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Megatokyo Forums > Story Discussions > haiku: [192] omake: lazy piro and his laptop


Posted by: Phaedrus Nov 12 2001, 05:04 AM
Omake Haiku:

Laptop did not help.

[ November 12, 2001: Message edited by: Phaedrus ]


Posted by: Rowan Bristol Nov 12 2001, 06:02 AM
Piro so happy
laptop won't complicate things!
Shut up now, Piro

Posted by: Erica Nov 12 2001, 06:10 AM
Comic makes no sense
Piro did not make whole strip
Maybe the next time?

Piro overjoyed
Can't shut up about laptop
Seraphim annoyed


Posted by: O.P. Nov 12 2001, 06:57 AM
Lazy Haiku Day
Seraphim yells at Piro
That, my friends, is all

Posted by: smurd Nov 12 2001, 08:01 AM
quote:
Originally posted by Erica:
Comic makes no sense
Piro did not make whole strip
Maybe the next time?

The frame is empty:
even a simple background
requires an effort.

It's easy this way:
It's his day off from effort
So he gives us air.


Posted by: Echo Nov 12 2001, 08:10 AM
Unused muscles strain
to accomodate the mood--
that smile is so huge!

Posted by: The False Hoturi Nov 12 2001, 09:16 AM
Piro hugs laptop
maniac grin on his face.
Seraphim still irked.

[!haiku]Not sure I like this one, but lack of sleep has my mind (and my muse) fumbling around in the dark. Before I head off to rest my twin m's, I was wondering why the thread title has #102 in the title, when the comic is # 192. Typo, maybe?[/!haiku]


Posted by: Phaedrus Nov 12 2001, 09:21 AM
A typo it was,
but I find it can be fixed.
Thought that you couldn't!

Posted by: Phaedrus Nov 12 2001, 10:55 AM
Seraphim's busy -
could you be happy elsewhere?
It cramps her cram style.

Posted by: squee Nov 12 2001, 01:44 PM
McJagger is pleased,
a smile like piro's is rare,
reminds fans of him

Posted by: AkilikaQ Nov 12 2001, 02:45 PM
Many hours and days
Finally, he goes to rest
Return to the seat

Wingless angels sigh,
Exasperation coming;
Mortal, let me be


Posted by: Glump Nov 12 2001, 03:21 PM
Joy alights for a
Moment on the face of our
Beleaguered artist

Soon, though, he will find
What it is that Seraphim's
So grumpy about -

"I have no fingers,
And I must type!" - New chapter
Title idea?

[ November 12, 2001: Message edited by: Garran ]


Posted by: Phaedrus Nov 12 2001, 04:14 PM
Garran astounds us
with seventies new wave ref.
That story r0xx0rs!

For Largo, maybe
Dangerous Collisions or
perhaps, The Class L33t?


Posted by: cola Nov 13 2001, 05:12 AM
quote:
Originally posted by Garran:
"I have no fingers,
And I must type!" - New chapter
Title idea?



No fingers, no keys;
Poor Seraphim can't work, and
Because of Piro.

Posted by: Justy-san Nov 13 2001, 10:49 AM
no story today,
piro plays with laptop, yet
i am happy still

foolish is the man
who bugs Piro for such days!
nice guy draws for us

go forth, piro-san!
with your big charlie brown smile
enjoy your new toy


Posted by: Kojiro Takenashi Nov 13 2001, 08:58 PM
Piro Piro Wai
Happy smile, warming my heart
Happiness for all.

Posted by: Justy-san Nov 13 2001, 09:25 PM
Piro Piro Wai
Piro Piro Wai Wai Wai
Wai, Piro, Wai. Yosh!

Posted by: Amplimax Nov 14 2001, 12:03 AM
Piro happy - yay!
Big oversized grin, good thing.
Spread the joy, Piro!

Running down street, now.
Piro screams with glee, "Oh boy!"
Shows laptop to all.

Big thug mugs Piro
I come out of nowhere, fast.
Kick gangster's arse hard

Return Piro's comp.
Network for quick quake tourney,
Now I'm happy too!


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