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Posted by: Hell Wrath Mar 13 2005, 05:29 PM
Um.....hi this is my new story im working on. This is my first time so could you please eare up on the criticizing

the story takes place on a world know as Zieg. It is medievil times and Celestians (angelic beings) dominate the sky in huge floating cities. Humans live on land with many other races. there is some magic but not a whole lot (wanted to get away from ungodly magic users). The three kingdoms are Celestia: the floating city, Alexander: Capital of the human kingdom, and Eraverte: Kingdom of Daemons. The celstians and Daemons don't get along
This world is mostly fought with weapons such as swords, axes, bows, etc, but their are artificiers coming up with new forms of technology like the soulless Golem. Mos of these practices have been stoped after the destruction of Vairrios: City of machines.
mostly all races are permitted in the story, but the most dominate are the Daemons, Humans, and Celestians

i am currently working on the plot if you have any questions just ask away.

Posted by: Last of Fallen Mar 13 2005, 06:05 PM

So... What are the characters supposed to be doing, exactly?

And, uh, the capital of the human kingdom. Say -- what is the human kingdom?

Posted by: Redkun Mar 13 2005, 07:02 PM

This has an interesting concept, but your explanation of it is quite below average. Much expansion, elaboration and precision is needed.

Posted by: wapa Mar 13 2005, 09:24 PM
Indeed, the first stop for all should be Andy's excellent disc thread.

i am currently working on the plot if you have any questions just ask away.

That's my unofficial job around here...

Um.....hi this is my new story im working on. This is my first time so could you please eare up on the criticizing

If it's your first time, you should take extra-special care with how you present yourself. Remember, first impressions are important. (That includes above all on a forum like this being able to type properly - grammar and spelling are friends, not foreign countries.)

the story takes place on a world know as Zieg. It is medievil times

Okay, I'll stop right here. Medieval times by what standard? I'm assuming european medieval - however there's also Japanese medieval (Shogun era), Chinese medieval (I forget the name of this one but it's prior to their empire...) and Middle-Eastern Medieval (Modern-day) - in the European medieval period, the middle east or rather Islamic Civilisation was going through its rennaisance and China was in its golden age.

and Celestians (angelic beings) dominate the sky in huge floating cities.

Is this a good thing, or a bad thing, on the whole?

Humans live on land with many other races. there is some magic but not a whole lot (wanted to get away from ungodly magic users).

So magic is ungodly by the standards of Zieg as well then? That's not always the case, by the way - in a fictional, fantasy world magic doesn't only come from ungodly demons and such, it could just be a force anyone can tap or the world's equivalent of science. wink.gif

But prompted by your question, what exactly are the religions of Zieg? Can priests channel the power of their god? Are there multiple gods, none at all, one?

If magic is limited, how do the Celestian cities stay afloat? Lighter-than-air gas? If so, Where do they get it?

If it's something like helicopter blades, how the hell do they keep spinning?

The three kingdoms are Celestia: the floating city, Alexander: Capital of the human kingdom, and Eraverte: Kingdom of Daemons. The celstians and Daemons don't get along

How big is this world, exactly? If the action's limited to just a little continent or something I can understand why there are only three kingdoms. But I should point out that humans don't always get along, and I have little reason to suspect that Celestians or Daemons are all that unified either. What sort of power struggles happen in these kingdoms? Are they feudal, with lots of warfare between members of the same kingdom? Republics, with debate and the occasional knife in the dark?

This world is mostly fought with weapons such as swords, axes, bows, etc, but their are artificiers coming up with new forms of technology like the soulless Golem. Mos of these practices have been stoped after the destruction of Vairrios: City of machines.

So golems are a form of technology? Does this mean that they use clockwork and/or steam power to move, or are they electronic? Or is there a weird-science like Aether of the Aquasilva universe that enables them to work?

What other technologies could one expect? Clockpunk seems most likely, but is it the case?

mostly all races are permitted in the story, but the most dominate are the Daemons, Humans, and Celestians

"All races"? What do you mean by "All races"? Standard-fare Humans, Elves, Dwarves and Orcs? D&D esque Humans, Elves, Gnomes, Halflings, Dwarves, Trolls, Orcs etc? Pseudo-celtic Wights or Faerie in all their multidudinous glory? Anthropomorphic animals?

For that matter, are Daemons and Celestians just regular living creatures, or demon/angel analogues? If they're just living things, are there real demons and angels out there?

Otherwise, welcome to the forums.

Posted by: Hell Wrath Mar 13 2005, 10:06 PM
Ok..Ok i honostly didn't think about most of the things you listed so here is a second try...for beter or worse.

The story takes place on a world known as zieg.It is in a medievil setting and i mean a european medievil... only with huge populated cities. The Celestians dominate the sky in huge flaoting cities. (this is sort of a good thing, because they mostly keep the peace) Humans live on land with other races such as the Daemon, Elves, dwarfs, orcs, ogeres, and some goblins. There is a great deal of magic in this world were almost anyone can tap into a certain element given to them at birth. The three kingdoms are located on a continent a little bit bigger than Russia. The two kingdoms on the ground are Eraverte (kingdom of the Daemons, south) and Alexander (kingdom of Humans and Elves, north west). The 3rd kingdom dominates the whole sky this kingdom is called Celestia. The fourth kingdom will come into play later. also remember that the 3 kingdoms do not toataly dominate the whole continent, some places are still independent or rebel cities. The Daemons are enemys due to their conquest for more land, and hate the celestions for their labeling them evil and wishes to take the skies away from their oppresers. Celestions lead a peacefull life and are most know for their labeling themselves as divine creatures (good) and calling the Daemons greedy, digusting, filth (evil). Humans have associated themselves as nuetral, but still thirst for power and are constantly fighting daemons forland and are also crushing rebel cities and taking them for thier own.

I have to go but, i will have everything finished hopefully by tomarrow.
(thanks for the help guys.... also give me a reply on what i have so far)

Posted by: Hell Wrath Mar 14 2005, 08:36 PM
The races are pretty common with Humans, ekves, daemons, celestians, kitsune (fox people), simulacram, and other races just make sure just to run them by me first.
I also wanted to say that the daemons and celestians are real angels and demons with wings and other things.

The technology is like what you would find in FF9 with advances in steam engines that are also powered by magic. Golems (magic and engine powered), airships, and Huge mechanized Gates between the kingdoms are huge pieces of technology. The floating cities although are powered by magic. Bttles are fought with swords, axes, bows, etc, but new advances have some people with hand guns. (plz only one or two people with guns)(think of final fantasy tactics: swords and guns).Their is also many clockwork mechanics in this land.
Is to unite the kingdoms in order to defeat Sinn. sinn is the leader of the new 4th kingdom. (this is easier said than done)

If you would like to join here is the nessicary things you will need on a character sheet....sorry but still working on plot.

weapon:you are limited to 3 unless you pm me about it
possesion:an item you cherish
element:what element you can use as magic (fire, ice, water, earth, wind, water, lightning, holy, dark, divine)
abilities:any abilities i should know about.
special technique:special attack

sorry about not having the plot done.

Posted by: SilverSeraph Mar 15 2005, 12:47 PM
Hey there.

Noticed Wapa did a nice job of inquisitioning you.... dont take it as a bad thing, beleive me it can be the best thing that ever happens to your rp. It was for me.

The Inquisition is not meant to criticise... instead... think of it as a tool to enhance your imagination... another perspective thinking of the shit you may have forgotten or overlooked.

And remember.... Im not just an Inquisitor for the C.I.S.... Im also a victim!

That all aside... allow me to further pry open your creativity.


Their cities are magic based and float above. Sweet.

1. What do they eat. Im assuming they dont grow farms up in the clouds.... or do they? Are they Omniverous or perhaps they are sustained by the very divine power that created them. You tell me.

2. What kind of caste system do they have? What I mean is... are there lesser angels... then full angels that rule over them... and Archangels above them? If so... what kind of Heirarchy is there to their leadership?

3. you mention their opinion on Daemons. Is that universal (All angels hate all demons?) or just a consensus. What about their views on Humans and other "Terran" (ground walking) races?


Power hungry expansionists... nice... but wheres the love?

1. The general view of Daemons is bad.... but is it deserved? Do they maraude the countryside? Are they particularily vicious?

2. What is THEIR opinion of the humans and other races?

3. Again, what kind of rulership system do they make use of in their cities.


1. Currency. Is the same form of currency used between each kingdom? Do each of the races use their own coin... and if so... is Angelic Coin worth less or nothing in Daemon kingdoms? and VIce versa.

2. You mention that magic is somthing that everyone can tap into a bit. Define "Tap Into" Or your going to end up with all those ungodly magic users you didnt want *lol*.

Hrm... well its not much of an inquisition... but Im not at top form lately. Not enough time at this damn borrowed computer to really grill your noodle.

*sigh* Oh well... hope this helps you out and GOOD LUCK!

Posted by: THE REPOMAN Mar 15 2005, 03:51 PM
this sounds like fun. are there guns, cause if there are i want a +10 gatling gun of uber death to allness. just messing biggrin.gif

Posted by: chnkymnky Mar 15 2005, 03:52 PM
Hey Wrathman Sounds cool i'll join biggrin.gif biggrin.gif biggrin.gif biggrin.gif BOSLEY ninjanatsD.gif ninjanatsD.gif ninjanatsD.gif ninjanatsD.gif

Posted by: Keyo Mar 15 2005, 04:08 PM
Hmmmm...By your request, I have looked into this. And I believe it has some potential, I'm already working on a nice Daemon character, who will be very different to Red in Faytes of the Kingdom...If you want help with a plot and development I'd be more than happy to help in anyway I can.

Posted by: Falgor the Half Demon Mar 15 2005, 06:50 PM
Ooh, this RPG stood out to me. I like. I want to make a charecter that isn't among the races you mentioned, izzat ok Wrath?

Name: Raiser Dresden
race: Terul (race of beings emplyed under Daemon control, origins unknown)
age: 23
height: 6'3"
weight: 210 lbs.
appearence: (literally)red hair, sapphire eyes, scar on his left cheek, slight build
weapon: Zel' Ren (hand and a half sword, green blade, emblem in handle shaped like a dragon), a small disc with thin blades, a bow and a quiver of arrows.
possesion: A dead rose
element: Dark
abilities: Mind read
special technique: Sral' Dun Kapor (Death Hawk)
history: Raiser's family was among those who served the elite soldiers of the Daemon army, and served them for generations. Raiser was no exception until one battle. During a campaign, he was mistaken for an enemy and a daemon struck him barely across the face, leaving a scar. It was then Raiser lost his temper and struck his ally, and anyone near him, friend or foe. After the battle was finished, he was sentenced to exile from the daemon kingdom for treason. With a heavy heart, he left what he knew and made his way to the human kingdom. There he took up arms as a mercenary, allocating funds in any way he could. He wears his armor from his days as a soldier, to keep hope one day he would fight for another army.

Posted by: Hell Wrath Mar 15 2005, 07:05 PM
That chachter is fine Falgor.... and yes it would be most appreciated if you helped me keyo.....and yes Repoman there are guns but only a few.

Ps. Falgor could you include what your special atack does and just so everyone knows unless your a mage tapping into your element is bieng able to fire a projectile or of you element and/or a small beam. You can also power up your weapon.

And one more thing falgor the disk with blades did you get that from AVP

Posted by: Falgor the Half Demon Mar 15 2005, 09:04 PM
No... God, why is it that I get ideas, then learn they were already taken? Either my luck is really sucking with the coincidences, or my mind is betraying me.

Sral' Dun Kapor is just basically Raiser using his trusty blade as an arrow! He takes careful aim, and 95% of the time he hits his target. The other 5% he hits somewhere else on the body.

