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Posted by: Phaedrus Mar 20 2002, 10:49 AM
A moment of stillness.
The l33t one hears the sound of
one hampster, staring.

Posted by: masamage Mar 20 2002, 10:56 AM
Try to understand;
Quick, gather your composure;
Time to make a choice.

How does one react?
The evil one has fallen
Helpless on the floor.

Evil has failed her.
She is no longer a threat.
You have the power.

An android girl kneels.
I didn't know they could cry.
Conscience stares you down.

Look back to Ping-chan.
Her words are in a strange tongue,
But you understand.

"Gather the fallen."
Largo has chosen honor.
A battle has been won.

Posted by: Reflaxion Mar 20 2002, 10:58 AM
Largo won't accept
Victory without honor.
"Gather the fallen."

Posted by: ibmjones Mar 20 2002, 11:06 AM
compassion prevails
humanity has emerged
largo's pride remains

Posted by: Phaedrus Mar 20 2002, 11:08 AM
M4d h4x0r sk1lz are
meaningless without h0n0r.
He is the l33t one.

Posted by: kezra_cor Mar 20 2002, 11:19 AM
Ping runs to her friend
Tohya-san, please, please wake up
Her hand is so cold...

Tearful robot eyes
Sensei, you must do something
Do not let her die

What shall Largo do?
A hamstery stare responds
"Gather the fallen"

Posted by: masamage Mar 20 2002, 11:24 AM
Yay! I like yours!

Posted by: masamage Mar 20 2002, 11:31 AM
[!tanka]
From the distant floor,
Black eyes hold an earnest gaze;
Quite the picture of
Hampsterly nobility.
And your conscience stares you down.
[/!tanka]

Posted by: blob Mar 20 2002, 12:06 PM
[!haiku] Nicely done, kezra_cor! Number 2, there, gives me chills. Gorgeous. [/!haiku]

L33t Master Reacts
Aid from his conscience given
He did the right thing

Ping-chan, full of fear,
pleads with Largo for his aid
He understands her

--blob

Posted by: Rowan Bristol Mar 20 2002, 12:40 PM
Ping

Only one person
Who saw me as a true friend
and not from Sony

Junpei

A fearsome battle
cut short by reality
Please do the right thing

Boo

I know what's within.
You say you're just a gamer.
I know the hero.

Largo

Victory at last
Why does he look at me so?
This is not the way.

Posted by: lonebountyhunter Mar 20 2002, 12:52 PM
The field is silent.
The lone warrior stand above his foe.
But her wounds are not his.
And he is puzzled so.
So he has her picked up
By the Sential so tall,
And speaks words of kindess:
"|-|3r3 j00 //1|| ||()7 f4||."
The battle is not over,
for hornor still reign.
Upon the field of the school,
they shall fight again.

Posted by: ibmjones Mar 20 2002, 01:00 PM
The part about boo almost made me cry. . .

Ahem, anyway. . . . back to haikus. . .

Posted by: Rerrs Mar 20 2002, 01:43 PM
Evil zombie's health
Will not be her destruction
Ping's and Boo's pleads heard

Posted by: luckyrabbit Mar 20 2002, 03:12 PM
inspired by Dom's beautiful rant this morning

Miho, please wake up
Miho Tohya, please wake up
Miho, please wake up

Posted by: macloud Mar 20 2002, 03:33 PM
first attempt,so dont flambo me...
[ahem]
spurrd on by boo,
largo now make his choice,
honor over hollow victory.

Posted by: luckyrabbit Mar 20 2002, 03:57 PM
haiku syllable structure is 5-7-5

that is all

Posted by: Spoon-Mijit Mar 20 2002, 03:58 PM
Miho lies helpless
The l337 on3 has chosen
He has not failed her

Posted by: cola Mar 20 2002, 04:29 PM
tell largo that he
should change his mind; boo is
not just sexier

Posted by: NachoBoy Mar 20 2002, 07:44 PM
He is still playing.
"There is no victory here."
Ever the gamer.

-The Nacho

Posted by: Rowan Bristol Mar 21 2002, 12:27 AM
[!megatokyo]

Once in a blue moon
Rowan Bristol gets it right
Thank you for you thoughts

[/!megatokyo]


Posted by: luckyrabbit Mar 21 2002, 01:00 AM
Yeah, seriously, those were beautiful.

