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Posted by: e-Monk Sep 22 2002, 10:54 PM
[!Haiku] I guess, I am the first haiku-er to arrive today. so here we go[/!Haiku]

don't "share" your food, girl.
and don't forget your cell-phone,
just in case they call.

[!!-- and now for the irish part of the show: --!!]

Kimiko's looking pretty rough,
to think about has lots of stuff:
her hours swapped,
audition dropped.
So things are looking mighty tough.

Posted by: XkyRauh Sep 23 2002, 12:46 AM
Kimiko sitting,
Erika chiding, soothing...
Black and White Layout

Very simple now,
No dramatic camera shots:
Roommates DO care.

[and the Irish end of things]

With her work ethic strongly in place,
our Kimiko sits flush in the face:
her duty to serve
may just fray her last nerve
if Erika won't get off her case!

An evening of fun at Beer Garden,
got a slew of new plot devvies startin'
both Piro and friend,
may not last to the end,
if these what-ifs and maybes keep smartin'!

[context: "ooh, that smarts!"]

--Xky *waving Mami flag, smiling*

Posted by: vonSudden Sep 23 2002, 02:34 AM
The morning after
Why is Kimiko's face green?
Oh. Beer, angst and guilt.

It is a pity
That Kimiko isn't as
Charged as her cell phone

[irish_haiku]
Says Erika, "Hey, girl, you really look like crap
You suffer from withdrawal from sweet nectar on tap."
Says Kimiko, "I won't be sick
At least if I have my pick
On things that http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=177."
[/irish_haiku]

Posted by: Shaper_Diaz Sep 23 2002, 10:26 AM
can the pounding stop?
writing haiku hungover
is never easy.



writing haiku abt someone being hungover, while you, yrself, are hungover, is less than a good idea. score: hoegaarden 1, shaper_diaz 0.

Posted by: Reflaxion Sep 23 2002, 10:41 AM
pity for herself
no longer concealed by beer
keeps her spirits low

Posted by: LocusCosecant Sep 23 2002, 02:56 PM
Poor Nansanawa,
Hungover, must go to work,
Try not to throw up.

Posted by: bringerofcats Sep 23 2002, 10:01 PM
Distressed Kimko
Now obligated to work
Life sometimes is cruel.

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