemies forevermore I simply want to leave and yet I cannot go Why won't the world just let me die? Stop by Pink Floyd I wanna go home Take off this uniform and leave the show I'm waiting in this cell because I have to know Have I been guilty all this time? |
    
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| Myxthol |
Posted: Oct 19 2003, 09:02 PM
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2 filks in one! Wai!
Er... ignore me. I liked the filks though... Keep it up!  |
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| Opt498 |
Posted: Oct 19 2003, 09:11 PM
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l33t One Group: -Members- Posts: 2305 Member No.: 4928 Joined: 20-September 02 |
ToP Links updated.
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| AncestralHamster |
Posted: Oct 19 2003, 10:58 PM
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Not bad, Eli. Although I can't see Ping being jealous. Hurt, wistful, full of forlorn longing, but not jealous.
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| Caduceuskun |
Posted: Oct 20 2003, 12:15 AM
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w00t! Go Filk Machine! Very nice.
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| codepoetica |
Posted: Oct 20 2003, 05:20 PM
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Ely-san; I must say that I much prefer "A Jealous Catalyst" minus the original; The heaviness so common in Rammstein's sound seems to detract from it a bit. As such, the filk standing alone as a poetic rendition was better, imho.
Floyd's contribution, however, was quite the inverse. Elegant in simplicity. |
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