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Posted by: Shoka Aug 12 2002, 01:38 AM
kimiko, piro
both loaded, and burdens for
erika, largo

[irish_haiku]
Hayasaka might not have att4ck3d
When Largo observed she was r4ck3d,
But suggesting his sch3m3
To make her CPU scr34m
Was an ov3rclocked way to get wh4ck3d!
[/irish_haiku]

Posted by: Aeonus Aug 12 2002, 01:45 AM
Piro's a lightweight
This wuss can't hold his liquor
'Least he's lighter now

Whoa! Erika's R4CK3D!
Misbegotten proposal,
Ultimate suff'ring

A scream you say, Ed?
Of 'Ultimate suffering'?
It's all in your head

Posted by: Cryshalo Aug 12 2002, 02:39 AM
So many young men have
suffered; so many lives ruined;
Romance hurts the most;

Posted by: vonSudden Aug 12 2002, 03:00 AM
Fly, Largo, you fool!
Fly! You don't know the danger!
- Too late, that must hurt!

Tut-ankh-Amun and
Senefru, famous mummies.
Now Ed joins their rank.

[irish_haiku]
Now we know what Largo does best:
Brag, drink beer, be 1337 and jest
But he will only gain
Sh*tloads of pain
For his remarks about Erika's chest
[/irish_haiku]

Posted by: DeosArcana Aug 12 2002, 04:41 AM
Largo's pick-up lines
Can leave much to be desired
What did she break now?

Posted by: Rowan Bristol Aug 12 2002, 08:09 AM
hanging on a friend
Simple folk hold complex souls
hanging by a thread

Posted by: Reflaxion Aug 12 2002, 12:30 PM
silence of the night
easy to conceal the screams
of the foolish one

Posted by: Shoka Aug 12 2002, 02:41 PM
[ocp]
for Erika

For all the times you've been there
When she's needed you to be,
And all the help you've rendered
That has made her feel un-free:
She trusts you for your giving,
She loves you more than living,
She clings just like a kitten
That you've rescued from the sea.
[/ocp]

[!haiku]The more I look at panels 2, 3, & 4, the more sentimental it makes me feel. Especially Kimiko, who really looks very kittenish to me in this strip. It's putting me into serious greeting-card verse mode, gomen. [/!haiku]

*ocp = outside context poetry - just a little Iain Banks reference

Posted by: Mintaka Aug 13 2002, 06:30 AM
(revised version of one posted on another thread)

Erika shows Largo
golden Perseid bubbles
With a single blow

Posted by: Cryshalo Aug 13 2002, 09:53 PM
The shadows close and
comfort, conceal; but night air
lets screams travel far;

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