Posted by: Hell Wrath Mar 15 2005, 09:20 PM
well if you explain your idea of the disk it actually might not be it....but right now im frying my brain thinking of plot.

Posted by: Hell Wrath Mar 15 2005, 09:58 PM
They have deen able to make special green houses for making food so insted of floating cities...let me rephraise as floating pieces of land with a city on it.

Caste system:descending(highest form is at bottom)
peasent:are farmers and servants
trader: keep stores running such as inns, weapon shop, and item shops
Angelic warrior: foot soldiers
Divinitys: holy mages
Arch angels: elite warriors
Savior: special ops elite (fiercest warrior)
Prophet: a low class leader (little power)
Hierarch: middle class leader (leads the army)
Greater Prophet: highest class leader. has complete control over everything in their kingdom.

Oppinion of races:
Most angels hate daemons but only because the Greater Prophet has proclaimed that they are evil and we are good. Some angels believe their is good in all living things and wish to prove this. Celestians think Terrain races are the nuetral subject. beleives that if they lead a bad life they will be reborn as a Terul until debts are paid and will become human once more. If they lead a good life they will be born as a Dervernie and serve in heavan (celestia).

The overall look on daemons are that they are evil (never turn your back on them), but it is not deserved they only act that way after centuries of prossecution and oppresion. Some daemons still have love in their heart but are unaware weather to show it or keep quiet. Most daemons are verocious and are known for talking on 7 human by themselves.
Their oppinion on humans is that they are all right except that they hold key positions for their use and this has begun the out break of war amongst their countries. Most daemons like the greedy buisness man only in it for money. (it is rummered that some men are funding daemons for war)

caste system:
peasent/hunter:hunts and farms food
trader/merchant: just like celestians with the exception for black smiths
daemon:foot soldier
Decimate ones: elite warriors
juggernauts: special breed of super strong daemons
Shadows:dark mages
Eraverte: special ops daemons
high gaurd: leaders of armies
adviser: advisers of the king
King:ruler of daemons

this is just stuff that would help out the story but i got to go bye

Posted by: Durial Mar 16 2005, 09:41 AM
Name: Durial Fatefist
race: Demonic Angel
age: Unknown
hieght: 10'
wieght: 300 lbs
appearence: Durial has two pairs of wings, one demonic, the other angelic, has long flowing silver hair, has two inch long fangs, spikes on his forearms and lower legs, black red eyes, and an inverted pentagram on one cheek and a normal pentagram on the other
weapon:you are limited to 3 unless you pm me about it: Tamashii Hikari (6' tall magic bastard sword) two Katana's one holy the other unholy
possesion:an item you cherish: a crystal knife that he wears around his neck on a necklace
element:what element you can use as magic (fire, ice, water, earth, wind, water, lightning, holy, dark, divine) all (if thats okay, if not just shadow magic)
abilities:any abilities i should know about. He can fly(obviously) and that is about it, and he is very manipulative
special technique:special attack: Judgement strike, Shadow assault, holy strike, unholy strike, final assault
history: Durial's past is a mystery even to himself. He was found at the entrance to the human city and raised as best as the humans could, other then that he has journeyed to find his past. The only clue he has to his herritage is the crystal knife that he wears around his neck

Posted by: Keyo Mar 16 2005, 12:10 PM
Name: Fefnir Ragnarok

Race: Half-Daemon

Height 6"7

Weight: 287lbs

Weapons: Hiko no Shibo (Flying Death - A thick metal ring with four feather shaped blades attached. It is worn on his right hand, with the blades pointing back along the arm. In a fight, one of the blades can spring forward to work like a blade. It can be thrown with all four blades in position, and the blades can be laucnched off as projectile weapons), whip, extending spear, bolas x 3, a good supply of gun powder and various herbs (used either for patching himself up, or poisoning)

Appearence: Shawn white hair, his left eye has a black daemon symbol tattooed around it, translating as 'Death', his eyes are pure blue, covering the whole sphere, with a white ring around the pupil, which is a deep blue, rather than black. He wears a tattered purpled cape, brown trousers and boots with a large brown belt and silver buckle, vaguely shaped like a panther's head, but with red eyes (the paint is worn and the buckle is badly scuffed.) He wears brown leather armour over a black shirt, with a faded black 'v' shape on the front of the armour. He has large leather shoulder pads (the V symbol on the right one) and he wears a large knuckle duster on his left hand (made from a thick leather with five brass studs), and a specially made glove on his right (for catching, wielding, and carrying the Hiko no Shibo).

Element: None. Though he does have command magic for using Daemon rune-technology.
Abilities: Trained in many Daemonic fighting styles, methods of assination, tracking. Also, being a Half- Daemon, he is stronger and faster than most humans, also possesing sharper senses.

Possesion: Erm. Well...he's really attached to the Hiko no Shibo.

History: Fefnir is the bastard child of a human lord and a female daemon. Fefnir has spent many years learning the way of Daemon combat. He managed to reach the rank Eraverte, before new laws banned those of non-pure blood from being at such rank. Since, he has left the Daemon kingdom and become a feared bounty hunter. He is one of only 28 beings who can wield the Hiko no Shibo.

Personality: A man who has come through a life of discrimination laughing. He is, at heart, a jolly person, but with a grim appreciation of his job. An efficiant killer he also enjoys singing, drinking (though he rarely gets drunk). A man of his word (as many people have unfortunatly discovered when he's said 'I'm going to kill you'.)

Posted by: Hell Wrath Mar 16 2005, 07:05 PM
Keyo... your character is fine, but Durial there are just a few things to change about yours.
1) Unfortunatly you cant have all elements... just pick 2.
2) My character was going to be a demonic angel.... and anyways your guy is like 10 ft tall. You could change it to a greater daemon or stay a half breed but be half daemon half Terul, which would make a strong daemon.

thats really all got to go.

Posted by: Falgor the Half Demon Mar 16 2005, 07:21 PM
Hey, since I made the Terulian race, mind I explain the suckers? I will anyways.

The Terul's origins as I said were unknown. They resemble elves in a way, with pointy ears, but shorter ears, and they live for long times. However, they are very proficient in the dark arts, and some of the gifted can talk to others using the Mind Touch ability. They are very leery of the Daemon King, since he employs them left and right for military work only, and word has it that some wish to abandon.

Posted by: Hell Wrath Mar 16 2005, 07:46 PM
alright i got a few more minutes.

Name:Zinn Arknaut
Age:94 (equivalent to a 17 year old human)
race: Half-Deamon (other half is uknown to him)
class: Sword fighter/ monk( fist fighter)
weapon: Hellwrath: a great sword carved from a diamond. The blade is incredibly sharp... how sharp.... sharp enough just to cut through your hand just by holding the blade. He also wears gloves that have ancient markings on them that amplify the damage of a normal punch.
possesion: a golden orb with ancient silver markings... twists and turns like a rubix cube only this is a shere.
element:divine (combines shadow and holy)
Apearence: Zinn Has brown spiked hair that is combed back and emerald green eyes. He also has horns that are about 4 inches long that are going the same way his hair is. (almost impossible to see unless really close) He wears brown boots with black baggy pants. He has a white long sleeved shirt with a black vest over it. Wears his gloves and a robe (somtimes). He sword hangs down at his side. He mostly looks human and wonders why he dosent have wings.
ability: when his emotions run high he will transform into hi full daemonic form. When he does this his wings sprout and his horns grow to 8 inches, his body will also turn a kind of red orange color, this includes his clothes. He then is faster stronger and can fly.
special attack: screaming fist, (causes his fist to deal a sonic burst of damage) and the divine slash (causes a creasent shaped attack that deals non elemental damage)

history: Zinn had a hard time growing up. He was banished from the daemon kingdom when he was born... they called him an abomination. He wandered the deserts of Soalanne until he met an old man, who became a father figure. his name was Brom. Brom trained zinn in the arts of sword fighting and martial arts. Brom died after 50 years of training with Zinn. Zinn did not know what to do so he went to put his talents to work as a gaurd but no one would accept protection from a daemon.After that he went to live in the rebal town called Esquare were he became a full fledged mercenary. He now spends his time in the local bar raising money from fights and his mercenary job. He senses that war is coming.

Also i forgot Durial could you only have one or two special attacks.

Posted by: CrimsonBlood Mar 17 2005, 04:47 AM
Posting my character… yay! If I don't have everything right... please, please tell me! Thanks!

Name: Raika
Race: Celestial
Age: 18
Height: 5’7
Weight: 60kgs (I don't know how to convert it)

Appearance: Humanoid, symmetrical with black leather wings (thanks dad), long black hair and pitch black eyes. Think… dark. I’ll post a picture later.

Weapon: A black enchanted bow and a long thin blade.

Possession: The bow – given to me by my father.

Element: Water and Air – inexpertly only. I have a lot to learn about control over it.

Abilities: I understand Technology up to a certain degree, but it’s more than the normal person would, and I can fly very fast.

Special technique: Frozen Shield – a shield that harnesses the power of ice crystals in the same formation as a diamond, giving it almost impenetrable strength. It depletes energy levels quite fast (therefore can only be used for a short while, 2min max) and can be powered by anyone touching it, but I need to form it.

History: My mother was an archangel, therefore I am quite an influential person as well. Had a decent upbringing, education, the works. My father (half-celestial, half deamon) taught me more, resulting in me turning out like a crossbreed would. Weird. The dark colouring of Daemons was passed down to me from him as well – explaining my dark features. My parents raised me until I was 12, then they were killed in an accident. I was interchanged between and trained by grandparents after that. I socialize with other races a lot… My grandparents don’t like that…

Um... that's it for now...

Posted by: Hell Wrath Mar 17 2005, 07:34 AM
yes that is fine crimson blood, just give more to your appearence and like what your character is waering

Posted by: Keyo Mar 17 2005, 11:01 AM
Hmph...alot of mixed blood in this RP...I just went with it so as not to make Fefnir too powerful.

Oh, for the record. The Hiko no Shibo is a piece of rune-technology, hence why few people can use one. Essentially, if you can't use the right rune magic, it's not much use to you.

Posted by: Hell Wrath Mar 17 2005, 11:23 AM
Well i made this Rp so i could be a half breed every one else went with it...... we need some full blooded people of other races.

Posted by: Falgor the Half Demon Mar 18 2005, 03:40 PM
Uh... Hell Wrath? Do you read the book Eragon? That was no coincidence, you freaking used that old guy from the book. I know it, don't lie to me.

Posted by: chnkymnky Mar 18 2005, 06:46 PM
please dont get all upity in this story Hell wrath happens to be one of my closest friends and goes to school with me. So what if he used the old man from the book alot of the stuff im gonna do in this story are gonna be from Eragon and the movie Earthsea. In both you have to know the true name of something to use its power. So lets all remain calm. cool.gif cool.gif

Posted by: Hell Wrath Mar 18 2005, 07:22 PM
yes Falgor you caught me i did read the book eragon, in fact its my favorite book..... and yes i did use that name but not his personality. Later tonight i will start the story it will be in (story) The 4th kingdom. Ok

Posted by: chnkymnky Mar 18 2005, 08:21 PM
hey Wrath did you say it was ok for me to have my fire fox pet.

oh and i just noticed
Nice signature constantine

Posted by: Hell Wrath Mar 18 2005, 08:47 PM
oh yeah.... im sorry, sure you can all of you guys can have pets if you want. I have a ferret named Neeco.
I also changed the " bad guy's" name, it is now Ragaze (Ray-gah-zee). Ill be posting till like 2:00 central time

Posted by: chnkymnky Mar 18 2005, 08:54 PM
wow ragaze were'ed you get a name like that. it sounds like something i would think of in some stupid class like world history while talking to this kid Christopher trying to make some rpg on some forum site.

