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Posted by: Garran Nov 29 2002, 05:02 PM
A sad smile inside?
When have I ever played with
The rest of the class?


A poet attempts
To understand a young girl's
Troubles and desires

But her eye is like
A mirror, and I don't know
What it is she needs.

Posted by: Shoka Nov 29 2002, 05:21 PM
her eyes like mirrors...
is miho playing now, or
dreaming of spring snow?

[irish_haiku]
Can this be an askew simulation
Of a martial-arts plot presentation?
First comes the invasion,
Then the master's hard training,
And finally, the great confrontation!
[/irish_haiku]

Posted by: e-Monk Nov 29 2002, 05:28 PM
[irish_haiku]
Though Largo's preachings've grown very mused,
Miho seems to be not as in the past ammused.
Has her illness gone worse?
Is she swayed by a chthonic force?
Oh, be not this cruel Fred, and let her worries be soothed.
[/irish haiku]

Posted by: Caduceuskun Dec 1 2002, 09:13 PM
Very few haikus
About the training students
Get cracking, people!

The video games
Shall improve the students skill,
For their protection.

Trained students make for
Difficult meals for zombies;
Retreat to darkness.

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