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Posted by: Rowan Bristol Mar 4 2002, 01:33 AM
Cuddle the ninja
Devastate his self-image
Truly Darkly Cute

Posted by: bunbun Mar 4 2002, 01:38 AM
Miho's embrace more
powerful finishing move
than Largo's l33t skillz.

Posted by: cinder_bird Mar 4 2002, 08:45 AM
yes, fear my ninja
what's this? you fight back with a
hug? no! he has lost


Posted by: NachoBoy Mar 4 2002, 08:45 AM
Junpei, what a guy.
Hugged by the darkly cute one.
L337 lucky bastard.

-The Nacho
(A Junpei teddy bear. HA! By the way, Junpei is 2 syllables, right?)

Posted by: cinder_bird Mar 4 2002, 08:47 AM
Treat it that way.

Posted by: blob Mar 4 2002, 09:59 AM
Perhaps Miho does
feel like playing after all.
What a wicked smile.

Sw33t finishing move
It seems in this encounter
All but Largo win

--blob

Posted by: XkyRauh2001 Mar 4 2002, 10:44 AM
a hug and a smirk
otaku theories shattered
what will happen next?

--Xky *with Mami flag*

Posted by: Aeonus Mar 4 2002, 10:54 AM
L33t one stares in shock...
The powerful finisher
destroys the ninja

Posted by: luckyrabbit Mar 4 2002, 01:01 PM
Even when not playing
Miho is one step ahead
of the l337 master

Posted by: Northwind Mar 4 2002, 05:36 PM
No one can withstand
The Ultimate Finisher!
FLAWLESS VICTORY!

Posted by: Caesar Salad Mar 4 2002, 07:06 PM
I would quite gladly
Give up my very soul to
Be finished thusly.

Caesar, who is officially a Miho fanboy.

Posted by: melange Mar 5 2002, 02:50 AM
miho hugs junpei
largo's aghast expression
is that.. jealousy?

>XD

Posted by: Garran Mar 5 2002, 01:56 PM
Imposingly, he
Looms, but I can see that he
Is gentle inside

[!haiku]I don't think the third panel is given enough attention; the way Miho searches his eyes for a moment before making her move. It fascinates me.[/!haiku]

Posted by: Spoon-Mijit Mar 5 2002, 03:52 PM
Miho is playing
She hugs the l337 ninja
Largo is jealous

Posted by: Spoon-Mijit Mar 5 2002, 03:56 PM
Miho's little hug
Catches the ninja off guard
It turns him to jelly

Posted by: smurd Mar 6 2002, 09:39 AM
[kamatoto_no_tanka]

I am not afraid --
When I must, I'll face defeat.
Now I am dismayed,
In such manner to be beat --
I find defeat to be sweet.

[/kamatoto_no_tanka]

[!haiku]BTW, bunbun: junpei actually consists of 4 mora: ju - n - pe - i. But fear not, you will have noticed that in the matter of names we tend to cleave to Engrish pronounciation. To me the "rule" is: how does your intended audience perceive it? For most MT readers, definitely jun - pei.[/!haiku]

Posted by: bunbun Mar 6 2002, 12:45 PM
Um, my haiku did not include Junpei. It was:

Miho's embrace more
powerful finishing move
than Largo's l33t skillz.

I think Largo has 3 mora, but oh well.

I did not mention Junpei.

Posted by: Meagen Mar 6 2002, 01:51 PM
"Largo is jealous"

'Of whom?' asks Meagen
pauses for just a moment
then clutches her head

must beat self on head
with a large shovel of steel:
bad mental image!

Meagen

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