Posted by: Hell Wrath Mar 18 2005, 09:03 PM
That kid isnt just some kid.... its a kid with a creative and intellectual mind.
chnky make your character again because the last one needs a history, more on appearence, and more info. (just so you know a 17 year old elve is like 5 years old in human years) sleep.gif

Posted by: chnkymnky Mar 18 2005, 09:05 PM
ok i will and hey wratheyboy please log on to yahoo messenger

Posted by: Hell Wrath Mar 19 2005, 12:03 AM
chnky mnky that character is crap i asked you to change the history and all you do is add a sentence i need more info. There is no way your father had a vision of this guy coming to power and saying son go to this place a beat this guy and join these people. I also said to take out how you meet us but you didn't. You cant come up with these things on your own. GOSH. mad.gif mad.gif mad.gif mad.gif mad.gif mad.gif

Posted by: chnkymnky Mar 19 2005, 10:34 AM
yeah and i told you id do it tommorow well today now. Man i just got up it will be a second just calm down.

Posted by: Hell Wrath Mar 19 2005, 11:07 AM
Thats a little better but the appearence description still sucks.... are you telling me that you fight in a robe and in a hat need more..... use the grey stuff between your ears.

Posted by: chnkymnky Mar 19 2005, 11:40 AM
wrath its 12:00 if your on go to yahoo

Posted by: Keyo Mar 19 2005, 04:53 PM
Please don't use the forum's as a message board, it's bad Netiquitte...


F*** did I just say Netiquitte?

Posted by: Hell Wrath Mar 19 2005, 09:43 PM
yes ypu did keyo... and your right. chnky if you dont start listening to what i say you cant be in this forum.
also about characters there has been a lot of mixed blood and i find this very hard to believe in a world were daemons hate celestians so can i please tell you to do this.

races in story
half daemon-half celestian: 1 ( me)
Daemons: 1-2
Celestians: 1 (Crimsonblood)
other half breeds half breeds: 2 (Durial, Keyo )
Humans and other races: not limited (chnky, falgor)

so could some of you change things if needed.
Also if you guys have anything you dont want players to know or special ideas pm me about it so i can fit it in the story.

Posted by: Keyo Mar 20 2005, 06:19 AM
Y'know, I'm really glad to see alot of people now adopting the traditional spelling of Daemon.

Maybe I can inspire you all to spell Magick the right way as well one day happy.gif

Posted by: Falgor the Half Demon Mar 20 2005, 10:20 AM
Hellz no Keyo, (Hey, that rhymed) You can get me to say DAEMON but not how you spelled Magic. So... Exactly when does this thing launch?

Posted by: chnkymnky Mar 20 2005, 01:18 PM
ok fine calm down heres number three.

fine heres number two.

Race:full elf
Origin:SciRe in the rebel lands
Possession:Amulet of power
Pet:Fire fox
Weapon:Magically ionhanced duel katana's
Apperance: Athelatic, not very mature looking, Still just a kid. Long brown hair. Red robe and hat. Dark green eyes. Scar cut diagonaly across face (Like Squall's in FF8)
Class:Red mage
Elements: Fire and Wind
Special Ability: Nature Speech (Ability to talk with most Animals)

History: Grew up in the protected lands of SciRe honing his mage skills. Is beleived to be the legendary red mage fortold by legend. Has unimaginable power but knows not how to use it proparly. Was told to leave home after setting his house on fire. Met up with a peculior fox in the Bacea Oiusy forest that surrounds his home. Has been friends with the fox ever since. Left the rebel lands in search of the scroll of power that will enable him to unlock the mysteries behind his Amulet.

Posted by: Buugipopuu Mar 20 2005, 01:43 PM
QUOTE (Keyo @ Mar 20 2005, 01:19 PM)
Maybe I can inspire you all to spell Magick the right way as well one day happy.gif

*Smacks Keyo over the head with Complete Oxford English Dictionary*

'Magick' is never the correct spelling of 'Magic' under any circumstance, neither is any other variant, especially ones which contain the letters 'y', 'j', and/or 'q'.

Posted by: Keyo Mar 20 2005, 04:20 PM
*Smacks Buugipopuu with the original edition of the Dictionary*

Fat chance!

Some American once dummed down the English language, this included removing the 'k' from magic. This was one of several words that infected the real English language and caused corruption.

You Americans and your lazy spelling...hah!

Posted by: Hell Wrath Mar 20 2005, 09:29 PM
so keyo im guessing your not american.... FOR THE LAST DAMN TIME CHNKY WHAT KINDA CLOTHES IS YOUR CHARACTER WEARING.... THERES NO WAY HE IS WEARING JUST A ROBE AND A HAT........sorry about that i lose my temper some time (glares evily at chnky mnky). The story will start very soon.

ps. how are your swords inhanced.... chnky you gotta add more take a look at keyos his is a fine example of a character sheet.

Posted by: chnkymnky Mar 20 2005, 10:45 PM
ok well you could have told me that.

Instead of typing everything again im just putting it on here.

Ground length red robe with red dragonhide armour underneath. Long red riding boots. And a large Red mage hat (like the one from final fantasy) with a white feather in it.

my swords can become engulfed in flame.

Posted by: Keyo Mar 21 2005, 03:28 AM
No, I'm not American. I'm Scottish. Though the American corruption of the English Language does interest me (Not that it wasn't corrupted already, it's formed from bits of German and French)

OH,and thanks for complimenting my char sheet.

Posted by: Hell Wrath Mar 21 2005, 12:16 PM
No problem keyo. I would like to announce one thing....... (drum roll) .......................... It has begun. The story is now online just click

Tell me guys what you think.

Posted by: Keyo Mar 21 2005, 03:33 PM
Not too bad.

Posted by: Hell Wrath Mar 21 2005, 08:46 PM
Thank you keyo....... Alright people start posting in the story.

The mech golems will be called Khaz (Kah-zz)
sand wraiths are sand wraiths
new creature i came up with the Dark Fang Ogre (will be in story shortly)

Posted by: Buugipopuu Mar 22 2005, 01:13 AM
@Keyo: I think you are confusing me with those bloody colonials on the other side of the Atlantic, unless Blair handed over the sovereignty of Harborne without telling anyone.

You have a copy of the original Oxford English Dictionary? If I were you I'd be more careful with it; it is almost eighty years old, and far too valuable to be used as a mêlée weapon.

Aleister Crowley coined the term "Magick" in the late nineteenth century to distinguish between his own crackpot philosophies and stage magic. It's hardly an age-old tradition. Incidentally, I believe the word you are looking for is "dumbed", unless this American you speak of really selected land in his own name but really in the interest of someone else who is not entitled to do so. I think you are imagining this covert infiltration of the Oxford University Press by Americanism-wielding Spelling Ninja.

Posted by: God_of_Death Mar 22 2005, 02:01 AM
Name: Aarn Thrahspar
Race: Celestial
Age: 764 years, but he doesn't look it
Height: 5' 11"
Weight: 196lbs
Appearance: A helmet that covers all of his head but his mouth, that has a rounded point at the top, near the back (which barely goes an inch above the top of his head) and vertical slits running across the visor, but even then, you can't see his eyes. He has a breastplate, backplate (which has two slits in it so he can extend his wings while in armor) and two shoulder blades that extend about 6 inches past his shoulder and arm plates that go down from the top of the shoulder, articulated at the elbow so he can move it, and to the wrist, where he wears two gauntlets that cover the top of his hand, the bottom covered in chain mail. His breastplate has two flaps of plate that hang down over the top half of each thigh. The rest of the leg is protected by plates running down his thighm stio at his knee where a kneeplate is, the a shin plates going down and stopping at the top of his foot. They extend into a flap that is hinged and guards the heel. To top all of this off, he wears a white cape (that has two holes for his wings to fit through), clasped under his shoulder blades, that has a gray lining on the inside.
Weapon: Flamberge made from a stellite alloy with a diamond edge
Possesion: A small necklace that has three small metal feathers on it
Element: Air
Abilities: Seeing unseen (which includes the invisible, and things in the dark) and flight with wings because he is angelic.
Special Technique: Ryougakaze. He uses the wind to push him fast enough to make a sphere around the target, then quickly stops, lunges, grabs, stabs, then throws. This is very draining to him, so he uses it as a last resort.
History: Aarn came from a high-class family. His father was an Archangel, so when he wasn't out in war, he would teach Aarn, his only son, how to fight and defend himself. When Aarn was about 13 or 14 years old, his father was killed in a war against the tyrannical Daemons. This lit the fire of hatred in Aarn's heart. Aarn grew cold and unforgiving to those outside his family. He never left his own home before putting his weapon, a small broadsword, firmly on his back and a small necklace, containing three, small metal feathers on it, around his neck. It was the last thing he had of his father.

Posted by: Keyo Mar 22 2005, 07:54 AM
Ah. Okay. Sorry Buu.

Posted by: Hell Wrath Mar 22 2005, 10:23 AM
not bad god of death, the only really problem is the seeing the unseen. you could see in the dark but not as far as you would in light and it is alright that you can see invisible things.

Posted by: Buugipopuu Mar 22 2005, 11:28 AM
QUOTE (Keyo @ Mar 22 2005, 02:54 PM)
Ah. Okay. Sorry Buu.

Don't worry, I can't blaim you for working with incomplete information.

Posted by: God_of_Death Mar 22 2005, 12:59 PM
QUOTE (Hell Wrath @ Mar 22 2005, 10:23 AM)
not bad god of death, the only really problem is the seeing the unseen. you could see in the dark but not as far as you would in light and it is alright that you can see invisible things.

Well, yeah, that's kind of a given....I'll be more specific...hrm..he can see 1/3 less distance than in light.

Posted by: Hell Wrath Mar 22 2005, 01:05 PM
alright that works.... you can post if you want to now

Posted by: CrimsonBlood Mar 23 2005, 12:01 AM
Okay... thanx for the history lesson! It's weird how some things pop up... like that saved by the bell story the other day...

Anyway, I'll try to post today, may the web browser work!

Posted by: Hell Wrath Mar 23 2005, 07:15 PM
ok well its good to have you back...... someone else post in the story

Posted by: CrimsonBlood Mar 24 2005, 12:02 AM
I feel so... left out! No Internet this vacation for me... Looks like I won't be able to post for two weeks guys...

Maybe I'll visit an internet cafe.

Posted by: Hell Wrath Mar 25 2005, 08:09 PM
its good to have you back... people start posting.

Posted by: Hell Wrath Mar 25 2005, 08:10 PM
its good to have you back... people start posting.

Posted by: THE REPOMAN Mar 26 2005, 04:40 PM
ummmmmm hell wrath you posted the same thing a minute a part???

hey and by the way can i be i new race like say half dragon and half human???

plzzzz biggrin.gif biggrin.gif biggrin.gif

Posted by: THE REPOMAN Mar 26 2005, 05:23 PM
my guy

name: dirg bladewing

race: half dragon and half human

class: wyvern rider( would be called dragon rider but wyvern sounds cooler)

items: legion(of course) 2 wyvern rider lances, spell caster( outlaw star esc hand gun, fires spell shells.)

pets: Rorix( dragon a steed and fighting companion)

elements: fire and drakness

special attacks: totetengruze( massive blast fired from the spell caster) cant think of name for other attack, the attack is a limited range micro black hole???

apperance: large beast of a man. dragonic features( curved sharp teeth, slightly scaly skin, small but still powerfull claws, wings only appear when he loses all control and goes through a transformation) other whise a farirly good look man, whering full suit of mithral. large sword strapped across back.

history: being a half dragon dirge has all ways been alone. never beiging accepted by neather dragon( besides Rorix) or by human, he was forced to travel as a mecanary to the higest bidder in hope of doing something so great he would have to be accepted by both human and dragon alike.

let me know if this is ok???

