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Posted by: Phaedrus Aug 15 2001, 02:47 AM
Startled, sidewise look.
I wonder what she's seeing?
Those eyes - they haunt me.

Posted by: Phaedrus Aug 15 2001, 03:08 AM
Piro sees it too.
What draws their eyes? Who lurks there?
We will never know.

Posted by: Phaedrus Aug 15 2001, 03:13 AM
Whose reality
intrudes? Some nameless dread, or
a rival lover?

Posted by: Traks Aug 15 2001, 03:36 AM
More pretty colors.
I really don't think that girl
looks like Kimiko.

Posted by: Master Edward Aug 15 2001, 03:55 AM
Kimiko it is
First stab at MT haiku
hope I got it right

Posted by: Vaevictis Aug 15 2001, 01:00 PM
Hello and welcome
Master Edward, stay and write
Some haiku with us

Enchanting image
Something draws their attention
Piro seems nonplussed

Kimiko, startled
Doesn't matter what she does
Always Kawaii

I must have posters!
Hoping they will be out soon
I'll buy both of them!


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