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Posted by: UberXenon Sep 30 2001, 09:59 PM
Lurker emerges,
tries hand at this haiku thing.
Well, here goes nuthin'!

WHAM! CRUNCH! CRINKLE! FZZZZZT!
MMR goes up in flames!
Ping? Largo? Okay?

[!haiku]
I'm guessing that 'FZZZZZZT!' is one syllable happy.gif;
[/!haiku]


Posted by: melange Sep 30 2001, 10:55 PM
contest goes awry
frail dark maiden shoved about
piro enters scene

Posted by: O.P. Oct 1 2001, 03:13 AM
Mosh ends in head-bang
Sounds of riot bring Piro
Miho nearly crushed

Posted by: Vaevictis Oct 1 2001, 04:02 AM
The MMR match
Ends with a bang, Largo's head
Must be pretty tough!

Piro enters; Miho
Is nearly crushed in the throng
Of running gamers

She takes a moment
Who is that person talking
Of my enemy?

L33T D00D commends the
U83RL33T Largo, but warns
Against headslamming


Posted by: Phaedrus Oct 1 2001, 06:42 AM
Gamer to the core
he always has a spare limb.
This time, his forehead.

***

Xenon, O P, Hi!
Welcome to this haiku fest.
Give us more verses!

Fanboy would tell you
that you count two: "fzzzzzt" and "bang"
He'll deny it now.


Posted by: Phaedrus Oct 1 2001, 06:44 AM
Piro meets Miho -
did reality just slip?
She looks cuter now.

Posted by: Glump Oct 1 2001, 07:25 AM
(Composed these last night
But when I tried to post them
My internet broke x.x)

The words with which I
Yearn, now, to utter the thoughts
Miho's eyes invoke

Are like a prison
Built for a firefly, hoping
To capture the stars


Posted by: UberXenon Oct 1 2001, 08:41 AM
Miho's eyes, lovely!
Opened wide, f4nb0is go wild!
First butt-shots, now this?

What's that sound you hear?
The sound of realities
colliding, oh my!

What does the future
hold? The revelation of
Miho's true nature?

Only time will tell.
Meanwhile, wait patiently for
next strip, if you can!

Phaedrus, it is nice
to be welcomed by such a
long time haiku guy!


Posted by: Nakamura Oct 1 2001, 12:48 PM
Largo falls, breaks screen,
Bang! The lights go out, Riot
How was that wired?

People run away,
Miho is caught in the fray.
Is Ping-chan alright?

Piro sees riot
Obviously Largo's here
What did he do now?

<edit>
My timing was wrong.
Therefore I have made amends
I have re-written.
</edit>

[ October 01, 2001: Message edited by: Nakamura ]


Posted by: Nakamura Oct 1 2001, 01:00 PM
How interesting,
Last lines of my three haikus,
They are all questions.

I just noticed that,
It was not intentional,
Wonders how that is.


Posted by: Traks Oct 1 2001, 02:30 PM
Miho? You alright?
And, hey, what's up with the look?
Shaken by riots?

Posted by: rsg_6100 Oct 1 2001, 03:01 PM
mosh mosh mosh mosh mosh
mosh mosh mosh mosh mosh mosh mosh
mosh mosh mosh mosh mosh

Posted by: mezlaq Oct 1 2001, 03:32 PM
Why the head-banging?
Largo could have 0//nz3d without.
Now Miho's wounded!

Speaking of Miho
Now I see why fanboys rave
Extremely Kawaii!

Back at the arcade:
constantly l33tsp34king d00d
helps decide winner?

Haikus sounding drunk.
Far too late at night to post.
Must hear Linkin Park

***

Greetings to the n00bz
I'm not a n00b myself, see.
This is second time.


Posted by: Vaevictis Oct 1 2001, 07:19 PM
[off-topic]
This, I cannot take
For all I am saying now
I have said before.

All these words, little
Sense do they make. My bliss comes
From my ignorance.

The less I hear, the
Less you'll say, but you will find
That out anyways.
[/off-topic]

Apologies to Linkin Park happy.gif


Posted by: snow_cheetah Oct 1 2001, 08:40 PM
hi hi

die hard largo falls
undead miho tumbles down
piro threatens death

karl
(aka the snow cheetah)


Posted by: Glump Oct 1 2001, 10:44 PM
Faithful haiku fans
I think that this has come far
'Nough along to show

So I now present
The infant haiku archives -
What do you all think?

(Keep in mind that this
Like much art, is very much
A work in progress happy.gif;;)

Edit - Curses! I'll
Get you yet, instinct to link
In HTML!

[ October 01, 2001: Message edited by: Garran ]


Posted by: Master Edward Oct 2 2001, 01:45 AM
Garran, great idea
to collect the old haiku
all in one place!

Posted by: Phaedrus Oct 2 2001, 05:07 AM
I pledge my weak skilz
at text-maiming to Garran's
archival effort.

Yet my bleeding eyes
ask - is there a better way?
A Perl hack, mayhaps?

This one's meager skilz
do not bend code well. Is there
a tool forger here?


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