Posted by: Hell Wrath Mar 28 2005, 07:05 AM
its ok except for......... how big is your dragon.... how big is the totetengruze..... and the only real problem is how to put in the micro black hole
other than that and its fine

Posted by: THE REPOMAN Mar 28 2005, 08:38 AM
well i would have to say that the dragon is adult sized or at least large enuff to carry me and my stuff. hell wrath the totetengruze is as big as it is in the game unless that is to big???

the black hole i was thinking i would launch it away from me and the group then it would hit near or around the enemy or enemys and then expand with in its limited range.

Posted by: Hell Wrath Mar 28 2005, 11:12 AM
you still didnt awnser how big the black whole is.

Posted by: God_of_Death Mar 29 2005, 12:08 AM
Q: "Knight Sword"? There are lots of kinds of knight swords. Longsword, great sword, Scottish claymore, two handed sword, broadsword, short sword.

Q: I thought we said no guns, didn't we?

Q: long? 3 inches, 5 inches, a foot...please be more specific

Q: Doesn't your technique seem a bit godmodding? "Omigosh! A giant, otherwise invincible thing that will destroy the world!" "Not with MY ability!" FWOOM! "Ugh..too tired...someone carry me to safety..." *passes out*

Q: Hrmmm...Others may not agree, but can we be a little more original? There's always a parent dying. It's getting too cliche. Yes, I know, my character's dad died, but I have a reason for it being Daemons, and it helps my character's personality.

Q: Very convenient Daemons came while he was gone, no?

Posted by: THE REPOMAN Mar 29 2005, 09:41 AM
i am scratching thge whole black whole thing. its to strong sad.gif

Posted by: Lt. Sparks Mar 29 2005, 10:47 PM
Sorry I'll change some things and be more detailed. Also there are guns he said just one or two people. And i didn't have time to right "I can get rid of the gun if you prefur one guy having a gun." I didn't mean for the technique to be godly i just kinda put die. So heres my new one.

Name:Hakkai genjo

race: Human

age: 35



appearence: He has sapphire eyes and black hair that hangs over but just above his eyes. He wears brown pants, a white shirt, and a black trench coat. (keeps most of his tools in it and weapons.)

weapon:A broad sword. (He made himself), A stantard bow with arrows, And a six inch dagger. (yes he made it)

possesion:nothing really he's to attached to.

element:Fire(manly uses it for forging or repareing weapons)

abilities:He can fix practicly any kinda mechanical device.

special technique:Hell fire: It engulfs his enemey in flames. (drains a lot of his strength so he doesn't use unless its necessary)

Personality:He is a nice guy but can be pretty serous. He gets excited when he see's a peice of new technology and just has to mess with it and se how it works.

history:He was born in a small town way outside of Alexander. He lived with his father, who was a great blacksmith, His mother was killed by Daemons. At the age of 9 his father noticed he was a bright lad. He excelled in school and really like to take things apart and fix them up better. At age 16 his dad taught him the magic element of fire because he would need in for being a blacksmith, since it was the family business. Of course he didn't want to be a black smith even though he liked making things and fixing them. He wanted to be a Daemon slayer because the death of his mother. 2 years later of being a blacksmith Hakkai decided to persue his dream of being a daemon slayer. He left his town to the kingdom of Alexander. There he learned to fight. He excelled well in fighting. 3 years later he was completed his training. He decide to say good bye to his father before he started his dream, so he went back to his town. When he got there he found out his dad had died from sickness. Hakkai sadly left the town since there was nothing left for him there. He travels the land makeing a living as a mercenary/bounty/blacksmith from time to time.

Hope this is better and sorry the history isn't that great. I just couldn't think of anything.

Posted by: God_of_Death Mar 31 2005, 12:23 AM
It is better. I like it. History is good. I don't know about the GM, but I approve it.

Posted by: Hell Wrath Mar 31 2005, 07:53 AM
i approve........ biggrin.gif biggrin.gif biggrin.gif

Posted by: THE REPOMAN Mar 31 2005, 09:40 AM
2 thumbs WAY up ninjanatsD.gif ph34r.gif ninjanatsD.gif

Posted by: chnkymnky Mar 31 2005, 03:49 PM
Hey guys im making a comic out of this story and as soon as i can get it online i will tell you the website but untill then i will give you guys posts on how its coming

Posted by: Lt. Sparks Mar 31 2005, 06:11 PM
Thank you, and thats cool that your making a comic.

Posted by: God_of_Death Mar 31 2005, 06:48 PM
QUOTE (chnkymnky @ Mar 31 2005, 03:49 PM)
Hey guys im making a comic out of this story and as soon as i can get it online i will tell you the website but untill then i will give you guys posts on how its coming

That's cool, thanks.

Posted by: Lt. Sparks Apr 1 2005, 11:49 PM
So were going to the elf town but we got to cross a desert.........Sounds great.

Posted by: chnkymnky Apr 2 2005, 09:27 AM
hey falgor what does your racelook like exactly are they human or something else

Posted by: Camala Apr 3 2005, 08:26 PM
Greetings All. I was just wondering if there was still time for me to join in? I realize you started posting but if I can join I can probabuly come up with a way to enter lol. Just lemme know if not is ok Ill wait. Thanks happy.gif

Posted by: THE REPOMAN Apr 4 2005, 09:01 AM
yea desert combat biggrin.gif

Posted by: Lt. Sparks Apr 4 2005, 08:56 PM
I'm sure you can join But its not up to me.

Posted by: God_of_Death Apr 4 2005, 09:28 PM
Hrmm...isn't Hell Wrath the GM? How often has he been on? 'Bout a week ago..(if he's posted in the Story, I haven't been keeping track of that)

Anyway...I wonder...We haven't gotten TOO in depth to the story, nor are we in a battle right now. I say we let him join. Let's take a vote.

Yes 1

(next person will put "Yes 2", then the next, "Yes 3" and so forth.)

Posted by: Hell Wrath Apr 5 2005, 06:24 AM
i have been posting Aarn.... its just that my computer is dead for a limited time and can only post at school. I say yes that you can all you have to do is make a character............. biggrin.gif

Posted by: THE REPOMAN Apr 5 2005, 07:31 AM
yes 2 biggrin.gif

Posted by: chnkymnky Apr 5 2005, 02:45 PM
yes 3. come Camala join us

oh and guys how do you like my new signature.

Posted by: Lt. Sparks Apr 5 2005, 08:10 PM
My only expression is puzzlement

Posted by: Hell Wrath Apr 6 2005, 07:03 AM
i think its kinda stupid

Posted by: DarkCrow Apr 8 2005, 12:21 PM
I'm not in this RPG, but I carry a message from CrimsonBlood...

"I will post as soon as I have read the story! Thanx!"

Er... that's it folks!

Posted by: Camala Apr 10 2005, 12:16 AM
Thank you very much. I will put up a character profile tomorrow when I get home. And Im sure I can come up with a clever way to step in. Thanks everyone I cant wait to join the party happy.gif

Posted by: Hell Wrath Apr 10 2005, 08:30 PM
yeah sure no problem... its great to have u in the story.

Posted by: Camala Apr 10 2005, 09:14 PM
Ok now that I am home in good ol Jersey I can start joining in the fun.

Name: Camala Kunar

Race: Elf

Age: 22 years old in human ears (i dont know what that would be in elvian)

Height: 5'4"

Weight: 120lbs

Appearance: Camala is very trim with blonde hair that goes to her shoulders. SHe isnt very tall or big but can definetely carry her own in a fight since she was trained in the art of battling. She knows how to use her size against her enemies which oftens gives her an advantage. She has piercing blue eyes and is considered good looking in her own race. Has the pointy ears.
Camala wears a Black and red body suit with a picture of a phoenix on her back depicting what kingdom she comes from. Over that she generally wears a tank top and a skirt that goes all the way down but has slits up the side to allow her to ride freely. She has body armour that she generally leaves attachted to her saddle since she generally chooses to fight without the restrictions.

Weapon: The bow and arrow for long distance and a thin silver sword (was a gift)

Possession: Her horse- a large black stallion. She found him as a foal and has raised and trained him. His lineage is unknown but he is considered to be one of the finest from her kingdom.
Her Silver-handcrafted sword- its light and easy to use but very sharp and able to cut through small openings in armour that the larger metal ones might not be able to get to. Was a gift when she completed her training.

Elemental: Fire

Abilities: Is a skilled fighter and although has some natural magick ability to help create distractions.

Special technique:No special techniques right now.

History: Camala was born of a peasant class family. When she was an infant her mother and father were killed by a rade of the Daemons. Her mother before dieing strapped her onto a horse and it galloped Camala to saftely saving her from death. Camala was found by an Elvian noblewoman and taken pity on. She was raised bythe Lady Guena and her father Lord Hueran as their daughter. As Camala grew she showed great interest in the art of battle so her father trained her as a warrior. When she was 14 she was sent to live with another Elvian Lord Peteron and therefore trained as a full warrior. She showed great aptitude in sword and bow and arrow.

Although Camala is grateful to her parents, she holds a great grudge against the Daemons for the murder of her family, although she doesnt necessarily like the Celestials either, she is often haunted by memories of the rade in her dreams.
Although she doesnt mean to she oftens speaks before she thinks which has gotten her in plenty of trouble growing up.
Although generally discredit her for her size and looks, Camala is very capable at battle.

*I hope this is ok.*

Posted by: chnkymnky Apr 11 2005, 09:25 AM
yay another elf

Aramil walks over to Camala hey pretty lady

Posted by: Hell Wrath Apr 11 2005, 08:29 PM
that works.... you can join.

::walks over to chnky and swats him in the head:;

Posted by: Camala Apr 11 2005, 09:10 PM
Since I cant edit I wanted to add a few things onto my profile. First my horse's name it Tayte.

Also I thought of two special attack techniques and since I havent posted yet I figured it should be ok to add this into my profile.
One-Arrows of Fire -when the arrows hit something they burst into flames.
Second-Blade of Combustion. When my sword sinks into something or someone it can cause the person or thing to explode inside and therefore combust.

Also in order to arrive Im thinking of having the Lord I represent having some sort of psychic ability. He wont have a piece in this story but its going to explain how I found you guys happy.gif Ok thats it for real this time happy.gif lol

Posted by: chnkymnky Apr 12 2005, 07:04 AM
ohh the preety elf lady is ignoring me this makes me very sad sad.gif sad.gif

ok are we gonna go to the desert some time or just wait here for a while.

Posted by: Lt. Sparks Apr 12 2005, 07:03 PM
Yeah, when are we going to the desert.

*walks over to chnky and smacks him on the head.*

Posted by: Camala Apr 12 2005, 07:24 PM
OMG Im so sorry Chunky!! I didnt mean to seem like I was ignoring you. My appologizes happy.gif
Of course what does one say "Hey Pretty Lady" lol
Thank you for the compliment though happy.gif

Posted by: chnkymnky Apr 13 2005, 06:54 AM
yay acknowldgement from elf lady.

ok hey Wrath are we leaving soon

Posted by: THE REPOMAN Apr 13 2005, 07:32 AM
enuff talk more fighting

*walks over to chnkymnky and swats him over the back of the head* ninjanatsD.gif

Posted by: chnkymnky Apr 13 2005, 07:37 AM
Chnky runs around and smacks everyone that In Fact had just smacked him

so Camala i see your also a fellow flame user. Fire is fun untill you get burned.

chnky would like it to be known that he in fact has just been smacked

Posted by: Camala Apr 13 2005, 10:42 PM
Chnky your making me blush LMAO
And Repo, I started us off so if ya wanna fight its all open for ya lol

*Stretches a little* "its been three weeks since I killed me a man. And already I got the itch" (Major Pain) LOL

Posted by: Hell Wrath Apr 14 2005, 06:41 AM
ohhhhhhhhhhh...... a duel....... high noon. in a battle where there can be no winner......... who will win.....

