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Posted by: Justy-san Nov 14 2001, 10:48 AM
teenage girl's dark stare
reflects off mirrored door
melting tokyo

here i sit in wait
placeholder will vanish soon
replaced with new page

coffee break over
much email now to answer
oh how i hate work


Posted by: Phaedrus Nov 15 2001, 12:40 AM
Hi-rez Kimiko -
More bits means we're closer in.
Can she hear my heart?

Posted by: smurd Nov 14 2001, 01:27 PM
I hope so, Phaedrus.
At this distance, she is close --
enough to smell me.

Posted by: Rowan Bristol Nov 14 2001, 01:31 PM
Revisitation
bland gaze hides a broken heart
Ren'ai misery

[ November 14, 2001: Message edited by: Rowan Bristol ]


Posted by: Justy-san Nov 14 2001, 03:27 PM
lovely kimiko
i am glad i bought your shirt
before it got pulled

must be careful now
must not damage M.T. shirt
can not be replaced

lovely kimiko
product of the master's pen
piro piro wai


Posted by: Kojiro Takenashi Nov 14 2001, 05:36 PM
Forlorn Kimiko
So sweet, oh so sensitive
Will her faith return?

Posted by: Wavehawk Nov 14 2001, 06:36 PM
The morning-glories haven't looked
quite as beautiful
As the way she does to-day, hn?

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