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|Posted by: Ningen Feb 12 2007, 12:34 PM|
| Step softly, Ping-chan
Kimizilla has her prize
Don't disturb the bear!
(Edit - typo)
|Posted by: klassh Feb 12 2007, 12:49 PM|
| Did she have a chance
Loves not waisted on machines
It's time to move on
(first haiku I ever wrote, hope its ok)
|Posted by: TibbyMSTie Feb 12 2007, 01:02 PM|
| Sad eyes glistening
Don't cry Ping, he's happy now
Love will find you soon...
|Posted by: Captain Button Feb 12 2007, 01:03 PM|
| Two hearts are sleeping
Who will be only for me?
One heart is breaking
|Posted by: darrin Feb 12 2007, 01:05 PM|
| Glad for them, yet sad;
Thick rainclouds are drifting in,
But I won't cry here.
|Posted by: Shoka Feb 12 2007, 02:42 PM|
Through emotional whirpools they churned,
And a sleepless night for both concerned;
And although it was rough,
They look peaceful enough,
For a pair who have just crashed and burned.
|Posted by: 2010digitalboy Feb 12 2007, 02:46 PM|
| Fighting back the tears
When your love abandons you
And your world crumbles
|Posted by: The One_(part2) Feb 12 2007, 02:55 PM|
| Is my 'heart' a toy?
Something to be tossed aside?
I think they think so...
|Posted by: BoscoTheRat Feb 12 2007, 02:58 PM|
| Hm... I've haiku'd before, but I can't say I've done anything but lurk. I kinda took some liberties as to sounds going on... *shrug*
Creep up silently,
Thinks she should be quiet, but...
Man, those two can snore.
|Posted by: biscuit Feb 12 2007, 03:02 PM|
| ...Right. My first haiku. *babyface*
Bear is overjoyed,
The two humans are in love!
He watches, entranced.
(lol, that sucked.)
|Posted by: jbrecken Feb 12 2007, 03:09 PM|
| While android tiptoes,
Exhausted couple slumbers.
Someone needs a hug.
|Posted by: FreezingFire Feb 12 2007, 03:22 PM|
| The sun sinks, declines.
So too does the heart of the
Hearts entwine tonight
A man, woman, and robot.
Ping's choice is painful.
|Posted by: Rapierman Feb 12 2007, 04:55 PM|
| Sacrificed the heart
for a Norman Rockwell time
written in their dreams.
But when will my turn come next?
Am I destined for no love?
|Posted by: Zahooee Feb 12 2007, 05:07 PM|
| Lovers slumbering
When can I find my own love? -
Has it been stolen?
|Posted by: Haldane Feb 13 2007, 07:56 AM|
| How do lovers sleep
While my heart does gently weep?
Where's my love to keep?
I would bid them sweetest peace
If my pain could only cease.
[cmt] I suspect that Haiku will never be a rhymed form. [/cmt]