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Megatokyo Forums > Story Discussions > Haiku - [0964] Sniper Rig

Posted by: Captain Button Feb 6 2007, 02:12 PM
Two hearts armored
Cannot pass the sniper's strait
Where lies the true goal?

Posted by: Zahooee Feb 6 2007, 02:31 PM
Running for safety
A fine red mist surrounds me --
She loses her head.


[apology mode]I'm so, so sorry. My inner-child made me! I'll punish him, later. [/apology mode]

Posted by: Zayel Feb 6 2007, 02:34 PM
I do believe this to be one of the most powerful ways of bonding with Largo. I like the drawing, it does a fair job of catching the drama, intensity, and sudden action involved in Video games, better than the previous, renderings of in game sequences. They were sorta static.

Posted by: Rapierman Feb 6 2007, 08:13 PM

This type of thread requires that you type in haiku form unless otherwise stated.


Rabbits dodge lava.
One falls behind the other.
Waiting for safety.

Posted by: FreezingFire Feb 6 2007, 09:05 PM
For Erika:

Go to your true love.
BANG! Life is not that easy.
Stand and go again.

True love hurts a lot,
but it could be so much worse:
Real snipers hurt more.

For Largo:

Testing her "system":
Under stress she'll try to quit.
Don't let her Largo!

For that camping sniper:

See life through a scope:
a lonely job of waiting
for one shot, one kill.

Run little roaches!
Run and hide or I'll squash you.
Your lives are mine now!

Posted by: Nero Feb 6 2007, 09:11 PM
Those are good. FreezingFire's is pretty funny though.

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