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Posted by: kezra_cor Mar 27 2002, 01:57 AM
Seemingly trapped
She reaches for her weapon
Go Pirogoeth

Posted by: lonebountyhunter Mar 27 2002, 02:07 AM
inspiring...or something, not sure what to say. go cupcakes!

Posted by: I_S Mar 27 2002, 04:27 AM
Trapped in Miho's gaze...
Reaching for the hidden blade -
Cowardice or strength?

Posted by: Master Edward Mar 27 2002, 04:42 AM
A broken face
Hides reaching for secret knife -
Her defiant hand

Posted by: Faraday77 Mar 27 2002, 06:12 AM
*sneaks in*

defeated at last?
empty eyes, blood on her face.
reaching for her blade...

*blushes and runs away*

Posted by: Teutonic Knight Mar 27 2002, 06:27 AM
:: catches Fara by the scruff of the shirt ::

very... cool picture i guess... but endgame for who? WHO?!?!?

Posted by: McHorde-Trooper Mar 27 2002, 07:03 AM
Defeat close
Hopeless eyes stare back
Surprise waits

Posted by: Rowan Bristol Mar 27 2002, 07:36 AM
Quite under your spell
Helpless, hopeless, defeated
A surprise awaits

Posted by: Blastm Mar 27 2002, 08:21 AM
*ph33r the cutes ones*

Posted by: Garran Mar 27 2002, 10:11 AM
A thin, cold wind twists
Through the battlefield, catching
Briefly on his cloak

Casting it about
The body of his victim
He pays it no mind

He is confident
In his victory, in the
Strength of his grip

And turns himself to
Unravelling the secrets
Hidden in her eyes

He understands, too
Late, the nature of what he sees
This woman is death

Posted by: blob Mar 27 2002, 10:13 AM
Just accept defeat?
Not while I can draw my blade.
Yes, ph34r the cute one.

Victim or victor
friend or foe or something else
no one wins endgame

--blob

Posted by: Azuki Mar 27 2002, 01:16 PM
into serpent's kiss
haunted eyes stare-accept fate!
small voice replies "No."

Posted by: Faraday77 Mar 27 2002, 02:50 PM
[offtopic]

Grabbed by a knight,
Faraday still tries to run.
Onegai! Let go!



ah well...this one sux. *g*

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Posted by: oneechan19 Mar 27 2002, 03:39 PM
1-
is this "game over"?
seemingly trapped, seemingly lost
what hope does man have?

2-
she faces evil
eyes showing pain and suffering
but whose hurt is it?

3-
we see pirogoeth
we see the miho counterpart
but where is largo?

Posted by: Spoon-Mijit Mar 27 2002, 09:38 PM
Endgames, Endgames 2
Left Behind, Endgames Turning
What is their order?

Posted by: masamage Mar 27 2002, 11:26 PM
Beautiful, Garran.

[!haiku]
I have a hard time
Writing and/or rewriting
Odes to today's strip.

Beautiful alone.
I can't bear to filter it
Or add petty words.

Pirogoeth breathes.
My breath is taken away.
The fear in those eyes...
[!/haiku]

Posted by: The T Mar 27 2002, 11:48 PM
I see in her eyes
She is frightened, all alone
No one can save her

Those cold hands hold her
Face, reach down to seal her fate
She stands defiant

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