Posted by: THE REPOMAN Apr 14 2005, 08:43 AM
ohhhh its on and your are going down. ph34r.gif me

ohhh and by the way the person who just smacked the people who smacked the person who had been smacked previously has just been smacked.

Posted by: Bobbin Apr 14 2005, 12:03 PM
Hmm....nice idea here...any chance of joining? I was thinking of one of your Celestials, nothing too fancy. Of course, it may be too late, but hey, no harm in asking. Let me know, eh.

Posted by: chnkymnky Apr 14 2005, 02:30 PM
chnky walks over and smiles at camala. Our characters should be the closest since were both elfs.

(Repo smacks chnky again)

Not that way repo just like as friends.

By the way i have rough drafts for Zinn and Dirge's characters and they will be on possiable by tommorow morning for you to loook at and give feedback.

here is the site

Posted by: THE REPOMAN Apr 14 2005, 02:39 PM
well bobbin you need a guy first

but i think you should be let in because of the cool grr avatar


Posted by: Bobbin Apr 14 2005, 09:11 PM
Well thanks...I'll have a char sheet up tomarrow...I gotta go to work now. Night shift sucks. Figured I'd ask before giving youall that to read, though, so definatly let me know what your concensus is on letting me in.

Posted by: Hell Wrath Apr 15 2005, 06:58 AM
its ok that you join but ...... could you have another race instead but if you cant think of one its ok to be a celestian..... we already have a celestian.

Posted by: Bobbin Apr 15 2005, 07:06 AM
Ok, I'll work up a Human, since there seems to be a shortage of those, and read over the story again to make sure I'm up to date on everything. I'll post the char later.

Posted by: chnkymnky Apr 15 2005, 09:55 AM
dont go to comic link i have i will need to make a new webpage because angelfire is not working it will be monday or tuesday before the pics are up. sorry

Posted by: Camala Apr 15 2005, 04:02 PM
Chnky if nothing else you do wonders for my ego lmaoooo
I can give you sketch of my character if you want one. Ill see about borrowing my friends scanner.

Bobbin its not my decision but I have no problems with you joining in happy.gif Welcome to the fun!!

Posted by: Lt. Sparks Apr 15 2005, 08:13 PM
Hey long time no post. So first let me attend to bizzness.
*walks over and smacks chnky in the head.*
Don't take it personal chnky its just that everyone else was doing it and i didn't want to be different.

Oh yeah Bobbin AWSOME AVATAR. I LOVE THAT SHOW. GIR RULES. biggrin.gif

Posted by: Camala Apr 15 2005, 10:01 PM
Alright am I the only chick in this game? Where is my female back up?!?! lol.
Seriously Im the only girl in guys need to change your socks or something LMAO

Posted by: chnkymnky Apr 16 2005, 11:42 AM
Camala a sketch would be great just send it to my email at 07jerrig@mail,

you are the only girl yet not the only elf.

Winks at Camala.
*Smacks self in head* (I felt left out)

Posted by: THE REPOMAN Apr 16 2005, 02:49 PM
grrrrr rules allllllllll

smacks chnky out of boredum

Posted by: Lt. Sparks Apr 17 2005, 07:17 PM
*Kicks chnky*

Sorry this time i felt like being different.

Posted by: Camala Apr 17 2005, 07:19 PM
ya know if ya'll beat chnky while you were posting we could get back to battling someone or something LMAO

So here's the deal, no more kicking or smacking chnky unless its in the forum. Keep it moving that way. *giggling*

Posted by: Lt. Sparks Apr 17 2005, 07:28 PM
AWWWW!!! alright.

Posted by: THE REPOMAN Apr 18 2005, 08:37 AM
but where is the fun in that?!?!?!?

Posted by: chnkymnky Apr 18 2005, 10:48 AM
chnky runs and hides behind the all powerfull ,And beautiful, Camala. "Thank you Camala"

El importante conqistador stop it is I El loco senior.

Posted by: God_of_Death Apr 18 2005, 11:06 AM
Hey, uh, Chnky, you got something on your nose. It's kind of brown.

Im the only girl in guys need to change your socks or something

I don't get it.....Does anyone else?

Posted by: chnkymnky Apr 18 2005, 12:36 PM
i get it

The new site for the comic is

Posted by: THE REPOMAN Apr 18 2005, 12:41 PM
i think i get it

and by the way check out the repoblog on chnkys web site its the coolest of them all


Posted by: Camala Apr 18 2005, 03:07 PM
OMG you guys are too funny!! I swear all I need to do is read this forum after a hard days work and I already feel better happy.gif

FYI...I have no clue what we're hunting. I just wanted to start something so no one would get bored and drop out. So feel free to input any enemy ya'll want. I honestly had no other thought then hey lets do something fun lol.

*pats Chnky on the head* is ok I'll protect you from the big bad guys happy.gif
*goes to the store buys 10 clean pairs of socks and starts passing them out to everyone* there ya go lmao!!!

Posted by: Lt. Sparks Apr 18 2005, 08:15 PM
*Takes socks and looks at Camala*

My only expresion is puzzlement

*Turns attention to Chnky and makes "im going to kill you" Hand gestures.

Posted by: CrimsonBlood Apr 18 2005, 11:43 PM
Uhm... I joined this forum a looooong time ago, but since then have not had a chance to post. Is it ok if I still play? I know I missed a lot of the story, but I don't get a lot of chance to post...

Posted by: chnkymnky Apr 19 2005, 06:56 AM
Thank you Camala

Yay protection from big bad guys buy sexy elf lady... Hey maybe they'll be blinded by her intense elven beauty. MUHAHAHAHAHAHA

Posted by: THE REPOMAN Apr 19 2005, 07:34 AM
ok i see your sexy elf blinding attack and counter with a pair of cheap sun glasses.

i also put a whole bunch of small rocks in the sock, knot it off and star swing it like a mace


Posted by: chnkymnky Apr 19 2005, 09:56 AM

Camala quick use your sexy charm.

Posted by: Lt. Sparks Apr 19 2005, 06:57 PM
Will both you stop or will..... can't look away. Camala's power is to great.

No must fight it.

Posted by: Camala Apr 19 2005, 07:34 PM
Gives the all powerful "pleading blue eyes" stare. (it's like the puppydog look but with blue eyes lmao*

*Watches Repo and Lt get weak under the look*
You dont wanna hurt lil ol me righttttt...put down the mace....lmao

Posted by: THE REPOMAN Apr 20 2005, 08:46 AM
muahahahahahahahahahahah your puppy dog look is mighty but my pair of cheapos are mightier still( cheapos are slang for cheap sunglass)

Posted by: Lt. Sparks Apr 20 2005, 08:59 PM
Ah you can't hurt her i mean look. Is that a face you really want to hurt. I mean come on look at those eyes there just so adorable. lol

Posted by: Camala Apr 20 2005, 09:38 PM

You guys are too funny!!!!

Yeah i know im cute happy.gif

Posted by: THE REPOMAN Apr 21 2005, 07:15 AM
your words are very wise sparks so i will hurt your instaed.

repo woops the heck out of sparks with his +1 mace of arse kicking.

40u w1ll @ll f3@r m3 muahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

Posted by: chnkymnky Apr 21 2005, 08:34 AM
Chnky grabs repo's cheapos and smashes them to bits

Camala quick blind him now

Posted by: Hell Wrath Apr 22 2005, 06:56 AM
BOOM.......... chnky: what was that......... BOOM Repo: Omg its him. BOOM.... Camala: what are you people talking about.



cHNKY AND REPO SIMULTANIOUSLY BOW AND WORSHIP: were not worthy were not worthy

Posted by: THE REPOMAN Apr 22 2005, 08:42 AM
repo puts on a new pair of cheapos and tossis a pair to sparks

hey these should protect us from camalas and hell wraiths power

hell: hey you cant do that

repo: you sorley under estamate the power of a pair of cheap sunglasses

Posted by: Lt. Sparks Apr 24 2005, 08:07 PM
Thanks repo.

*Turns to Hell*

Well lets see if the mighty GM can beat this.

*Pulls out walkie Talkie*
Come in, sniper Kitty i repeat come in, Sniper kitty. I give you orders to Kill GM.

*In the distance a Kitty Hears the comands and cocks his sniper rifle. It takes am at Hells head.*

Feel the wrath of SNIPER KITTY!!!!!!!!!!!

If you want to see a picture of the mighty sniper kitty go to google and type sniper kitty in the search bar. then serch it under images

Posted by: Camala Apr 24 2005, 09:30 PM
Hey Wrath hun. I was just wondering where you wanted to go with this.
I just want to know in order to help tailor my characters actions with your story ideas. I mean are we suppose to be going somewhere, killing someone.
Need direction and yes I can ask for directions cause Im a woman lmao!!

Im just joshing you guys no worries lol.

Posted by: Hell Wrath Apr 25 2005, 06:35 AM
well we are supposed to be going to the desert of Soleum which is once we get out of the forest and then going to aramils elven forest...... hold on a sec........... Pfffft.... using the powers of a gm hell has tellaported sniper kitty into his arms....... he takes the gun and beats sparks with it while hell pets the kitty.

Posted by: THE REPOMAN Apr 25 2005, 07:29 AM
yea sniper kitty has been defeated cool.gif

Posted by: chnkymnky Apr 25 2005, 09:18 AM
Chnky gets up and kills sniper kitty while he has the chance.

Finally sniper kitty's evil reign is over now Camala lets run while we still got the chan....

suddenly a grapopling hook comes out of nowhere and grabs chnky what wait this isn't right nooooooooooooo he yells being pulled between deminsions.

Posted by: chnkymnky Apr 25 2005, 12:10 PM
Hey guys you can now post stuff on my site in the guest book please do so.

Posted by: THE REPOMAN Apr 26 2005, 08:48 AM
uhhhhhhhh chnky the other me grabed the chnky from his demension not the one from this demension ok.

smackes chnky on head for being a jew


Posted by: Camala Apr 26 2005, 09:49 PM
Hey Chnky...remember how I said I could give you a sketch of my character....I cant anymore lol. The scanner my friend gave me...well I have to find a way to get the software for it so its going to take me some time lol

So in otherwords....nm lol happy.gif
You are more then welcome to include me in if you like though. Just cant send ya a pic.

Posted by: THE REPOMAN Apr 27 2005, 07:53 AM
yea i finaly found a pic of one of my favorite attacks

< the pic is a little small though sad.gif

Posted by: Lt. Sparks Apr 27 2005, 08:50 PM
Ahhhhhh. I liked sniper kitty.

*Suddenly the ground cracks open and Satin rises from hell with sniper kitty on his shoulder.*

Satin: Thanks Sniper kitty. You conveced me to leave this hell hole and seek my dream, ..... TO BE A........................dancer. *Satin shakes Sniper kitty's paw.* Alright your the new owner of Hell. Heres the keys. Now I'm of to dance school. *Satin sets Sniper kitty down and runs off in the distance. Sniper kitty runs and jumps on Lt's shoulder. An evil smile grew on his face.*

Hey you guys might want to be careful. I have the power of Hell on my side now.

*Sniper kitty glares at Chnky.*

Posted by: Camala Apr 27 2005, 09:01 PM
OMG *sides are hurting from laughing so hard*

Mr. Saitan in a pink fufu tutu!!!! ahahahaaa

*gives Lt the golden award for best reincarnation idea lmao*

Posted by: chnkymnky Apr 28 2005, 07:03 AM
Thanks Camala its ok that you cant give me a pic ill think of something.

Damn sniper kitty's back now i must bring down the force of the jews upon him.


A huge beam comes out of the heavens and smites the sniper kitty.

