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Posted by: Rowan Bristol Feb 28 2002, 07:35 AM
Piro

A resolution
Piro sees what to do now
"My lord! Kanon Cards!"

Seraphim

A resolution
efforts rewarded at last
The Bastard returns

The Bastard

Fanboy Temptation
preverse lust wrapped in foil
Hey look! Seraphim!

[!Haiku]
Normally I just try to capture the whole moment in a single haiku, as I like the challenge. But this provided too many perspectives, and a chance to use the third stanza as a contrary point for all three. This may very well be my favorite strip to date. Piro falls like a knockoff garage kit..."All too Easy."

[/!haiku]

Posted by: luckyrabbit Feb 28 2002, 08:55 AM
And now tempation
has arrived, bearing Kanon
trading cards and doom

human nature will
always make bad assumtions
Get home soon, piro

Posted by: XkyRauh2001 Feb 28 2002, 10:01 AM
Piro bonks the desk
Seraphim meets an old foe
Now the fur will fly!

--Xky *with Mami flag*

Posted by: Caesar Salad Feb 28 2002, 10:12 AM
Oh Piro, please don't
fall for the ill-advisement
of your temptation.

Posted by: PMAvers Feb 28 2002, 10:28 AM
Piro finds new cards
Now observe as his savings
Go way of dodo.

(For the Sealab 2021 fans:)
Seriphan looks mad
And so pulls out her hammer.
Poke...poke...poke...poke...WHACK!

(First attempts at Haiku's in a while, gosh, forgot how hard it was at times. )

Posted by: Meagen Feb 28 2002, 02:00 PM
fiddling with settings
assaulted by vertical
lines: damn this printer

[non-haiku]

Gaaah... I'm trying to find some printer setting that will make MT print properly. First my scanner starts skipping lines, now this - hardware sucks.

[back to haiku]

Meagen

Posted by: blob Feb 28 2002, 03:40 PM
With best intentions,
Seraphim gives poor advice.
To thyself be true.

So easily swayed
by objects of heart's desire.
I can so relate.

A new nemesis.
Ev'ry character needs one--
even a conscience.

--blob

Posted by: bunbun Mar 2 2002, 01:10 AM
Piro has a choice:
Fantasy, Reality.
Face life or escape.

Posted by: bunbun Mar 2 2002, 01:15 AM
"Oh Piro, please don't
fall for the ill-advisement
of your temptation."

This is my favorite of the bunch.

Posted by: Caesar Salad Mar 2 2002, 01:22 AM
Why...why thank you.

Let's see. Name of bunbun...maybe someone I know from the Sluggy Boards...

Posted by: bunbun Mar 2 2002, 02:38 AM
I don't have a Sluggy board account, but my name is based on my favorite Sluggy Freelance character.

Miho and Bun-Bun: mysterious, powerful, and intimidating. I'm nothing like that in real life, really! Really!

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