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Posted by: Captain Button Feb 27 2007, 05:13 PM
Disturbingly cute
Laughing genki death pixie
Happy fun gun time

Posted by: Rapierman Feb 27 2007, 05:57 PM
Beware of the rose.
In the beauty lies danger.
A handful of thorns.

Posted by: 2010digitalboy Feb 27 2007, 06:04 PM
Demon expression
I will giggle as you cry
Just like that emo guy

Referring to Largo in the background

Posted by: M1l-l0i5C00l Feb 27 2007, 08:38 PM
OMG 2007digitalboy WINS!! XD XD

Posted by: FreezingFire Feb 27 2007, 08:55 PM
Cutesy Piroko. wub.gif
Why is she smiling? huh.gif Oh God! blink.gif
We're all gonna die! ph34r.gif

Ya, that one isn't very good...

While cute, disturbing.
Complaints led to a rescript.
Now: "Booga Booga!" laugh.gif

Hmm... that one isn't very good either... I like 2007digitalboy's as well (even though the last line has 6 syllables).

Posted by: L337 M4573R 0F DR460N5 Feb 27 2007, 09:47 PM
is that a challenge!? (enters drammatically!)
(clears throat...)
ahem,

As they smile with joy, laugh.gif
The girl plans to destroy one, ph34r.gif
But which little boy? ninjanatsD.gif


how was that?

Posted by: FreezingFire Feb 27 2007, 11:43 PM
wow, you almost had two haikus there:

"is that a challenge!?
(enters drammatically!)
(clears throat...) ahem,"

It's one syllable short in the last line. wacko.gif laugh.gif

Posted by: L337 M4573R 0F DR460N5 Feb 28 2007, 12:05 PM
Actually the beginning is actually me entering the forum, its not supposed to be a haiku but thats cool ill try to fix it so that it is a haiku though. happy.gif

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