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Posted by: Shoka Aug 12 2002, 01:38 AM
kimiko, piro
both loaded, and burdens for
erika, largo

Hayasaka might not have att4ck3d
When Largo observed she was r4ck3d,
But suggesting his sch3m3
To make her CPU scr34m
Was an ov3rclocked way to get wh4ck3d!

Posted by: Aeonus Aug 12 2002, 01:45 AM
Piro's a lightweight
This wuss can't hold his liquor
'Least he's lighter now

Whoa! Erika's R4CK3D!
Misbegotten proposal,
Ultimate suff'ring

A scream you say, Ed?
Of 'Ultimate suffering'?
It's all in your head

Posted by: Cryshalo Aug 12 2002, 02:39 AM
So many young men have
suffered; so many lives ruined;
Romance hurts the most;

Posted by: vonSudden Aug 12 2002, 03:00 AM
Fly, Largo, you fool!
Fly! You don't know the danger!
- Too late, that must hurt!

Tut-ankh-Amun and
Senefru, famous mummies.
Now Ed joins their rank.

Now we know what Largo does best:
Brag, drink beer, be 1337 and jest
But he will only gain
Sh*tloads of pain
For his remarks about Erika's chest

Posted by: DeosArcana Aug 12 2002, 04:41 AM
Largo's pick-up lines
Can leave much to be desired
What did she break now?

Posted by: Rowan Bristol Aug 12 2002, 08:09 AM
hanging on a friend
Simple folk hold complex souls
hanging by a thread

Posted by: Reflaxion Aug 12 2002, 12:30 PM
silence of the night
easy to conceal the screams
of the foolish one

Posted by: Shoka Aug 12 2002, 02:41 PM
for Erika

For all the times you've been there
When she's needed you to be,
And all the help you've rendered
That has made her feel un-free:
She trusts you for your giving,
She loves you more than living,
She clings just like a kitten
That you've rescued from the sea.

[!haiku]The more I look at panels 2, 3, & 4, the more sentimental it makes me feel. Especially Kimiko, who really looks very kittenish to me in this strip. It's putting me into serious greeting-card verse mode, gomen. [/!haiku]

*ocp = outside context poetry - just a little Iain Banks reference

Posted by: Mintaka Aug 13 2002, 06:30 AM
(revised version of one posted on another thread)

Erika shows Largo
golden Perseid bubbles
With a single blow

Posted by: Cryshalo Aug 13 2002, 09:53 PM
The shadows close and
comfort, conceal; but night air
lets screams travel far;

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