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|Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Feb 9 2007, 12:52 PM|
| Distracted duo?
Trust not in what you can see
|Posted by: TheHarbinger Feb 9 2007, 01:19 PM|
Where did they go now?
I will 0wnz0r them quickly
before plotting more.
|Posted by: FreezingFire Feb 9 2007, 01:53 PM|
| What Dom is thinking:
I plan to get them,
but not how they expected.
Let it begin. BANG!
And after the shots have been fired:
To quote Will Riker:
"Pinocchio is broken,
its strings have been cut."
True warriors say
"It is a good day to die."
But WE will respawn.
Why am I remembering stuff from Star Trek: Next Gen I haven't seen/heard in about a decade?
|Posted by: L337 M4573R 0F DR460N5 Feb 9 2007, 01:56 PM|
|I don't like dom no more hes messing with the heores of this comic, its not that im saying take him because everything needs a good villain im just saying this in an " i hope theat they beat him" kind of way|
|Posted by: TheHarbinger Feb 9 2007, 01:59 PM|
Silly Mister 1337,
That was not in haiku form.
can you please rephrase?
|Posted by: darrin Feb 9 2007, 02:09 PM|
|Posted by: Mae Feb 9 2007, 06:50 PM|
| Let's play a new game
Leave behind these avatars
Babe, you blow my mind
|Posted by: Rapierman Feb 9 2007, 08:25 PM|
| Weakness is revealed
"Lov3 is dangerous," you said.
Now you will see why.
|Posted by: Kaiba Feb 9 2007, 09:19 PM|
| Dommoken awaits
The camper sits and shoots twice
Two lovers fall dead.
|Posted by: wordwarrior Feb 10 2007, 02:49 PM|
| The naked stare
All moot in her appartment
|Posted by: Jodi Feb 10 2007, 02:58 PM|
| The game is over
But they live yet, and still love
Dom cannot kill this
|Posted by: Zahooee Feb 10 2007, 03:11 PM|
| Speeding projectiles
Death rides on lead wings, but still -
Is anyone home?
|Posted by: wordwarrior Feb 10 2007, 03:15 PM|
| Note to l4m3 camper
Still sniping the dead shells:
You die in my world.
To all the lame campers
L33t ninj4 will pwnz you
|Posted by: Beast of Soda Feb 10 2007, 05:55 PM|
| The trackball sniper
Stalking from hidden alcoves
Domage has occurred.
In the sudden awareness
I regged for THIS.
Before you, readers,
Rising from silent lurkage
I give my regards
|Posted by: Rapierman Feb 11 2007, 12:25 PM|
| Two doves, encircling,
see not the attack above
from diving eagles.
|Posted by: Shoka Feb 12 2007, 01:47 AM|
He squints through his scope with aplomb,
And with two shots the lovers are gone;
So come all and observe
This camp-sniping perv,
Just your run-of-the-mill Peeping Dom.^^
|Posted by: Ningen Feb 12 2007, 12:28 PM|
| A deadly embrace
Love and death are closing in
which world matters more?