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Posted by: Phaedrus Nov 28 2001, 05:02 AM
She knows each weakness:
"More real to you than I am?"
A palpable hit.

Posted by: Phaedrus Nov 28 2001, 05:05 AM
Largo is dreaming:
zombies slain, then just reward.
Needs a cold shower.

Posted by: Glump Nov 28 2001, 05:35 AM
She smiles as she asks
Like she has some secret joke
Something about her

Evokes something that
I haven't felt for a long time
I don't understand

But I might begin
To - My reality bends
Accomodating

Her; and I know you
I know you from somewhere; we've
Talked like this before

I've known this before
But this is too profound to
Be grasped at once; an
Uncertain syllable slips
Out as I stare, and... Oh my.

Ugh.

Well, that sure broke the mood.


[hmm]
I wonder if I managed what I wanted with this? I'll look at it tomorrow.
[/hmm]


Posted by: LordZox Nov 28 2001, 05:57 AM
A robot girl wakes,
Does Largo's metal blanket
Come from Ping-chan's bed?

Zox


Posted by: Rowan Bristol Nov 28 2001, 07:09 AM
A strike at friendship
strange question filled with promise
Largo masturbates

[!haiku] okay, this is a dark day. Not only is this the most disgusting haiku I've written, but this is also the most disgusting episode of megatokyo I've ever seen. I wish i could stop laughing so hard, as it's putting a crimp at the offense i'm taking. So now a nice haiku to wash out the taste in my mouth[/!haiku]

Yuki's so sweet
The image of shojo angst
Largo masturbates

[!haiku] Dammit! dammit dammit dammit!!!!!!! [/!haiku]


Posted by: pflorian Nov 28 2001, 08:32 AM
What is real, what's not?
Here's a thought to think about!
They're all fictional.

Posted by: Phaedrus Nov 28 2001, 09:33 AM
quote:
Originally posted by Paul Floriani:
What is real, what's not?
Here's a thought to think about!
They're all fictional.

I think the problem
is that Largo is trying
to be fRictional.

(ducking for cover)


Posted by: Northwind Nov 28 2001, 10:20 AM
quote:
Originally posted by Phaedrus:
I think the problem
is that Largo is trying
to be fRictional.

(ducking for cover)


<PROSE>
Last panel.
</PROSE>

<TANKA>
Lovely as the dawn,
Mysterious as the dusk,
Miho smiles, thinking;
Pond'ring to herself, about
Robots and reality.
</TANKA>

<HAIKU>
When Largo detects
3vi1 in sleep, one should not
Ask, "Wet Dreams May Come"?
</HAIKU>

<PROSE>
With apologies to the immortal Bard of Avon, for desecrating even the smallest fraction of his work in such a horrible pun:

To be, or not to be,--that is the question:--
Whether 'tis nobler in the mind to suffer
The slings and arrows of outrageous fortune,
Or to take arms against a sea of troubles,
And by opposing end them?--To die,--To sleep,--
No more; and by a sleep to say we end
The heart-ache, and the thousand natural shocks
That flesh is heir to, 'tis a consummation
Devoutly to be wisht. To die,--to sleep;--
To sleep! perchance to dream: ay, there's the rub;
For in that sleep of death what dreams may come...
</PROSE>

EDIT: Messed up the meter on one line.

[ November 28, 2001: Message edited by: Divinewind ]


Posted by: The False Hoturi Nov 28 2001, 11:31 AM
quote:

Originally posted by Phaedrus:
I think the problem
is that Largo is trying
to be fRictional.

(ducking for cover)


[praise haiku]
Sir Phaedrus, your
Haiku had me laughing on
The floor. Excellent!
[/praise haiku]

[comic haiku]
While Ping-chan changes,
Miho asks Piro questions.
Largo is exposed.
[/comic haiku]

(edit: Clicked 'Add Reply' button just as I saw a mistake. Oh well.)

[ November 28, 2001: Message edited by: The False Hoturi ]


Posted by: Traks Nov 28 2001, 02:31 PM
Largo, Naughty boy.
Third Panel Miho art=poor
Joke makes up for it

Posted by: oneechan19 Nov 28 2001, 04:03 PM
Miho, zombie queen
Piro, clueless 'bout girls fanboy
Largo, no comment

And where is Miss Ping?
She tosses everyone outside
"Wai!" Where is her skirt?


Posted by: JRandomLurker Nov 28 2001, 11:37 PM
Eastern sky glows red.
Largo, still lost in the night,
raises a full moon.

[Edit]better phrasing is all[/Edit]

[ November 29, 2001: Message edited by: J Random Lurker ]


Posted by: kiten Nov 30 2001, 12:09 AM
quote:
Originally posted by J Random Lurker:
Eastern sky glows red.
Largo, still lost in the night,
raises a full moon.

[Edit]better phrasing is all[/Edit]

[ November 29, 2001: Message edited by: J Random Lurker ]


Agh! I can't write Haiku, but this one really had me laughing! Nice one!


Posted by: Northwind Nov 29 2001, 08:57 PM
quote:
Originally posted by J Random Lurker:
[QB]Eastern sky glows red.
Largo, still lost in the night,
raises a full moon.
[/B]

Very nicely done, sir! Good imagery, and a punchline to boot!


Posted by: Azuki Nov 29 2001, 09:17 PM
Link: RPGWorld
Perhaps thou meant this one?
The correct comic?

Largo's role is clear
Piro's other reason to
Turn a vivid red


Posted by: JRandomLurker Nov 29 2001, 09:53 PM
Divinewind, kiten, domo arigato! happy.gif

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