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Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Feb 9 2007, 12:52 PM
Distracted duo?
Trust not in what you can see
Complacency kills

Posted by: TheHarbinger Feb 9 2007, 01:19 PM
QUOTE (NekuraEtowaru @ Feb 9 2007, 01:52 PM)
Distracted duo?
Trust not in what you can see
Complacency kills

Where did they go now?
I will 0wnz0r them quickly
before plotting more.

Posted by: FreezingFire Feb 9 2007, 01:53 PM
What Dom is thinking:

I plan to get them,
but not how they expected.
Let it begin. BANG!



And after the shots have been fired:

To quote Will Riker:
"Pinocchio is broken,
its strings have been cut."

True warriors say
"It is a good day to die."
But WE will respawn.

Why am I remembering stuff from Star Trek: Next Gen I haven't seen/heard in about a decade? wacko.gif

Posted by: L337 M4573R 0F DR460N5 Feb 9 2007, 01:56 PM
I don't like dom no more hes messing with the heores of this comic, its not that im saying take him because everything needs a good villain im just saying this in an " i hope theat they beat him" kind of way ph34r.gif

Posted by: TheHarbinger Feb 9 2007, 01:59 PM
QUOTE (L337 M4573R 0F DR460N5 @ Feb 9 2007, 02:56 PM)
I don't like dom no more hes messing with the heores of this comic, its not that im saying take him because everything needs a good villain im just saying this in an " i hope theat they beat him" kind of way ph34r.gif

Silly Mister 1337,
That was not in haiku form.
can you please rephrase?

Posted by: darrin Feb 9 2007, 02:09 PM
QUOTE (TheHarbinger @ Feb 9 2007, 01:59 PM)
QUOTE (L337 M4573R 0F DR460N5 @ Feb 9 2007 @  02:56 PM)

Boy, I don't like Dom!
Sure, jungles must have tigers...
But I hope he'll lose.

Silly Mister 1337,
That was not in haiku form.
can you please rephrase?

[!haiku]translation attempted[/!haiku]

Posted by: Mae Feb 9 2007, 06:50 PM
Let's play a new game
Leave behind these avatars
Babe, you blow my mind

Posted by: Rapierman Feb 9 2007, 08:25 PM
Weakness is revealed
"Lov3 is dangerous," you said.
Now you will see why.

Posted by: Kaiba Feb 9 2007, 09:19 PM
Dommoken awaits
The camper sits and shoots twice
Two lovers fall dead.

Posted by: wordwarrior Feb 10 2007, 02:49 PM
The naked stare
Imploded heads
All moot in her appartment

Posted by: Jodi Feb 10 2007, 02:58 PM
The game is over
But they live yet, and still love
Dom cannot kill this

Posted by: Zahooee Feb 10 2007, 03:11 PM
Speeding projectiles
Death rides on lead wings, but still -
Is anyone home?

Posted by: wordwarrior Feb 10 2007, 03:15 PM
Note to l4m3 camper
Still sniping the dead shells:
You die in my world.

[edit]
To all the lame campers
L33t ninj4 will pwnz you

Posted by: Beast of Soda Feb 10 2007, 05:55 PM
The trackball sniper
Stalking from hidden alcoves
Domage has occurred.

Utmost disbelief
In the sudden awareness
I regged for THIS.

Before you, readers,
Rising from silent lurkage
I give my regards wink.gif

Posted by: Rapierman Feb 11 2007, 12:25 PM
Two doves, encircling,
see not the attack above
from diving eagles.

Posted by: Shoka Feb 12 2007, 01:47 AM
[irish_haiku]
He squints through his scope with aplomb,
And with two shots the lovers are gone;
So come all and observe
This camp-sniping perv,
Just your run-of-the-mill Peeping Dom.^^
[/irish_haiku]

Posted by: Ningen Feb 12 2007, 12:28 PM
A deadly embrace
Love and death are closing in
which world matters more?

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