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Posted: Sep 7 2013, 09:00 PM
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*delurks momentarily*


Just a little idea I got when listening to Marceline singing. I know I left some of it unchanged, but it fit the mood so well as it was, that it seemed a shame to try and alter those bits too much.

The scene is basically similar to what played out way back in the day, when Piro had to drag a drunken Largo out of the CoE, except, instead of breaking down immediately, Miho actually comes back at him a bit, before she starts to cry.



Miho (singing and teasing Largo):
La da da da da
I'm gonna bury you underground~
La da da da da
I'm gonna make you wish you'd drowned~

I'm gonna drink the blood from your pretty white neck
I'm gonna -

Piro:
Miho, leave Largo alone NOW, dammit!

Miho (turns on Piro):
Oh, you don't like that? Or do you just not like me?

(singing)
Sorry I don't treat you like a god now,
is that what you want me to do?
Sorry I don't treat you like you're perfect,
like all your little loyal girlfriends do...

Sorry I'm not sweet as sugar,
and that I'm not good enough for you~
Is that why you always avoid me?
I'm always such an inconvenience to you~

Well...

I'm just your problem,
I'm just your problem...
it's like... I'm not even a person, am I?
I'm just your problem.

Well...

I~ shouldn't have to justify what I do
I~ shouldn't have to prove anything to you~
I'm sorry that I exist,
almost forgot that I was on your blacklist.

But I~ shouldn't have to be the one that makes up with you~
So... why do I want to?
Why do I want to...







*goes back into hiding*

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Posted: Sep 8 2013, 08:27 AM
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*puts out some chocolate truffles to encourage the shy Kendermouse to delurk more often and regale us with more filks*

Well done! happy.gif
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Posted: Sep 8 2013, 09:26 PM
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/delurk

Me likes this...

/relurk
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Posted: Sep 9 2013, 06:33 AM
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D'aww, thanks you two... *nibbles on chocolate*

I'm just glad I didn't screw it up so badly that I ended up being chased by a mob of forumites wielding pitchforks and fire. ^^;;;
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Posted: Sep 9 2013, 07:58 AM
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QUOTE (kendermouse @ Sep 9 2013, 07:33 AM)
D'aww, thanks you two... *nibbles on chocolate*

I'm just glad I didn't screw it up so badly that I ended up being chased by a mob of forumites wielding pitchforks and fire. ^^;;;

Well given that the original was Marceline singing to PB I had a mental image of Largo with a tiara tongue.gif
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Posted: Sep 10 2013, 08:31 PM
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QUOTE (kendermouse @ Sep 7 2013, 09:00 PM)
*delurks momentarily*

*delurks*

*applauds*

*realises that we seem to have enough lurkers that if we all delurked we'd have an active forum again*

Anyway, I've added this to the CWDB - right here. Let me know if I need to fix anything.

BTW, this is the first entry in the CWDB since my "Thread of Wisdom" with mistersaxon's and Arwael's responses way back in August 2011. So, thank you for breaking the filking drought!

(On a side note, I lurk often enough that I don't think I've missed any written fanworks, but I do hope someone will let me know if I have!)

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Posted: Sep 10 2013, 08:39 PM
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Yes... yes we would wave... but lurking is so much fun...

nice bit by the way kender.
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Posted: Sep 10 2013, 09:09 PM
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Excellent, kendermouse!

Took me back and made me feel all nostalgic. Nice, subtle change to the atmosphere then. Lurk all you want, but please delurk occasionally to share such gems.

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Posted: Sep 14 2013, 08:53 AM
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Oh my gosh. I did not expect this to get even half this much attention, but I am very glad that y'all have enjoyed it. *hugs for everyone that wants them*

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Oh, and Invisigoth? It gets even better if you remember that, in this case, both Largo and Piro would be wearing tiaras. I think Largo would be the flame princess, and Piro would be PB.


Edit: Gah! I just realised that I somehow neglected to add in a link to the song in the OP. Sorry about that... x.x

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Posted: Sep 14 2013, 09:48 AM
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QUOTE (kendermouse @ Sep 14 2013, 09:53 AM)
Oh my gosh. I did not expect this to get even half this much attention, but I am very glad that y'all have enjoyed it. *hugs for everyone that wants them*

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Oh, and Invisigoth? It gets even better if you remember that, in this case, both Largo and Piro would be wearing tiaras. I think Largo would be the flame princess, and Piro would be PB.


Edit: Gah! I just realised that I somehow neglected to add in a link to the song in the OP. Sorry about that... x.x

Actually you have that dead backwards...Largo is the modder and Piro is the one you REALLY don't want to cause to flare up biggrin.gif
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Posted: Sep 15 2013, 07:13 AM
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Honestly, you could argue either way for this comparison, and still be correct, because they each have things about them that match things about either of the princesses...
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Posted: Sep 15 2013, 05:42 PM
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yes, but i have always wondered, who is Piro's princess.... Miho... his ex-lover whos flame may be re-kindling, or Kimiko... the new, and almost 'dream' girl. IMO
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