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Posted by: Phaedrus Mar 8 2002, 08:05 AM
Moral support with
just a bit of arm twisting.
Gan batte, Yuki!

Posted by: Rowan Bristol Mar 8 2002, 08:10 AM
True friendship comes forth
delighting in romance fun.
RUN, PIRO! RUN NOW!!!!!!

Posted by: account-removed-by-admins Mar 8 2002, 09:16 AM
Yuki meets Piro,
take two: will it work this time?
Let us wait and see...


Posted by: XkyRauh2001 Mar 8 2002, 09:24 AM
Xky is overjoy'd
to see Mami once again--
Crafty as ever!

--Xky *waving Mami flag delightedly* happy.gif

Posted by: Caesar Salad Mar 8 2002, 09:44 AM
Dare I even speak
Of their craftiness, so young?
Yes, ph34r the cute ones.

Posted by: pflorian Mar 8 2002, 11:08 AM
Sometimes you can fool
some of the people, but you
cannot fool Mami!

Posted by: luckyrabbit Mar 8 2002, 12:56 PM
Dom, Ed, demon
have come to torment piro
and now Yuki, FLEE!

Posted by: Zaphire Mar 8 2002, 01:27 PM
ah! *runs*

lol

Posted by: phoenix2006 Mar 8 2002, 02:35 PM
blarg.. ganbatte is either 6 or 7 syllables..

I wrote the following several weeks ago.. it has nothing to do with the topic:

It's windy outside
A lonely tree is dancing;
I hear no music.

Posted by: Tarquin Mar 8 2002, 05:49 PM
In reply to:

blarg.. ganbatte is either 6 or 7 syllables..


Three English syllables (gan-ba-te), four Japanese mora (ga-n-ba-tte). Maybe five, but I'm pretty sure small kana (like the small 'tsu' in the 'tte' part) don't get counted.

But this is a haiku thread, not haiku discussion, so:


I didn't love him,
I'll never see him again
...until after school.

Posted by: Phaedrus Mar 8 2002, 06:40 PM
[tanka]
This gaijin's ears,
two strangers in a strange land,
grok but three beats there.
In truth, I am but an egg;
teach my ears to hear these sounds?
[/tanka]

Posted by: JRandomLurker Mar 8 2002, 07:18 PM
innocent faces
explain their motivations
as bait for the trap

Posted by: Tarquin Mar 9 2002, 05:43 AM
(Warning: Shift-JIS encoded kana ahead)

ganbatte: work hard!
(Seraphim shows English beats)
kana written thus:

がんばって

I don't count small-tsu:
alone, it has no meaning.
Not sound, but lack of.

Posted by: Northwind Mar 9 2002, 11:24 AM
Unwilling Yuki,
Led by her friends, approaches.
A storm is coming.

Posted by: squee Mar 10 2002, 02:05 PM
Piro faces doom
set upon by two fangirls
Yuki dragged along.

Seraphim's leg brace
formerly in the closet
could be out again?

Posted by: blob Mar 11 2002, 12:24 PM
Young love is a game
Yuki's friends join in the fun
Better than shopping

Piro, unprepared
for the challenge he will meet--
beseiged by cute girls

--blob

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