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Posted by: BinaryTears Jan 9 2007, 03:24 AM
Or so it seems to us now.
Why then the cheering?

Tears upon shoulder
say more than any words can.
Hold her tightly, fool.

Why do life's highlights
often happen when we're tired?
Recalled through cobwebs.

Come over and test
my system thats been long dead.
Do you know your way?

Largo's system tests
may involve more than jumpers.
Opening flowers.

At last their hearts meet.
Long years of waiting ended.
Much commotion here.

Better hold your breath.
He could still stuff this scene up.
Perhaps Piro snores?

Posted by: el Igore Jan 9 2007, 04:42 AM
Was this a good idea?
But I need his closeness now.
Please hold me, Piro.


Is this a daydream?
Everything is so unreal.
But I can feel her.

Posted by: Shoka Jan 9 2007, 11:41 PM
the weary sun falls
past the border of twilight;
a cub seeks shelter.


We've got Erika showin' some moxie
In the laughter we're hearin' by proxy,
'Cuz the thought of this nut
Teachin' kids seems somewhat
Like a moron that follows an oxy.


Posted by: Rapierman Jan 9 2007, 11:51 PM
By the end of day,
two sparrows return to nest.
Sleep, for peacful dreams.

Posted by: Ningen Jan 10 2007, 08:25 PM
Waves break on the beach.
The ocean slowly reaches out
to enfold the sun.

Reaching for a fitting end
the day seems less lonely now.

footsteps vanishing
the tide will clean the shoreline
before tomorrow's dawn

arriving separately
there are many ways to leave

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