Posted by: THE REPOMAN Apr 28 2005, 08:48 AM
the david death star blast is then suddenly deflected by a much more power full beam


your jews beam is stron but mine is better yells repo while standing on the shoulder of a custom version of the full armor enhanced double zeta gundam. repo hopes in to the cockpit

ok full armor triple Zeta gundam all armerments aim at the death star of david.

armerments include

hyper mega cannon x2
dober cannons x5
heat shealded rockets x100 x4 batterys ( missle pods = 100 each)
mega cannon x4
requiem cannon x1
totenkruez cannon x1


Posted by: chnkymnky Apr 28 2005, 09:06 AM
The blast is deflected by the most powerfull of all the gundam's. SUPER JEW ZEONG

Take that evil doers

Posted by: THE REPOMAN Apr 28 2005, 09:19 AM
ok fine then can you take 2 tripple zeta gundams

a second one drops down and they both fir there all out attacks


Posted by: chnkymnky Apr 28 2005, 09:23 AM
nothing can defeat the power of the jews.


sudenly millions of zeongs and zaku's come out of nowhere and blasts repos zetas to tiny smoldering bits.

Posted by: THE REPOMAN Apr 28 2005, 09:37 AM
i think not

all the attacks are blocked by a indestructable shield of godlyness

and then the enemy forces are erased from existence

*repo talks in to walky talky*

ok god now where are even

for now

Posted by: chnkymnky Apr 29 2005, 08:32 PM
pics up check it out guys (and gal)

Posted by: Camala Apr 29 2005, 09:27 PM
CHNKY!!! Where's the love??!! Lmao
Im all scribbled out *giggling*

Posted by: chnkymnky Apr 30 2005, 04:54 AM
sorry but i need to look at the tutorial for drawing girls again.


Posted by: THE REPOMAN May 2 2005, 09:39 AM
my pic is by far the best looking one on there


but no dragon and that makes me sad sad.gif

Posted by: Lt. Sparks May 2 2005, 08:02 PM
Ok that was weird with the whole gundam fight and all right in front of us and the death star of david.

*Sniper Kitty shakes head in agreement.*

Anyway Thank you for the awared Camala. I mean this was really unexpected. I you guys are to nice. Well i guess i first would like to thank Sniper kitty and.....*insert two hour long speech* that all i have to say. Well bye everyone. Cya next time at the oascar awared show. PEACE IM OUT!!!


Posted by: Camala May 2 2005, 08:58 PM

I really love this RPG you guys are awesome. You crack me up!!!

Posted by: THE REPOMAN May 3 2005, 07:36 AM
yes we rule.......ohhhhhhh yea

*walks over to sparks and smackes him*

take that for getting an award and not paying me the award money for cutting a deal with satin so you could get an award

Posted by: Lt. Sparks May 3 2005, 08:28 PM
Huh? you did what? You cut a deal with satin. What did you do offer him your soul so i could do that joke. I"M LOST!!!????? wacko.gif

*Looks at Camala*
Are you threatening me?! I think you are!! *turns to everybody else*
You all are arn't you!!! You all want me dead in ditch don't yeah!!!!! Thats right im talking to all of you. Even you in the back. Yeah thats right i saw you, WISTON CHURCHILL.


*Pulls out a remote with one big RED butten on it*

Posted by: Hell Wrath May 4 2005, 07:03 AM
Are you coming on to me...............

im not hearing a no.

Posted by: THE REPOMAN May 4 2005, 08:42 AM
ok sparks 1. i dont have a soul to trade right now, 2. i cut the deal by beating satin at a game of poker. so just calm down and dont push that button......ok

ohhh and hell no body is comming on to you...........except for maby zoidberg

Posted by: Lt. Sparks May 4 2005, 04:02 PM
IM TELLING YOU IM GOing to pr..e.......????

Um hell... im sorry im not coming on to you.

Anyway I WILL PRESS THE BUTTEN! AND YOU WANNA KNOW WHAT THE BUTTEN DOES! I'LL TELL YOU WHAT IT DOES! IT DOES nothing absolutly nothing. I mean i could press it right now and nothing would happen.


Posted by: Camala May 4 2005, 09:18 PM
*sneaks up behind Sparks and stabs him with shot filled with knock out syrum. Watches him yelling and running and slowly starts to fade out until he is knocked out on the floor*

Alright now that thats done...whose up for a game of yahtzee! lmaoooo

*hears Sparks snoring* hehehe

Posted by: chnkymnky May 5 2005, 06:59 AM
Good shot Camala chnky breaks out his special malibu yahtzee dice..

we can use these he says with an evil grin

Posted by: THE REPOMAN May 5 2005, 07:17 AM
yea yahtzee. i love yahtzee

what they do not know is a cant lose in yahtzee. for i am mthe yahtzee god, muahahahahahahahahahahaha

Posted by: chnkymnky May 7 2005, 06:55 AM
every time i roll the dice i get yahtzee... these are my special dice

yahtzee ha in your face repo i win again.

Posted by: Dark_Crow May 7 2005, 07:09 AM

You guys are fighting in here too?

Is Hell wrath still around?

Posted by: chnkymnky May 7 2005, 09:08 AM
he's round here somwheres says chnky dodgeing Repo's attacks. He'll bee here sometime shortly possable. Chnky takes a direct hit from sniper kitty.

BAD KITTY chnky yells launching part of the floor at the kitty

i win

Posted by: THE REPOMAN May 7 2005, 11:15 AM
chnky chnky you should already know that i love dice, and yahtzee involves the rolling of dice. so i cant lose. muahahahahahashahahahahahahahahahahaha.
now go my geat dice dragon of antioch.


Posted by: Dark_Crow May 7 2005, 02:11 PM
I was concidering joining this RPG, but it seems like a danger zone! *grabs hardhat and quickly puts it on*

HELLWRATH! If I may, please PM me! Thank you!

Posted by: Hell Wrath May 7 2005, 05:35 PM
im sorry for the abbsence.......... life is crazy.

Dark crow i would be most pleased if you joined.

Posted by: Dark_Crow May 8 2005, 05:31 AM
All right!

*peers for opening*

Will join as soon as I find one I like...

Posted by: Hell Wrath May 8 2005, 08:16 AM

Posted by: THE REPOMAN May 8 2005, 11:36 AM
yea srry about the whole "war zone" thing. this usually only happens in the disc.......ok now where was i, ohhh yes. now my geat beast destroy him with the snake eyes of terror, muahahahahahahahahahahaha

Posted by: Dark_Crow May 8 2005, 12:26 PM
Hey, don't apologize! I'm the first one to tell you that that kind of fighting is a whole lot of fun!

Posted by: Dark_Crow May 8 2005, 01:29 PM
Please excuse the double post, but here we are!

Name: Henna
race: Forgotten
age: 21
height: 1.73 m
weight: 70 kg
appearance: She has very curly dark brown hair, shoulder length. She wears an ebony cloak with elaborate embroiled patterns on the hems. Underneath the heavy cloak she is wearing an emerald green loose shirt.
A thick brown buckled belt is around her waist, and hangs slightly to one side. Tight pants underneath that still. Dark brown boots. She has with her a well-worn carry-bag, which slings over her left shoulder to hang on her right side.
weapon: Magical sword with embedded runes. A set of daggers which are hidden on her person.
possession: A magical necklace which can detect immediate danger. (this doubles up as my third weapon in the end)
element: Her magic is focused on ice, but she can wield some wind as well.
abilities: mind-touch and foresight
special technique: Shadowed Snow. By combining the ice and wind she can create a small area of intense cool weather (resembling blizzard, hence the name) right around her body, and anybody close by. It has an average area of 10m radius.
history: Traveled around the world with her parents until she was old enough to do it on her own. Her parents were killed recently in the battle raging in this world. As a forgotten, she usually keeps to herself, not letting on to what she may/may not know with regards to the her people’s technology.

Henna travels either on foot, or as of late, on horseback. Her mount is a silverish stallion with a powerful body. He has been bred to withstand the harshest of circumstances and has extraordinary speed, agility and strength.

Pet: Henna has a small black cat, Tracker.

Any comments? Suggestions?

Posted by: Camala May 8 2005, 03:58 PM
Whohooo another chick!!!

*takes off her rain coat and rinses it out from all the drool. Soon has a large puddle* yuck. *takes a match and burns the raincoat*

happy.gif Great snake of terror...*looks at it and then takes a needle and pops it.*
it was a balloon!!!! lmaoooo

Posted by: Hell Wrath May 8 2005, 04:24 PM
am i the only one seriously lost in this moment........ yeah..... ok

Posted by: THE REPOMAN May 9 2005, 07:52 AM
noooo my great dice dragon has been popped like a balloon, now i cant win the yhatzee game noooooooooooooo! or can i?

Posted by: chnkymnky May 9 2005, 08:46 AM
no repo you can't and by the way crow there's going to be a comic to this story if you want to check it out some drawings are at

Posted by: Dark_Crow May 9 2005, 01:29 PM
Okay! Well, as soon as the opening presents itself, look for a dark fidure on the horizon...

Posted by: Lt. Sparks May 9 2005, 06:52 PM
*Slowly gets up*
Oww what hit me. Sorry about the crazy streak thing. It just happens when i get lost in whats happening.

*Looks around at everyone.*
Why are you guys playing yhatzee? Why is that rain coat burning?! Whats with those dice!?!! *Turns to Dark Crow* AND WHERE DID YOU COME FROM!!!????!?!?!?!? THATS IT I'M PRESSING THE BUTTEN.

*presses butten. Suddenly two black sedans pull up. Opra music starts to play. Men step out of the car with tommy guns. They start to mow down the yhatzee players. Then they drive off. *

WOW! That butten does call the mafia. I was only making it up in the begaining.

Posted by: THE REPOMAN May 10 2005, 09:20 AM
luckly repo was off getting sodas for the players so he did not die

ahhh what happened here.

they where mowed down by the mob. says dark_crow

who sent them


then sparks must face the wraith of the ashland mafia, and i just happen to be there mob boss. shhh dont tell any body. smile.gif

Posted by: Dark_Crow May 10 2005, 11:34 AM
... [speechless]


HAHAHAHA! Sorry. But today I will laugh at a tree...

Posted by: chnkymnky May 10 2005, 03:19 PM
chnky gets up from behind the yahtzee shield.

yo importante we gonna get a hit on this guy sparks.

chnky claps his hands and is magicly dressed in red sweat pants (the swishy kind), a red wind blazer. and has a red bandana on his forhead.

If you is to put a hit on this guy i'll do it for i am EL LOCO SENOR and i do CRAZY thngs

Posted by: THE REPOMAN May 10 2005, 03:57 PM
yes we must put a hit on sparks, and then we must gather the ashland mafia and kill him if our first attempt does not work.

Posted by: THE REPOMAN May 10 2005, 04:04 PM
srry about the double post.

hey hell srry about the little thing i put on there because i thought it would be a cool way of saying that i was half dragon, but if it was really all that bad i will erase it almost emeditly.

Posted by: Lt. Sparks May 11 2005, 09:33 PM
Hey don't put a hit on me. I didn't know that the butten really did call the Mafia.

Wait did you say the "ashland mafia."

"Yes" Says repo

Oh thank god. The ashland mafia is no threat. There's only like three members.

Oh and i have 3 words for Chnky WHAT THE HELL!!!!!

And Dark Crow are you feeling ok?

Posted by: THE REPOMAN May 12 2005, 09:12 AM
ohhh i will show you that the ashland mafia is a bigger threat than you think...... but right now i have to deal with chnky.

Posted by: Camala May 12 2005, 03:36 PM
hellz are we ready to go to morning? Im sleeping so i cant post lmao

Posted by: God_of_Death May 12 2005, 07:21 PM
I'm ready to go to morning. What else is there for our characters to talk about?

Posted by: Dark_Crow May 13 2005, 03:02 PM

Oh, right!


