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Posted by: Ningen Feb 12 2007, 12:34 PM
Step softly, Ping-chan
Kimizilla has her prize
Don't disturb the bear!

(Edit - typo)

Posted by: klassh Feb 12 2007, 12:49 PM
Did she have a chance
Loves not waisted on machines
It's time to move on

(first haiku I ever wrote, hope its ok)

Posted by: TibbyMSTie Feb 12 2007, 01:02 PM
Sad eyes glistening
Don't cry Ping, he's happy now
Love will find you soon...

Posted by: Captain Button Feb 12 2007, 01:03 PM
Two hearts are sleeping
Who will be only for me?
One heart is breaking

Posted by: darrin Feb 12 2007, 01:05 PM
Glad for them, yet sad;
Thick rainclouds are drifting in,
But I won't cry here.

Posted by: Shoka Feb 12 2007, 02:42 PM
Through emotional whirpools they churned,
And a sleepless night for both concerned;
And although it was rough,
They look peaceful enough,
For a pair who have just crashed and burned.

Posted by: 2010digitalboy Feb 12 2007, 02:46 PM
Fighting back the tears
When your love abandons you
And your world crumbles

Posted by: The One_(part2) Feb 12 2007, 02:55 PM
Is my 'heart' a toy?
Something to be tossed aside?
I think they think so...

Posted by: BoscoTheRat Feb 12 2007, 02:58 PM
Hm... I've haiku'd before, but I can't say I've done anything but lurk. I kinda took some liberties as to sounds going on... *shrug*

Creep up silently,
Thinks she should be quiet, but...
Man, those two can snore.

Posted by: biscuit Feb 12 2007, 03:02 PM
...Right. My first haiku. *babyface*

Bear is overjoyed,
The two humans are in love!
He watches, entranced.

(lol, that sucked.)

Posted by: jbrecken Feb 12 2007, 03:09 PM
While android tiptoes,
Exhausted couple slumbers.
Someone needs a hug.

Posted by: FreezingFire Feb 12 2007, 03:22 PM
The sun sinks, declines.
So too does the heart of the
mechanical girl.

Hearts entwine tonight
A man, woman, and robot.
Ping's choice is painful.

Posted by: Rapierman Feb 12 2007, 04:55 PM
Sacrificed the heart
for a Norman Rockwell time
written in their dreams.

But when will my turn come next?
Am I destined for no love?

Posted by: Zahooee Feb 12 2007, 05:07 PM
Lovers slumbering
When can I find my own love? -
Has it been stolen?

Posted by: Haldane Feb 13 2007, 07:56 AM
How do lovers sleep
While my heart does gently weep?
Where's my love to keep?

I would bid them sweetest peace
If my pain could only cease.

[cmt] I suspect that Haiku will never be a rhymed form. [/cmt]

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