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Megatokyo Forums > Story Discussions > Haiku: [232] Small Changes

Posted by: Phaedrus Mar 6 2002, 11:13 AM
Twilight character,
not sad, but oh so wistful.
Pencilled shades of grey.

Posted by: blob Mar 6 2002, 12:41 PM
She's a girl of greys
Kimiko brings her to life
Director unsure

Changes must be made
to suit talented seiyuu.
Oh, broken budget.

[!haiku] I'm sure that those who know some Japanese will argue that 'seiyuu' is not two syllables, but 'say-yoo' is how I pronounce it. Call it poetic license. [/!haiku]

Posted by: bunbun Mar 6 2002, 01:09 PM
Kimiko can see
The girl of nothing but grays.
Can the director?

Posted by: Meagen Mar 6 2002, 01:45 PM
see a girl of grays
see producers argue much
see laughing readers


Posted by: Caesar Salad Mar 6 2002, 01:46 PM
Kimiko does not
Realize how perfect she is:
Girl of greys herself.

Posted by: Rowan Bristol Mar 6 2002, 02:19 PM
Never knowing joy
Bleached out, empty inside her.
Kimiko's double.

Posted by: Northwind Mar 6 2002, 05:57 PM
Naught but grey is shown,
In this world where they're alone...
Two girls, monochrome.

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