Posted by: THE REPOMAN May 16 2005, 07:07 AM
once again......YEA DESERT COMBAT. hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

Posted by: chnkymnky May 17 2005, 08:46 AM
i have the last characters drawn and they will be up next weekend

possible it depends on how long it takes before my dad moves to his new house.

Posted by: Dark_Crow May 17 2005, 01:59 PM
I can interact... er soon!

Posted by: Dark_Crow May 18 2005, 06:16 AM
Hostile, are we? lol!

Posted by: THE REPOMAN May 18 2005, 08:56 AM
ninjanatsD.gif yes very hostile muahahahahahahahahahahahahaha ph34r.gif

Posted by: Lt. Sparks May 18 2005, 08:34 PM
You big brutes you can go and say "whats ur name or will kill you" to a lady.

You must be "gentlemen" like to a lady lol

Posted by: Hell Wrath May 20 2005, 12:15 AM
ill post something later that talks all about the forgotten..... really the only races that know they ever existed would be demons and angels....... that means chnky you dont know what they are.

Posted by: Dark_Crow May 20 2005, 12:26 AM
AHhhhhhhhh! They know nothing of me? Muahahahhahaha!

Posted by: THE REPOMAN May 23 2005, 07:48 AM
what about dragons?????

Posted by: chnkymnky May 23 2005, 08:44 AM
yes sir mr wrath sir i know nothing of the forgotten

Posted by: Lt. Sparks May 23 2005, 08:51 PM
The who?

Posted by: Dark_Crow May 24 2005, 01:57 AM
I wonder if I still have the pm Hellwrath sent me... If I do, I'll paste what he said bout em for you guys - saves him the trouble!

Posted by: THE REPOMAN May 24 2005, 08:41 AM
what about dragons?????????

Posted by: Dark_Crow May 24 2005, 02:14 PM
I don't have the PM any more... so sry! Er... what do you want to know about dragons? You get pink, blue and grey ones... wink.gif

Yeah, I also want to know... What about the dragons!

Posted by: Camala May 24 2005, 07:32 PM
Gentlemen??????? who are they? where are they?

Lt where the hell were you when I started lmao.
I was getting drooled on so much I had to wear a rain jacket *winks at you guys*
Im just kidding ya know I have nothing but love for you guys!

Posted by: Hell Wrath May 24 2005, 08:13 PM
guys i may not be able to post for the next day or so due to finals.....

Posted by: Camala May 24 2005, 10:32 PM
Good luck Hellz!! no worries we'll be ok happy.gif

Posted by: Dark_Crow May 24 2005, 11:58 PM
Yeah, I think we can manage... Well, I'm not so sure about Henna.... She's a suspect... lol!

And good luck!

Posted by: THE REPOMAN May 25 2005, 07:39 AM
what i was wondering about was wheather a half dragon like my self(dirg) would know what a forgotten was, not what a dragon is, i know a lot about them.

Posted by: Dark_Crow May 25 2005, 11:40 AM
My bad! lol!

Posted by: Hell Wrath May 25 2005, 03:33 PM
im back..... just a side note i may have just failed algebra 2 (GASP).

repo a dragon may know a little but like aarn not a whole lot.

Posted by: chnkymnky May 26 2005, 09:15 PM
last 4 characters should be on the site by saturday i will post again when there up.

Posted by: God_of_Death May 27 2005, 12:32 AM
Hey! I was the ONLY GUY not drooling on you! Only because I wasn't here, but that's beyond the point

Posted by: Dark_Crow May 27 2005, 01:02 PM
LOL! Poor girl... hehe!

So... I'm the mystery chick in this one? Suits me juuust fine! smile.gif

Posted by: Hell Wrath May 27 2005, 02:35 PM
hey i wasnt drooling at all..... "damnit chnky stop drooling," ::Hell closes chnkys mouth and ducktapes it closed three times::

oh yeah and the forgotten....... um give me minute

Posted by: Hell Wrath May 27 2005, 02:49 PM
Forgotten: (Zians)

An ancient race of Zi, one of the first actually. The forgotten were known for there marvolous advances in architechture and science with magic. They were one of the first races to harness magic and combining it with tools. (they were the ones who made the first mechanized golem powered by a strong type of electrical magic) In due time they became the biggest civilillization on Zi. They were steps away from completely controlling Zi, but it was not to be. See for as their power grew so did their arogance. A brilliant man by the name of Archillies VII created a weapon that mortals should never had been able to touch. The Aquiria as it was called was a massive fortress that floated in the sky using magic. When it was finished the Zians controlled the power of gods, the huge energy cannon that was fixed in its center could devastate whole regions. Their arogance was too much and the weapon turned on them, most of them added from this world.... few survived. As that was the end of their era, a new one began that one of humans, angels, and daemons.

Posted by: Dark_Crow May 28 2005, 01:33 AM
*sigh* Now I'm here... all aloooooone....

lol! I'm a nice girl, honest! My people it seems just got greedy!

Posted by: Hell Wrath May 30 2005, 12:57 PM
greedy, yes they were.

side note: the 4th kingdom has reached page 10. I think this calls for a celebration..... WOOT mellow.gif huh.gif happy.gif smile.gif biggrin.gif

Posted by: Camala May 30 2005, 06:42 PM
*pops open a bottle of champaign and starts to pour some* oops;...wait some of you arent 21. *pops open a bottle of the sparkling cider for the youngins* hehehhe

Posted by: Hell Wrath May 30 2005, 10:25 PM
Well on europe there isnt a drinking age, so i stage this party in France, paris to be exact. ::Grabs bottle of champagine and pours some:: WOOT

Posted by: chnkymnky May 30 2005, 10:58 PM
double woot and pics should be up by tonight soory bout the wait dad wanted to go camping.

Posted by: Hell Wrath May 31 2005, 12:29 AM
just a quick note for anyone who wants to read. in the next few days i will have my second Rp up for anyone thats interested it will be called Warzone: Invasion. It will be about. in the distant future man has learned to colonize other worlds, an alien race has come to invade earth, kill the human race and, try to uncover the biggest secret that Earth has kept ever since its creation. trust me its sort of a whopper. Just a little thing i felt like typing

Posted by: Dark_Crow May 31 2005, 11:20 AM
Cool! Er... I just realised that I made an error - the shield I put away, as you guys can imagine... was my own. Not the huge thing covering desert-paradise! lol! biggrin.gif

Posted by: Hell Wrath May 31 2005, 01:22 PM
thats ok... i kinda understood. just a little confused blink.gif

Posted by: God_of_Death May 31 2005, 08:25 PM
Yo! Chnky, I can't see the pics. They don't show up. blink.gif

Posted by: Camala May 31 2005, 08:30 PM
whats the addy for the pics page?

Posted by: Dark_Crow Jun 1 2005, 12:23 AM
Picks? What picks? I cannot help but think I missed something 'ere?

Posted by: Hell Wrath Jun 1 2005, 12:28 AM
in all the posts in this thread there is a link to drawings he made of our characters... i dont know where they are andam at this point..... how you say lazzy.

Posted by: chnkymnky Jun 1 2005, 08:25 PM
something up with the site so i got to try again tonight

and wrath to be pushy i know where you live

the site is

somethings wrong with freewebs and it just says ERROR WITH PAGE every time i click to add a paragraph so it's gonna be a while i appoligize for the stupidity of the internet.

Posted by: Hell Wrath Jun 1 2005, 09:28 PM
cant even make a web page, GOSH!!, just kidin tongue.gif

Posted by: Hell Wrath Jun 2 2005, 03:19 PM
where is eveyone.

Posted by: Dark_Crow Jun 3 2005, 11:09 AM
*peeks out from behind big pile of books* Er... Here and there!

My excuse is exams... wink.gif

Posted by: Hell Wrath Jun 3 2005, 11:17 AM
that sucks...... im enjoying ummer vacation. *basks in the missouri sun* AH

Posted by: chnkymnky Jun 3 2005, 11:23 AM
hey boston if your on still go to yahoo messenger if not ill be back on sometime around 2:00 see ya there hopefully

And damn your ability to lounge around and not have to work

Posted by: Hell Wrath Jun 3 2005, 11:29 AM
not working is fun and also please refrain from calling me by my last name on her ok, Riggens... or is it riggans damn i cant remember.

so get on yim..... if anyone else would like to contact me then please send me messages at

Posted by: chnkymnky Jun 3 2005, 12:57 PM
pics be up thanx to the help of our wise and powerful leader


lets all shibby

Posted by: Dark_Crow Jun 3 2005, 01:01 PM
So where are they exactly? This could be interesting!

Posted by: Hell Wrath Jun 3 2005, 01:07 PM
they are here.

Posted by: Hell Wrath Jun 3 2005, 08:23 PM
excuse the double post. Chnky please man please learn to post a good post. I know it may seem like i nit pick but its just the way i am. we are going to go over the huge mistakes that you made.

1. your in a pool of water that has a bank, which means you have to climb out. therefore your not going to be running at all, exspecially torward DC's horse.

2. even if you did tell how you got out of the pool, you still had to get out, run over to the horse, take the sword out, throw it to her..... and your doing this with no weapons and your obviously thinking the creature is blind and cant see you. Once you got out of the pool and got to the horse it would have smacked you outside the shield.... but ill go into that later.

3. your typing is like monolouge, there is no emotion in it what so ever, all you do is italisize your speech wich shows no emotion. also in your post all you type is like EX: he ran there and hit the guy on the head, it died. Use different words and vivid ones that would make my mind imagine what you just did.

4. just to compare look at this.
"Henna here catch."
to GoD's
"You're on, Aramil!" Aarn shouted
... see how he shows emotion.

5. lastly when you got out of the pull and rushed to the horse, which by the way is were the creature is standing, the creature would have mostly likely killed or hurled you outside the shield, because you were stupid and rushed and because you have no weapons on you. unless you were stupid enough to jump into the water with your Katanas on which if you did the would be at the bottom of the very deep pool. Now if you are thrown out you would be imediatly covered in wet sand because your are still wet and then instantly hard as the searing sun dries the sand, which would hurt extremely because the sand would fuse to the hair on your body, Ouch.

well sorry for the rant as now i am done, chnky here are some words of wisdom that i will pass on to you, start writing just for fun even if your not going to use it or just throw it away, find out what sounds good and use it in stories, you write. ok.

Posted by: God_of_Death Jun 3 2005, 10:57 PM
Yay! I'm quoted!

Anyway, a suggestion to Chnky: change this:
"Henna here catch"
to this:
"Henna!" Aramil called as he unsheathed her weapon from the horse. "Catch!" The blade spun through the air but stopped as Henna smoothly caught it by the hilt.

I have an idea to help Chnky. He could post in the story, then one of us post in the disc what it COULD'VE been. That will show Chnky how to enhance his RPing skills and what to change in his original post. The editor will have to keep basically everything the same, like if Aramil throws a sword to Henna, then we would have to include that, or if Aramil swam in the water and splashed Aarn, we would have to keep that, too.

And, HW, are you going to post info on the creature(s)?

Posted by: Hell Wrath Jun 3 2005, 11:18 PM
ok im pretty sure i posted what a Kahz and a Dark Fang ogre are so here it goes.

name: Sandwraith
hieght: approx 5'11
wieght: uknown
description: a sandwraith is the soul of a dead legionaire, their soul has been attached to this body of sand and now must fight for its creater. a sand wraith has no mouth, nose, or ears. It does have two large glowing yellow eyes.
weapons: axe, sword, spear, mace, flail.
how to kill: decapitation or the severeing of limbs, for it has no regeneration properties.

name: Abyssal sandwraith
hieght:approx 6'0
wieght: uknown
description: unlike its counterpart the abyssal version is tougher, stronger, and quicker. The thing is covered in black rags wich makes it able to move with speed and agility. It though like its counterpart has only two eyes that are searing red. It has a tongue that slides out where the mouth should be and has a slurred high pitched sound that eminates from somewhere. it is was created from ragaze using abyssal magic.
weapons: dual scimitars
how to kill: well youll just have to find out. it regenerates.

