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|Posted by: Captain Button Feb 27 2007, 05:13 PM|
| Disturbingly cute
Laughing genki death pixie
Happy fun gun time
|Posted by: Rapierman Feb 27 2007, 05:57 PM|
| Beware of the rose.
In the beauty lies danger.
A handful of thorns.
|Posted by: 2010digitalboy Feb 27 2007, 06:04 PM|
| Demon expression
I will giggle as you cry
Just like that emo guy
Referring to Largo in the background
|Posted by: M1l-l0i5C00l Feb 27 2007, 08:38 PM|
|OMG 2007digitalboy WINS!! XD XD|
|Posted by: FreezingFire Feb 27 2007, 08:55 PM|
| Cutesy Piroko.
Why is she smiling? Oh God!
We're all gonna die!
Ya, that one isn't very good...
While cute, disturbing.
Complaints led to a rescript.
Now: "Booga Booga!"
Hmm... that one isn't very good either... I like 2007digitalboy's as well (even though the last line has 6 syllables).
|Posted by: L337 M4573R 0F DR460N5 Feb 27 2007, 09:47 PM|
| is that a challenge!? (enters drammatically!)
As they smile with joy,
The girl plans to destroy one,
But which little boy?
how was that?
|Posted by: FreezingFire Feb 27 2007, 11:43 PM|
| wow, you almost had two haikus there:
"is that a challenge!?
(clears throat...) ahem,"
It's one syllable short in the last line.
|Posted by: L337 M4573R 0F DR460N5 Feb 28 2007, 12:05 PM|
|Actually the beginning is actually me entering the forum, its not supposed to be a haiku but thats cool ill try to fix it so that it is a haiku though.|