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Posted by: affert Jul 26 2001, 06:48 AM
Ping can't find Largo
as she searches, pole in hand.
<and then... And then...> What?

Largo seizes his
new career as a teacher.
"Ph33r not."? They SHOULD fear!

Bare chested Largo
makes plans to weed out evil,
or at least, play Quake.

Poor girl misses clothes.
What will she do without her
uniform to wear?

Miho, Ping, Largo
All together at a school:
How will it survive?


Posted by: jamboy Jul 26 2001, 07:35 AM
Ah, Ping-chan, so cute
In borrowed fuku. Beware:
Smile conceals danger!

Destruction in white,
Battery fully charged, she strolls,
Humming, down the hall.


Posted by: affert Jul 26 2001, 08:38 AM
Unsure: has Ping-chan
forgiven Largo, or does
she still seek revenge?

Real life Piro writes
without providing easy
answers. We wonder.

What does Yuki want
to ask? Is Ping still angry?
Will Largo teach well?

We must still stay in
the beautiful ignorance
waiting to read more.

[/haiku] keep up the good work Piro!


Posted by: Traks Jul 26 2001, 08:54 AM
Damn it all to hell.
Can't stand waiting. Tomorrow?
Shirt Guy Dom Friday.

Posted by: jamboy Jul 26 2001, 09:50 AM
Don't say things like that!
You will jinx us all, for sure!
Shirt-Guy-Dom day? Aaargh!


Posted by: jamboy Jul 26 2001, 10:01 AM
Can anyone read
What it says on Ping's head-thing?
Work monitors suck.

Posted by: Echo Jul 26 2001, 11:01 PM
Ah! Ping! Much better!
Rage doesn't suit your nature
so well as 'fuku'.

If only she could be
Yuki's classmate in this school...
perhaps I'm foolish.

Doubtless she will meet
Miho sooner or later...
strange orbits at play.


Posted by: Traks Jul 26 2001, 11:50 PM
The "wait." It is ex-
cruciating. Need something
better to do, now.

Posted by: Shoggoth Jul 26 2001, 12:45 PM
quote:
Originally posted by JamBoy:
Can anyone read
What it says on Ping's head-thing?
Work monitors suck.

I do not know, but
I wish I did, for it might
Explain much of strip!


Posted by: affert Jul 27 2001, 07:03 AM
I do believe it
says "Dynamic [blured] Select".
"~DE" in middle?

Alas, I cannot
read the middle fuzzy word.
starts with 'M' or 'H'?

Perhaps Piro could
enlighten us as to what
the mystery word says.


Posted by: jamboy Jul 27 2001, 01:41 PM
I think it says Mode,
So "Dynamic Mode Select".
That seems to make sense.

For the second line,
I cannot make out a thing.
That one has me stumped.


Posted by: Traks Jul 28 2001, 11:17 PM
I must say, at this
point, a Shirt Guy Dom strip would
be very welcome.

Posted by: lar Jul 28 2001, 12:04 PM
quote:
Originally posted by Traks:
I must say, at this
point, a Shirt Guy Dom strip would
be very welcome.

Can you tell us why?
The plot twists have really got
me on tenterhooks!


Posted by: Syao-chan Jul 28 2001, 12:09 PM
quote:
Originally posted by Just another fanboy:
Can you tell us why?
The plot twists have really got
me on tenterhooks!

It happened before
And it could happen again
That's my conjecture


Posted by: Simulacrum Jul 28 2001, 03:38 PM
Can't... think... of haiku...
Perhaps my brain needs some juice?
A nice cup of Coke.

Posted by: Phaedrus Jul 29 2001, 04:08 PM
Largo-sensei must
himself learn a lesson: ph34r
the fuku-clad ones.

Posted by: Traks Jul 30 2001, 07:27 PM
Saraphim! So cute.
The glasses are a nice touch.
Thank god for Fredart.

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