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Posted by: kezra_cor May 17 2002, 12:22 AM
A quiet moment
Giving time to form a bond
Between two new friends

Why is it always
The silent comics that bring
Forth so much feeling?

Posted by: Yoshi6400 May 17 2002, 12:23 AM
Nice.

Posted by: kezra_cor May 17 2002, 12:29 AM
Thank you, it's always
Nice to know someone out there
Enjoys my poems

Posted by: Cryshalo May 17 2002, 12:38 AM

fear terror holds then!
Calm, relief from the storm; Miho
is pinging angels.

When the dark recedes
Angels come to comfort you;
Guardian Angels

Posted by: Cynical May 17 2002, 12:45 AM
I really like these
Good job on the haikus, yo
keep making them, please

Posted by: Asymptote May 17 2002, 12:48 AM
Sleeping Quiet wakes,
Finding Unrest wandering--
Lonely dreaming lands?

Posted by: kenshin May 17 2002, 12:51 AM
now beauty wakes up
from the unreality
caresses soulmate

Posted by: Cryshalo May 17 2002, 12:59 AM
Life hurting, guilt comes
Wake, arise, chaos abound, but then
who's this by my side?

Posted by: Jarod Cain May 17 2002, 01:06 AM
Darkly Cute Awakes
Destruction Abounds Throughout
Friend Softly Sleeps Near

Echos of dreams from the past.
Battle, fighting, strangely losing. Truth denied
Wondering what has happened.
-J-

Posted by: XkyRauh2001 May 17 2002, 01:45 AM
Silent syllables;
Trains of thought racing softly.
What will come of this?

--Xky *waving Mami flag quietly*

Posted by: Cryshalo May 17 2002, 01:57 AM
Welcomed back
to the arms of wakefulness
what happened here?

<!haiku>
not certain about the syllable counts in that one.
</!haiku>

Posted by: Rowan Bristol May 17 2002, 04:37 AM
Gentle robot friend
Why, between the two of us
Do you have the soul?

Posted by: Reflaxion May 17 2002, 06:02 AM
Miho comes awake
Faithful friend asleep close by
Who could ask for more

Posted by: Mintaka May 17 2002, 07:46 AM
I have been alone
I've looked out for myself yet
Now you watch for me

Posted by: grasshopperKAT May 17 2002, 08:51 AM
sob.....
so touching.....
can't match you poetry skills....
but i'll try

i stood alone ,hidden darkly....
now a hand
pulls me out of the shadows
.......

that stunk sorry




Posted by: grasshopperKAT May 17 2002, 08:55 AM
second atempt...

i awaken...
Thinking i'm alone....
but your here...
why are you?

why am I posting this?

Posted by: DeosArcana May 17 2002, 09:58 AM
Friends across the void
For even robots can feel
And they can love, too

A silent moment
Loyalty does not come free
Here, the price one pays


I don't know what that last one means, read into it what you will.


Note : Hey, it's post 666. How positively demonic.

Posted by: squee May 17 2002, 11:41 AM
Guardian sleeper,
watching over you so long,
sleep came to claim her

You have a friend now,
so true and loyal, won't you
stroke the kind soul's hair?

Posted by: Shoka May 17 2002, 12:16 PM
She wakes from a dream-driven fantasy
Of pain and dismay, and then rises to see
That her friend, above all,
Is a stochastic doll,
Whose love passed design-spec capacity.

Posted by: Cryshalo May 18 2002, 12:02 AM

Long gone, all care and
friends forgotten, but now
anew, loyal Ping.
Awaking from dark
to light, who would guess? Rock
in wild storm, angel Ping

Posted by: nlowre01 May 20 2002, 12:54 PM

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