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Posted by: Tanetris Mar 22 2002, 12:33 AM
[/haiku]Well, the haiku muse has struck, so if no one else is gonna start the thread, I will.. Hope I got the naming format right. [haiku]

What trick'ry is this?
Pirogoeth under his thrall?
Say it is not so....

(edit: Changed word order on first and added another. When the muse comes, she bears a sledgehammer.)

Piro and Miho:
He the she and she the he
Pirogoeth and whom?

(edit2: one more for tonight)

His eyes pierce her soul.
She is held captivated.
Can she break away?

Posted by: Rerrs Mar 22 2002, 02:18 AM
In the fantasy
The frail becomes dominant
Here is Piro's joy

Posted by: luckyrabbit Mar 22 2002, 02:22 AM
In one world she
is only a sick girl
here, she is a king

Posted by: Master Edward Mar 22 2002, 04:14 AM
Not fallen darkly
through power of fantasy
here he is looming

Posted by: Rowan Bristol Mar 22 2002, 07:40 AM
In-Game

Through untold sorrow
I no longer need to fight.
Such sweet surrender

Out-game

Piro and miho
Two worlds holding such sadness
Chocolate frosted angst.

[!Haiku]
As there are effectively several pronounciations for chocolate, I'm going with the american contracted. (chok-lit)
[/!Haiku]

Posted by: Northwind Mar 22 2002, 08:09 AM
The boy and the girl
Two complex worlds collide
Through a thin cable

Posted by: Jurichi Mar 22 2002, 08:34 AM
My first MT haiku... decided to hop on the bandwagon. =)

*
His dark gaze fallen
He weaves a spell over her
A feast for his soul
*
Strength within pixels
A world within another
Never ending game
*

(Not bad?)

Posted by: masamage Mar 22 2002, 11:03 AM
Towering above
Your worthy, defeated foe...
What is in those eyes?

Engulfed in black cloth
The mighty fighter weakens,
Freezes at your touch.

Search her eyes...you are
In control--she can't escape
And neither can I.

How can a black king
Caress the face of a child
Without being burned?

Can anything else
Become so fright'ningly real
As this moment has?

Posted by: blob Mar 22 2002, 12:51 PM
The battle is done
Surrender yourself to me
I'll consume your soul

--------------------------------------------------

We fought valiantly
but in the end we were felled
What shall be shall be

--blob

Posted by: Meagen Mar 22 2002, 01:31 PM
I guess a picture
does stand for a thousand words;
Most of them are "huh?".

Meagen

Posted by: wilgabriel Mar 22 2002, 08:28 PM
Attacked by Miho
Draining Pirogoeth's life
Or is it a kiss?

Posted by: Fuchi Mar 22 2002, 08:37 PM
(My first haiku too..
Why am I drawn back here now?
Perhaps it's my fate..)

Is this the end...?
Miho-sama's victory...
Surely, we're not done.

<not-MT>Oddly enough, folks,
The evil is much too strong
for my human thought.

Perhaps I am not
nearly ready enough now
For the Endgames arc?</non-MT>

Posted by: Nekura_Rianu Mar 22 2002, 09:15 PM
*laughs* Damn, that's one hell of a Kirby dance. *thumbs up* Very well, you are forgiven wilgabriel...if you tell me what's up with that last Kirby. O_o?

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