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Posted by: Tanetris Mar 22 2002, 12:33 AM
[/haiku]Well, the haiku muse has struck, so if no one else is gonna start the thread, I will.. Hope I got the naming format right. [haiku]

What trick'ry is this?
Pirogoeth under his thrall?
Say it is not so....

(edit: Changed word order on first and added another. When the muse comes, she bears a sledgehammer.)

Piro and Miho:
He the she and she the he
Pirogoeth and whom?

(edit2: one more for tonight)

His eyes pierce her soul.
She is held captivated.
Can she break away?

Posted by: Rerrs Mar 22 2002, 02:18 AM
In the fantasy
The frail becomes dominant
Here is Piro's joy

Posted by: luckyrabbit Mar 22 2002, 02:22 AM
In one world she
is only a sick girl
here, she is a king

Posted by: Master Edward Mar 22 2002, 04:14 AM
Not fallen darkly
through power of fantasy
here he is looming

Posted by: Rowan Bristol Mar 22 2002, 07:40 AM

Through untold sorrow
I no longer need to fight.
Such sweet surrender


Piro and miho
Two worlds holding such sadness
Chocolate frosted angst.

As there are effectively several pronounciations for chocolate, I'm going with the american contracted. (chok-lit)

Posted by: Northwind Mar 22 2002, 08:09 AM
The boy and the girl
Two complex worlds collide
Through a thin cable

Posted by: Jurichi Mar 22 2002, 08:34 AM
My first MT haiku... decided to hop on the bandwagon. =)

His dark gaze fallen
He weaves a spell over her
A feast for his soul
Strength within pixels
A world within another
Never ending game

(Not bad?)

Posted by: masamage Mar 22 2002, 11:03 AM
Towering above
Your worthy, defeated foe...
What is in those eyes?

Engulfed in black cloth
The mighty fighter weakens,
Freezes at your touch.

Search her are
In control--she can't escape
And neither can I.

How can a black king
Caress the face of a child
Without being burned?

Can anything else
Become so fright'ningly real
As this moment has?

Posted by: blob Mar 22 2002, 12:51 PM
The battle is done
Surrender yourself to me
I'll consume your soul


We fought valiantly
but in the end we were felled
What shall be shall be


Posted by: Meagen Mar 22 2002, 01:31 PM
I guess a picture
does stand for a thousand words;
Most of them are "huh?".


Posted by: wilgabriel Mar 22 2002, 08:28 PM
Attacked by Miho
Draining Pirogoeth's life
Or is it a kiss?

Posted by: Fuchi Mar 22 2002, 08:37 PM
(My first haiku too..
Why am I drawn back here now?
Perhaps it's my fate..)

Is this the end...?
Miho-sama's victory...
Surely, we're not done.

<not-MT>Oddly enough, folks,
The evil is much too strong
for my human thought.

Perhaps I am not
nearly ready enough now
For the Endgames arc?</non-MT>

Posted by: Nekura_Rianu Mar 22 2002, 09:15 PM
*laughs* Damn, that's one hell of a Kirby dance. *thumbs up* Very well, you are forgiven wilgabriel...if you tell me what's up with that last Kirby. O_o?

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