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Megatokyo Forums > Story Discussions > [haiku - 0962] - It Won't Be That Bad


Posted by: Mae Feb 1 2007, 08:31 PM
After a long day
Crashed out on cardboard box
Finally some peace

Posted by: FreezingFire Feb 1 2007, 09:12 PM
Kimiko's secret:
Is she gainfully employed?
Piro doesn't know.

One exhausted man
ponders a girl's future
and his place in it.

Crushed cardboard chair.
Take out food on the table.
Messy, messy room.

Posted by: snark Feb 1 2007, 09:43 PM
Bearing up beneath
Weight of a mass of fanboy
Mere cardboard crumbles

[irish haiku]
I just cannot believe what I see:
He is placing his hand on her knee?
And he still trembles not?
(Or, at least, not a lot)
And he's not even trying to flee?
[/irish haiku]

[!haiku] Joking aside, gotta give the boy marks for trying. [/!haiku]

Posted by: Rapierman Feb 1 2007, 11:05 PM
The storm is no more.
Two doves find a sheltered nest.
Safety shared brings peace.

She who seeks a safe harbor,
finds what she needs in her mate.

Posted by: Shinzen Feb 2 2007, 09:25 AM
Storm will continue,
Only the 'Eye' have they found,
The worst, yet to come.

Posted by: Shoka Feb 2 2007, 05:53 PM
QUOTE (snark @ Feb 1 2007, 09:43 PM)
[irish haiku]
I just cannot believe what I see:
He is placing his hand on her knee?
And he still trembles not?
(Or, at least, not a lot)
And he's not even trying to flee?
[/irish haiku]

[irish_haiku]
Fatigue and concern might impel a
So-normally fanboy-ish fella
To reach out to this
Poor worried young miss
And exhaustedly pat her patella. wacko.gif
[/irish_haiku]

Posted by: Fithel Feb 2 2007, 07:11 PM
so tired, must rest.
Im glad Im not Kimiko
wow thats really bad


gomen, dont worry
in the storm, I will be there
taking care of you


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(Belated Largo haiku)


What is this weakness?
why does she affect me so?

l337ne55 leaving me

she looks so pretty
Focus! Her system must be tested!
but I need her help.......



[edited to make largo haiku reflect his inner dialogue better]

Posted by: Poruspenia Feb 3 2007, 03:10 PM
QUOTE (Shoka @ Feb 2 2007, 05:53 PM)
[irish_haiku]
And exhaustedly pat her patella.  wacko.gif
[/irish_haiku]

[!haiku] Nicely done, Shoka. Patella, indeed. laugh.gif [/!haiku]

Oh NOES... the spindly
Arm from the marshes wants to
Drown me in cardboard.

Eeeeeeek! Get it off! Get it off!
Where's that flamethrower, Piro?!

[!renga] I love poking fun at the not-yet-replaced arm of DOOM. The broken, spindly arm, whose bicep is mistaken for part of the box and whose forearm is made of a short piece of gumby. I hope no one is confused by the usage of more than one poetry tag in this post. [/!renga]

"How did your day go?"
Intimacy litmus test
Measures words, not thought.

[!haiku] "TALK, you fools!!!" I mean to say... [/!haiku]

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