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Posted by: kezra_cor Jan 25 2002, 02:14 AM
Actress prepares
Full of energy and life
Is this Kotone?

Kimiko says no
Her own interpretation
Which version is best?

Posted by: Rowan Bristol Jan 25 2002, 07:17 AM
genki girl sadness
this is not the real tale.
hush...let me hear this.

Posted by: Phaedrus Jan 25 2002, 07:30 AM
From within herself,
inspiration for the role.
A sad girl in show.

Posted by: Northwind Jan 25 2002, 07:35 AM
Genki? Full of life?
I think that she looks quite sad.
All she needs is snow.

EDIT: Drat. Phaedrus beat me to the "pun".

Posted by: Meagen Jan 25 2002, 07:38 AM
Kimiko reflects:
"happy? but she seems so sad..."
a subjective view

the inner torment
makes all the world around her
seem sad and lonely

Meagen

Posted by: smurd Jan 25 2002, 08:25 AM
Genki? A mask.
mono no aware is
her aware too.

Posted by: Falan Jan 25 2002, 10:35 AM
And again the taste
of sweet, bitter pain doth make
our hearts reach for her.

Posted by: Caesar Salad Jan 25 2002, 12:45 PM
Sweet Kimiko; to
Find the voice of the girl, first
She must find her voice.

Posted by: vorkon Jan 25 2002, 01:02 PM
Who can know the voice
Of a girl seen in a glimpse?
Himitsu Desu

Himitsu Desu
Kimiko gives her a voice
The secret revealed.

[prose]
Well, considering that Piro's finally revealed the secret "character" he's been teasing us with, and Himitsu Desu has five syllables, I'm surprised I'm the first one to use it...
[/prose]

Posted by: Falan Jan 25 2002, 02:28 PM
*blink* Secret character?

Posted by: smurd Jan 25 2002, 02:53 PM
[!haiku]
himitsu desu = lit. "is [a] secret"
[!haiku]

Posted by: masamage Jan 25 2002, 05:13 PM
Ne...look here.

Posted by: Phaedrus Jan 25 2002, 07:15 PM
I just can't help it;
she's so cute in panel five.
Fanboy once again.

Posted by: vorkon Jan 25 2002, 09:27 PM
In reply to:

[!haiku]
himitsu desu = lit. "is [a] secret"
[!haiku]




You do not need to
Tell that to a "Slayers" Fan!
I worship Xellos!

[!haiku]
Naturally, I know that. Hence the constant references to a secret in those haikus. "Himitsu Desu" just happens to be the title of the concept art peices of Kotone that Piro's put up on Fredart to tease us poor, loyal, trusting fans, so how could I avoid using it once she finally put in an appearance?
[/!haiku]

Posted by: ELT Jan 25 2002, 10:00 PM
Sensitive soul
Kimiko breathes life
Kotone lives

Posted by: The T Jan 25 2002, 10:19 PM

Kotone, Genki
And cheerful? Kimiko
feels different though

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