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Posted by: Reflaxion Jun 24 2002, 12:43 AM
wiser than she seems
Erika sees good in him
and she lends a hand

Posted by: Cryshalo Jun 24 2002, 06:45 AM
sharp as sculpted ice
and just as cold; Erika is
both a help and bane

Posted by: jargon Jun 24 2002, 06:49 AM
eyes fall down on a humble seen
four in a garden
two are not keen

Posted by: jargon Jun 24 2002, 06:53 AM

2 pure 2 tainted
who knows what future lies
for 2 not quite corupted

Posted by: jargon Jun 24 2002, 07:01 AM
charmend but affraid
they walk with their other
to a place of unknow end

i hope these are a bit good, i'm too sure of them

Posted by: Cryshalo Jun 24 2002, 07:11 AM
He's led by the nose;
the smell of beer wafts under
night skies for Largo!

Hey, Jargon, simply put all the haiku's in the same post. And I think it might look better using the word "two" instead of the numeral "2".

Posted by: jargon Jun 24 2002, 07:18 AM
ah right
but i didn't think of them at the same time, sorry

Posted by: Celkan Jun 24 2002, 07:57 AM
When 'My treat this time'
Comes out of Erika's mouth,
So much danger comes.

Posted by: XkyRauh2001 Jun 24 2002, 01:31 PM
pieces lining up
so neatly amidst chaos...
dominoes, perhaps?

--Xky *waving Mami flag*

Posted by: Lisa Jun 24 2002, 05:47 PM
'beer garden', he heard
we can only imagine
our great teacher drunk

(yeah, we've seen Largo drunk before, but it fits, so nyeeh ;D)

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