Posted by: Master Edward Mar 21 2002, 03:41 AM
[!haiku]Almost found haiku[haiku]

"Gather the fallen
An Ending without honor
I will not accept"

Posted by: Shinji Mar 21 2002, 03:58 AM
Megatokyo post
Masamage writes briliantly
A tear in my eye

Crazy are you all
Don't you know what time it is?
I will go sleep now

Posted by: macloud Mar 21 2002, 08:02 AM
oh hum,take two...
[ahem]
spurred on by his conscience,
largo must decide upon fallen mihos fate,
honor,or a hollow victory.

opinions?
p.s.-damn you rowan bristol,for doing some damn fine haiku-especially the boo one.

Posted by: ibmjones Mar 21 2002, 09:39 AM
Dude, it's syllables
five, seven, five, three text lines
try again, my friend.

Posted by: macloud Mar 21 2002, 09:44 AM
ARRGH!?![bangs head repeatably against desk]


Posted by: Daiko-chan Mar 21 2002, 11:21 AM
honorable one
l33t master Largo-san
he saved her life

darkly cute one
will you thank him he has
broken his world

Posted by: Firia Mar 21 2002, 03:12 PM
happy.gif hehehehe,
Funny little man.

Posted by: lonebountyhunter Mar 21 2002, 05:37 PM
is it safe to say that we all here on this post like Miho...or do we just like to make poems and bash our heads agaist solid objects?

Posted by: luckyrabbit Mar 21 2002, 06:02 PM
Lone Bounty Hunter,
I think we like to make poems
bash, AND like Miho

Posted by: kezra_cor Mar 21 2002, 08:36 PM
Wow, you responded
Thank you for the compliments
Glad you liked my words

Posted by: Rowan Bristol Mar 21 2002, 08:37 PM
neverwinter queen
simply a weak little girl
Rowan prays for her

Posted by: grasshopperKAT Mar 21 2002, 08:42 PM
*************
Try to understand;
Quick, gather your composure;
Time to make a choice.

How does one react?
The evil one has fallen
Helpless on the floor.

Evil has failed her.
She is no longer a threat.
You have the power.

An android girl kneels.
I didn't know they could cry.
Conscience stares you down.

Look back to Ping-chan.
Her words are in a strange tongue,
But you understand.
******************************************
snif,sniff,sniff *need tssues*
>Later
>>YOU ACTUALLY MADE ME CRY!
>>SO SAD
>>SO BEATIFUL
>>WRITE
>>MORE
>>PLEASE

PS:WHAT DID PING SAY?

DAMN YOU ! YOU DON'T MAKE DAMSELS CRY!

Posted by: cola Mar 21 2002, 11:50 PM
to pass an evening,
i wonder which one miho
meant was different

(i post a haiku
in the thread for haiku, even
though it's off topic

and i'm not picking
the strips at random! i picked
this coz of the smile.)

Posted by: masamage Mar 22 2002, 09:55 AM
Why thank you, grasshopper...*giggles* And there's another thread which explains exactly what Ping said, go find it. ^^;

Posted by: grasshopperKAT Mar 23 2002, 07:57 PM
*************
grasshopper...*giggles* And there's another ......
*************
sleep.gif; (sweatdrop)
Youre mean......You shouldn't laugh at people..
.
PS: I've found it and it didn't make any sense to me at all....

Posted by: Kai-San Mar 23 2002, 10:54 PM
Largo is the one
The L33t master
Chosen one of Pride

Piro, the einstein
Also the chosen one
The faith of all days

The star to be born
Kimiko must have courage
Confidence hides far

Ping must one day see
That she is real not a fake
For she walks the path.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
sorry if u dont like the haiku's took me like 15 minutes

Posted by: cola Mar 23 2002, 11:12 PM
ping speaks japanese
yet this foreign-language plea
needs no translation

Posted by: masamage Mar 25 2002, 02:57 PM
*sweatdrops* I wasn't laughing at you, I was giggling in a flattered manner.

You're quite sensitive.

Posted by: MTnikku Mar 25 2002, 03:11 PM
the heart of gamer
forever cold in battle,
forget not fallen

Posted by: Garran Mar 25 2002, 07:51 PM
I've heard this Dom rant
Lovely to inspire poets
Referred to before

Yet I've been away
And can't find it; did Largo
Overwrite again?

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