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Posted by: Mintaka Sep 30 2002, 06:35 AM
Kids are a blessing.
Like, "May you live in times
Which are int'resting."

>Any idea why....?

Strong family bonds --
Floating point calculations --
Food for the tapeworm.


Posted by: bringerofcats Sep 30 2002, 07:12 AM
An enourmous mistake,
Baby-sitting relatives.
They will have suffered.

Tied together, they
Watch helplessly as demons
Ravage possesions.

Game consoles floating
In the vast, blue bathtub. They
Will never work again...

VCR destroyed
By the use of 3vi1 bread
Shoved into tape slot.

Curse the creator
Of duct tape! Why is it so
Very binding? WHY?!

Alas, if only
1337 master was here! But he
battles the undead.

No salvation for
The unlucky two. No doubt,
They will change their ways.

Posted by: Aphrael Sep 30 2002, 08:44 AM
babysitting woes
where did they find the duck tape?
Next time, call in dead.

Posted by: LocusCosecant Sep 30 2002, 10:06 AM
Destructive children
Mean we have no story strip,
But this is good, too.

Piro thinks they're gone,
But they left him all tied up!
How will he get free?

Posted by: Shaper_Diaz Sep 30 2002, 03:30 PM
[tanka]
in the vast empty
space of rippling bath waters
a solitary
bubble rises to the top:
frogger has died once again.
[/tanka]



Posted by: Dermanus Sep 30 2002, 03:31 PM
Floating game systemz
A wrapping done in duct tape
Let's hope they have learned.

Posted by: vespira Sep 30 2002, 05:49 PM
could have been much worse
children like to play with fire
houses burn quickly

i am now thinking
that fred had a leet comic
that got turned to ash

piro is evil
delaying the storyline
oh how that dost suck..

i shall take leave now
haiku on an SGD
or a DPD
is real hard for me to grasp
oh how i long for miho </tanka>

Posted by: CryingInk Sep 30 2002, 05:58 PM
little relatives
are scary things always but
mostly with matches

toodles all

Posted by: tiptoe39 Sep 30 2002, 09:11 PM
Largo's misinformed.
3v1l lies not in sewers
but in the kids' playroom.

--
(limerick)

While ph34rbots might keep the peace,
in truth they're chasing wild geese.
For no one can tell
What horrific hell
Is wreaked by one mischievous niece...

my first post on a haiku thread. dun kill me.

-
jen

Posted by: Shaper_Diaz Sep 30 2002, 10:18 PM
[tanka]
a chair for a pain.
ducktape for my misery.
a hope that piro
rises from the ashen grave
to write yet another strip.
[/tanka]

<<<see, i go back & start reading tanka, & now i'm convinced that i'm thinking in 5,7,5,7,7. it's kinda the same effect i get when reading shakespeare, but creepier. btw, for some top-form tanka, read mori ogai/mori rintaro (ogai was his pen name) -- late 19th/early 20th century japanese poet/physician/writer/critic.

...& yes, i know "strip" is inappropriate.

Posted by: Rowan Bristol Oct 1 2002, 01:21 AM
Poor, sad young couple
Please know things could be worse:
They could be your own.

Posted by: Cryshalo Oct 1 2002, 08:11 AM
<Whacked_Tanka>
Seraphim threatens
to call Piro in dead and she
in mourning, silly her.
Did not she realise Piro
Really was dead, victim of neices?
</Whacked_Tanka>

Posted by: bringerofcats Oct 1 2002, 10:41 AM
As Piro, bound to
A chair, he contemplates: "Where
The hell are his friends?"

Seraphim, also
Bound, snug in place. She cannot
Help depressed Piro.

Largo, 1337 master.
He can't help; fighting zombies.
Plus, he bites at Quake.

Dom and Ed? Although
They have killed him numerous
Times, they still could help.

...But they are not here.
Perhaps wasting the spreading
Zombie 3vi1 with Largo.

But, he can't be saved.
The artist must wait in hope
That someone will come.

Only problem is
That he consumed a little
Too much Pepsi drinks...

Posted by: vespira Oct 1 2002, 05:43 PM
i know for a fact
that poets will oft break rules
but remember this
haiku is 5 7 5
and never anything else

why is it so hard
to stick to a rigid form
i mean, learn to count

limericks, while great
often seem to deviate.
tanka however
5 7 5 (7)^2
and never with 9 or 8

artistic license
is best kept in english verse
the language is worse
japanese is, however
not such a bastardized tongue

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