Posted by: Dark_Crow Jun 4 2005, 01:01 AM
I just made up the dark creature, but I suppose it could end up being an 'abnormal sandwich' (abyssal sandwraith) or something...

Er... yeah. Henna is at the edge, near the shield... and her horse next to the water or close thereto... The creature is therefore next to the shield, on the inside. Just a note!

Posted by: Hell Wrath Jun 4 2005, 03:07 PM
Dc you came up with the basic idea and i improved on it. also water dosent make sand desipate it makes it stick together and get heavier. flapping water on it will only slow it down not kill it.

a hint somthing thats more solid than sand cant regenerated when its body is clumped.

Posted by: Camala Jun 4 2005, 08:21 PM
*thinks about the hint....hears crickets chirping......*
Any one got any TNT? lol

Posted by: God_of_Death Jun 5 2005, 01:12 AM
So, Aarn's plan will still work...sorta. We will have to attack it with water (Chnky, get Aramil to do a cannonball or something when a abnormal sandwich is near it. That would help us) then slice MEGA CANNONBALL I did before...

Posted by: Dark_Crow Jun 5 2005, 04:42 AM
Where is henna currently in all of this?! lol!

Er... the creature isn't made of sand... It's just covered in sand. OR did I misread things?

Posted by: God_of_Death Jun 5 2005, 05:10 AM
QUOTE (Hell Wrath @ Jun 3 2005, 11:18 PM)
body of sand

You misread things

Henna is right between the shield and the abnormal sandwhiches. You haven't moved since your last post.

Posted by: Camala Jun 5 2005, 06:51 AM
How many of these things are there? At first there seemed to be only one, now it sounds like there is more then one.

Posted by: Dark_Crow Jun 5 2005, 07:11 AM
I posted that one came through, and someone mentioned that it was joined by others. Oh well... ^.^

Posted by: Camala Jun 5 2005, 06:55 PM
so exactly how many are we fighting then???

Posted by: God_of_Death Jun 5 2005, 08:14 PM
Three or four.

EDIT: Hey, I just noticed I'm over 300...*searched memory banks.* And this is where I posted it! My 300th post went to Hellz!

Posted by: Hell Wrath Jun 5 2005, 09:45 PM
we are fighting three of them, one was there then i nocked it away and it was joined by more. also thank you God of death i shall bear it with little pride........ just kidding.

Posted by: Camala Jun 5 2005, 11:11 PM
If i keep this up, you guys are gonna have me at 300 in no time lmao tongue.gif

Posted by: Dark_Crow Jun 6 2005, 12:01 AM
I'll be on two hundred soon... Three hundred is a bit off! biggrin.gif

Posted by: Hell Wrath Jun 6 2005, 12:15 AM
but technicaly you have 760 posts.

Posted by: Dark_Crow Jun 6 2005, 12:19 AM
Smarty pants! lol! But I have made peace with that... I just haven't gotten round to changing my sig yet! I want to design a nice pic to go in there, so the old will have to do for now! biggrin.gif

Posted by: Hell Wrath Jun 6 2005, 12:22 AM
yeah, does anyone know how to create an image like that. like some people have images advertising their rp, how do i do that.

Posted by: Dark_Crow Jun 6 2005, 11:42 AM
I um... use a program I have on my PC, and I intend to just paste it... smile.gif

Corel Print House. That coupled with the photohouse one or sumthin! Lol! I created it, but its not very good. So I'll stick it in, and change it when I can get round to crafting something good!

Posted by: Hell Wrath Jun 6 2005, 12:37 PM
Here are some more creatures.

Name: Kahz
hieght: 12ft
wieght: a little over a ton
description: A metal golem crafted by the greatest of engineers, now they have become their own developed race. They build new ones of themselvs improving every time. Their metal bodies are almost impeneratable, they are strong and amazingly fast for their size.
weapons: Giant 6f long scimitars or greatswords.
how to kill: sever mechanical cords in the back of the neck, very hard to do since they can throw you aside like a ragdoll.

name: Dark fang ogre
hieght: 15ft
wieght: uknown
description: huge towering creatures. The got their name from the two black fangs that they use to kill almost anything. They are almost always clad in armour that has very few weak spots. If your fighting one prepare to fight 4 more because they usually travel in packs of 5.
weapons: anything that can deliver a death blow.
how to kill: kill like any normal creature, but it is no easy task for thesse creatures can live with multiple fatal wounds for many hours.

name: Night shades
hieght: approx 5'5
wieght: approx 130
description: night shades are the assasinsof lord Ragaze, their small and nimble bodies make them increasingly harder to attack and inflict damage upon. They can also be camoflagued to seem invisible. The night shades are ussualy girls.
how to kill: inflict fatal wound
weapons: shuriekans, daggers, armband with blades on them(dont know the name for these).

Posted by: Camala Jun 6 2005, 07:21 PM
alright so all three of the sandwraiths are dead now right?
making sure before I post

Posted by: Hell Wrath Jun 7 2005, 10:48 AM
yep they are all dead

Posted by: Dark_Crow Jun 7 2005, 11:46 PM
More beasts... ok! Er, Henna wil only be in this group for bout three weeks roughly, soz! I'll make her part of the team somehow and then either tragically kill her off, or let her just take her leave.

Perhaps the latter... I will be absent from MT for about three weeks, so keeping Henna in the swing of things will be imposible. This is just a warning to anybdy making long-term plans for the plot! biggrin.gif

Posted by: God_of_Death Jun 8 2005, 05:58 PM
QUOTE (Hell Wrath @ Jun 6 2005, 12:22 AM)
yeah, does anyone know how to create an image like that. like some people have images advertising their rp, how do i do that.

Well, what I do is I make the image, then use the URL thing and replace the text with
[img]http://www. blah blah blah[/img]
things instead of just the URL.

Posted by: Camala Jun 8 2005, 08:19 PM
I know im not the GM...but it seems to me that whether to kill her off or leave of abscence would be based on you.

If you're going to make her part of the team, then a leave of abscence would make more sense especially since it is just for 3 weeks. Having you leave and then come back with some creatvity wouldnt be hard.

However, if you are trying to and/or need to quietly bow out all together for whatever personal reasons you may have, then either one would work.

Just putting my two cents in. *rattles the jar* lmao

Posted by: Hell Wrath Jun 9 2005, 03:46 PM
due to me being grounded from the computer the next few days i will be absent from the story, i hope to return soon. sorry for the inconvienece.

also Dc just keep your character in the game and you can pick up when you return.

Posted by: God_of_Death Jun 9 2005, 06:41 PM
It's okay. Anyway, I will try to come up with an image (On paint, because I can't draw worth CRAP) that we could use as a banner-link

Posted by: Dark_Crow Jun 10 2005, 11:27 PM
Thanks HW! smile.gif

So... what we gonna do now? I'm sort of not knowing here! lol!

And thank you for your 2 cents... biggrin.gif

Posted by: Hell Wrath Jun 11 2005, 03:57 PM
i am no longer grounded.... yessssssssss

we are going to leave the oasis soon.

Posted by: Dark_Crow Jun 18 2005, 06:30 AM
My pet is an unknown furry creature... Dodge, dont ya think? Hehe!

Henna will leave in a moment or two, so thank you for your company! If this thing is still running on my return, I'll rejoin you guys. Deal? biggrin.gif

Posted by: Camala Jun 18 2005, 08:29 AM
Good Luck Henna and best wishes happy.gif
Hope to see you soon.

Posted by: Dark_Crow Jun 18 2005, 11:25 AM
Geez, it sounds like I'm about to go give birth!!! biggrin.gif

Hehe! I'll send her off tomorrow...

Posted by: Hell Wrath Jun 18 2005, 02:13 PM
well bye bye..... well be here when you return. sad.gif sad.gif sad.gif

Posted by: Dark_Crow Jun 19 2005, 02:08 AM
Me last post is in... Have fun guys! Oh, and soz if I placed you in a funny spot, Zinn! biggrin.gif

C ya!

Posted by: Hell Wrath Jun 25 2005, 12:32 AM
camala i havea question. Where do you get your avatars, do you draw them or someone else?

Posted by: Camala Jun 26 2005, 08:34 PM
I made this with PSP. I do av paintings for recreational.

If you want I can make you one. Just pick out an av you want painted, and next time I see you online you can send it to me. happy.gif

Posted by: Hell Wrath Jun 26 2005, 09:15 PM
sweet, oll have to find an umpainted avatar.

Posted by: Lt. Sparks Jun 28 2005, 11:48 PM
Guess whose back? Everyone please hold your cheers. Im sorry i havent posted for so long. I just got distracted for a while. But im back. so all is well and order can be restored.

sad.gif Sniff* I missed you guys so much. *huggs everyone. Then stops and backs up.*

Sorry i got a little emotional there.

Posted by: Hell Wrath Jun 29 2005, 12:01 AM
John your back, woah!!1 man hag. Embrace, two taps no more then let go.

Posted by: God_of_Death Jun 29 2005, 07:34 PM
blink.gif *slowly backs away from Sparks, then turns and runs*

Posted by: Camala Jun 29 2005, 09:15 PM
oh good, now i wont feel like post-hog happy.gif

ya'll need to gimme your email addys so i can email ya and annoy you until you finally come back in and post happy.gif

Posted by: God_of_Death Jun 29 2005, 09:17 PM
Fine. Will PM the--IT. my phone number, too. hahahaha just kidding

Posted by: Camala Jun 29 2005, 09:29 PM
*calls GOD's house. Waits....waits....someone picks up the phone. Hears a female voice answer "hello?"

"Hi Mrs. G.O.D!! Can God come out and play!!!"

Posted by: God_of_Death Jun 30 2005, 11:22 AM
"Sorry, I can't." replies the female voice.

AAAAHHHHHH!!!! Just kidding. I'm a guy.

Posted by: Camala Jun 30 2005, 04:44 PM
well i dunno now....*looks at the others to see if they can confirm that GOD is infact a girl*

They look doubtful....

Posted by: Lt. Sparks Jun 30 2005, 07:34 PM
*looks at god for a while* I think it might be possible. lol

just kidding. so theres no need for the gun now. Come on. Put it down.

Posted by: God_of_Death Jul 1 2005, 11:16 AM
*holds a piece of paper shakily to his wrist* Don't come any closer! I'll do it! I swear, I will!

Posted by: Camala Jul 1 2005, 03:16 PM
*Looks at GOD* Oh no!! Not "the paper" oh gawd no not "the paper"!! Anything but that.

Posted by: God_of_Death Jul 1 2005, 04:02 PM
(I'm committing suicide by paper cut)

Posted by: Camala Jul 1 2005, 05:36 PM
Dang right you better not hit me! I will take you out lmaoooo *is referring to the post with a grin* Im just joshing ya.

Posted by: God_of_Death Jul 1 2005, 08:46 PM
When you say "take you out," do you mean date? Hahahahahaha. Just kidding.


Posted by: Lt. Sparks Jul 1 2005, 11:09 PM
Haha!!!! I just posted like you stated for someone to do. What are you gonna do now.

Posted by: God_of_Death Jul 1 2005, 11:12 PM
dry.gif ...I meant in the story dry.gif

Posted by: chnkymnky Jul 3 2005, 11:09 AM
okay guys lets calm down and hey god the fighting isnt that i dont like you i just thought there should be a feud between two group members that then pull together later to save the others.....wait no i just dont like you....hahahahahahahahahahahaha tongue.gif

Posted by: Camala Jul 3 2005, 02:59 PM
thats harsh chnky blink.gif

Posted by: Camala Jul 3 2005, 03:00 PM
Wow...thats harsh chnky blink.gif

Where is the love guys?

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