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Posted by: jeremiahnewbie Apr 12 2002, 07:21 AM
the look on her face!
those eyes weren't cold with saddness
... they burned with disgust

Posted by: DeosArcana Apr 12 2002, 07:44 AM
Realization
His dreams crumble into dust
Kimiko hates him

Eyes wide with the pain
That comes with the knowledge of
Nasty thoughts of him

He cannot stand it
No one can think ill of him
Piro Neurotic

Posted by: wilgabriel Apr 12 2002, 07:57 AM
"I really blew it
I wish life was FFX
Oh, hello Yuki ..."

Posted by: Rowan Bristol Apr 12 2002, 08:18 AM
I am truly shamed
freaky otaku pervert
"Mr. Piro-San?"

Posted by: Rerrs Apr 12 2002, 09:07 AM
How could anyone
Like a loser like I am?
Surely it's disgust

Posted by: Stryker Apr 12 2002, 09:33 AM
Just the way you looooooooooook...tonight!

Posted by: XkyRauh2001 Apr 12 2002, 09:35 AM
Piro draws a line--
who's jumping to conclusions?
His pain is self-brought.

face-down just in time
to make light of the moment
to M T readers. happy.gif

Yuki approaches--
what calamity comes next?
at least Mami's there...

--Xky *waving Mami flag*

Posted by: glen Apr 12 2002, 09:47 AM
Piro sees the light.
What Now? A young school girl?
This won't help matters.

Posted by: Shoka Apr 12 2002, 01:12 PM
Our math'matically uncertain hero:
An American artist named Piro!
He adds Nanasawa,
Hayasaka, Sonoda,
And reckons his total sum zero.

Posted by: blob Apr 12 2002, 03:12 PM
I'm such a loser
Why do girls misunderstand?
It's just so unfair

His low self esteem
Causes him bigger problems
Than their conclusions

--blob

Posted by: Reflaxion Apr 12 2002, 04:03 PM
But Kimiko's wrong!
Piro's not an underage -
Uh-oh, look who's here. . .

Posted by: Spoon-Mijit Apr 12 2002, 09:37 PM
All girls hate me
They always assume the worst
Piro's assumption

Posted by: -bb Apr 12 2002, 09:54 PM
Piro must make best
Yuki wants to speak to him
Oppoturnity cost here.

Posted by: Lisa Apr 12 2002, 10:08 PM
my my, piro-san
the ladies weeping for you
quite the jam... sucks, huh?

(ehh, that sucks too. tongue.gif)

Posted by: Garran Apr 13 2002, 01:56 AM
Understanding of
My weakness is not something
That sad girl deserves

Better that she just
Comprehends enough to hate
Me; god knows I do

Such a stupid fool
I am. I wish I could just
Erase this saved game

And start this again
Somewhere with a character
Who knows how to live

Posted by: Garran Apr 13 2002, 01:59 AM
Is this a bad time?
I'll never have the courage
If I don't ask now.

Posted by: Garran Apr 13 2002, 02:04 AM
Put down your pity
And bitterness; if you smile,
Things will go better

The hatred you see
In others' eyes is only
Your own reflection

Posted by: masamage Apr 13 2002, 02:36 PM
I wonder, oddly,
If Erika thinks Yuki
To be the robot?

I hope she doesn't
Return right about now, or
Things could get confused.

"Nani? It's not fair."
Piro, too, assumes the worst...
"Everyone hates me."

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