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|Posted by: Phaedrus Nov 28 2001, 05:02 AM|
| She knows each weakness:
"More real to you than I am?"
A palpable hit.
|Posted by: Phaedrus Nov 28 2001, 05:05 AM|
| Largo is dreaming:
zombies slain, then just reward.
Needs a cold shower.
|Posted by: Glump Nov 28 2001, 05:35 AM|
| She smiles as she asks
Like she has some secret joke
Something about her
Evokes something that
But I might begin
Her; and I know you
I've known this before
Well, that sure broke the mood.
|Posted by: LordZox Nov 28 2001, 05:57 AM|
| A robot girl wakes,
Does Largo's metal blanket
Come from Ping-chan's bed?
|Posted by: Rowan Bristol Nov 28 2001, 07:09 AM|
| A strike at friendship
strange question filled with promise
[!haiku] okay, this is a dark day. Not only is this the most disgusting haiku I've written, but this is also the most disgusting episode of megatokyo I've ever seen. I wish i could stop laughing so hard, as it's putting a crimp at the offense i'm taking. So now a nice haiku to wash out the taste in my mouth[/!haiku]
Yuki's so sweet
[!haiku] Dammit! dammit dammit dammit!!!!!!! [/!haiku]
|Posted by: pflorian Nov 28 2001, 08:32 AM|
| What is real, what's not?
Here's a thought to think about!
They're all fictional.
|Posted by: Phaedrus Nov 28 2001, 09:33 AM|
I think the problem
(ducking for cover)
|Posted by: Northwind Nov 28 2001, 10:20 AM|
To be, or not to be,--that is the question:--
EDIT: Messed up the meter on one line.
[ November 28, 2001: Message edited by: Divinewind ]
|Posted by: The False Hoturi Nov 28 2001, 11:31 AM|
(edit: Clicked 'Add Reply' button just as I saw a mistake. Oh well.)
[ November 28, 2001: Message edited by: The False Hoturi ]
|Posted by: Traks Nov 28 2001, 02:31 PM|
| Largo, Naughty boy.
Third Panel Miho art=poor
Joke makes up for it
|Posted by: oneechan19 Nov 28 2001, 04:03 PM|
| Miho, zombie queen
Piro, clueless 'bout girls fanboy
Largo, no comment
And where is Miss Ping?
|Posted by: JRandomLurker Nov 28 2001, 11:37 PM|
| Eastern sky glows red.
Largo, still lost in the night,
raises a full moon.
[Edit]better phrasing is all[/Edit]
[ November 29, 2001: Message edited by: J Random Lurker ]
|Posted by: kiten Nov 30 2001, 12:09 AM|
Agh! I can't write Haiku, but this one really had me laughing! Nice one!
|Posted by: Northwind Nov 29 2001, 08:57 PM|
Very nicely done, sir! Good imagery, and a punchline to boot!
|Posted by: Azuki Nov 29 2001, 09:17 PM|
| Link: RPGWorld
Perhaps thou meant this one?
The correct comic?
Largo's role is clear
|Posted by: JRandomLurker Nov 29 2001, 09:53 PM|
|Divinewind, kiten, domo arigato!|