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Megatokyo Forums > Story Discussions > Haiku - [0912] - How I Want To Feel


Posted by: Captain Button Sep 28 2006, 08:25 AM
Railcard remembered
Shriveled dreams fall from the tree
Unwelcome feelings

Posted by: Zahooee Sep 28 2006, 08:41 AM
A quiet station
Memories begin to wound -
Why am I like this?

Posted by: codepoetica Sep 28 2006, 09:04 AM
QUOTE (Captain Button @ Sep 28 2006, 10:25 AM)
Railcard remembered
Shriveled dreams fall from the tree
Unwelcome feelings

Familiar in locale
or person there: not alone.

Posted by: Shoka Sep 28 2006, 09:51 PM
this proud defiance
of the storm is just, but still
leaves her cold and wet.

[irish_haiku]
Nanasawa drags home from the session
To her roommate's mistaken impression:
"Is that you, Piro? Strip
"And get in here right quick!" --
There's that 'deer-in-the-headlights' expression.
[/irish_haiku]

Posted by: AkaiLady Sep 28 2006, 09:55 PM
Empty and confused,
Making her way back to home,
You think I'm who now? :|

Posted by: codepoetica Sep 28 2006, 10:00 PM
QUOTE (Shoka @ Sep 28 2006, 11:51 PM)
this proud defiance
of the storm is just, but still
leaves her cold and wet.

A firey countenance,
Push back dreary Autumn winds?

Posted by: Shoka Sep 28 2006, 10:15 PM
QUOTE (codepoetica @ Sep 28 2006, 10:00 PM)
A firey countenance,
Push back dreary Autumn winds?

have we not seen that
trying to push back the winds
has mortal results?

'bend like the willow,' they say;
broken oaks yield tragedy.

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