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Megatokyo Forums > Story Discussions > Haiku [894] You Being You

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Aug 15 2006, 11:50 PM
Being the real you
Often the difficult path
Is most rewarding

Stripped to her essence
No script, no paint, no powder
Only way to fly

Posted by: codepoetica Aug 16 2006, 12:02 AM
Careful composure,
ignorance hedged in routine.
Precisely shattered.

The maiden laid bare,
unshielded in morning light.
Before the makeup.

Posted by: Haldane Aug 16 2006, 08:30 AM
You prepare anew;
Another day to be you,
Though a fragile grip.

Posted by: uberlegen Aug 16 2006, 10:08 AM
Although the maiden is soon clothed,
Her feelings and thoughts are disrobed,
When one harmless gibe,
Incites her to cry,
Perhaps it is not best to probe.

[!haiku] I really liked that one, Haldane! [!/haiku]

Posted by: Haldane Aug 16 2006, 10:52 AM
A fallen angel
Battered by a past gone wrong
Guides a new Feather.

Posted by: AkaiLady Aug 16 2006, 09:03 PM
Seeing her deep pain,
Realizing her newfound fame,
Urging, "Stay the same."

Posted by: Parinoid Aug 17 2006, 03:56 AM
You are an angel
Just like i was, but different...
Don't get hurt like me

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Aug 18 2006, 12:14 AM
Beautiful, fragile
Synthetic reality
Trimming angels wings

They love what I'm not
Fueling sticky fantasies
She will not be spared

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