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Posted by: Mae Aug 9 2006, 10:04 PM
Her hair is unbound
As is her bouyant spirit
A cheerful goodbye

Posted by: rufiangel Aug 9 2006, 10:14 PM
A staggering blow
Reeling with a loss for words
He bucks up; gives chase...

Posted by: Amalga Aug 9 2006, 10:22 PM
3y3 y00z3d d4 b0xx0rz
d4 3vi1 r3m41nz u|\|f4z3dd
k0nt4inm3nt w4z br33ch3d

Posted by: uberlegen Aug 9 2006, 10:34 PM
Sad girl in Sony,
Quick concealment uncalled for.
Intended or not?

[!haiku]Nice one Mae. happy.gif [/!haiku]

Posted by: L337 Aug 9 2006, 11:41 PM
His secret unvailed,
How did this happen to him?
He seeks the answer.

btw, all of these are really awesome

Posted by: Fithel Aug 10 2006, 12:37 AM
Teh 3v1L wuz here.
In my grasp but she escaped.
The city is unsafe.



Why does Piro leave?
He is such a whiny girl.
My beer! Its still cold!



------



Checkmate again boys.
Victory is so easy.
Ping is much more fun.

Though I destroy them,
I will mold her for better.
Soon they'll understand.



----

Got carried away
and wrote too many haiku's
Meh, I was inspired.



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Edited third line.
Why did I put 7 in third?
Don't know. Baka-ni!

Posted by: L337 Aug 10 2006, 02:06 AM
Holy... fucking... awesome...

Exept for the third one. It had 7 syllables in the third line... Sorry, had ta knock ya down there.

Posted by: codepoetica Aug 10 2006, 03:27 AM
QUOTE (L337 @ Aug 10 2006, 04:06 AM)
Holy... fucking... awesome...

Exept for the third one.  It had 7 syllables in the third line...  Sorry, had ta knock ya down there.

In these threads Haiku,
please to be making all posts
in five seven five.


In dollic growth spurts,
height and girth exceeding those
possessed by Miho.

Lady of Shadows,
hurt, alone, now insecure
over tracts of land?

Posted by: Stibbons9 Aug 10 2006, 03:54 AM
Left incoherent
And toyed with once too often
Something inside snaps.


Because of a door left ajar
And a robot that's acting bizzare
An unwelcome sight
A scene from last night
Has finally pushed him too far.

Posted by: Blayze Aug 10 2006, 11:52 AM
Do you think that Largo is dense?
Cardboard boxes rule as a defence.
But Miho's now free,
And Piro will see
The result of broken innocence.

Posted by: 4kum4_73n5h1 Aug 10 2006, 06:13 PM
Drinking beer iz good
Drinking lots of beer is fun
No beer, is no fun.

Ph34rb0t destorys you
Ph34rb0t can also kill you
Ph34rb0t is now drunk

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Piro iz w33py
He plays harvest moon and sucks
And he killed his dog

Posted by: Shinrom Aug 10 2006, 06:16 PM
Nice all! Liked them alot.

Posted by: uberlegen Aug 10 2006, 06:53 PM
QUOTE (Shincom)
Nice all! Liked them alot.


By commiting a Haiku thread crime,
I must scold your mishap in rhyme,
Shincom listen up,
Although you're a pup,
Please follow the guidelines next time.

happy.gif

QUOTE (codepoetica @ Aug 10 2006, 02:27 AM)
In these threads Haiku,
please to be making all posts
in five seven five.

Posted by: 4kum4_73n5h1 Aug 10 2006, 06:56 PM
Uh huh! Just like me!
I may be a tourist, but
I follow the rule

Posted by: AkaiLady Aug 10 2006, 08:02 PM
Events in motion,
Her plot is unknown to us,
"Can we get waffles?"

Posted by: Fithel Aug 10 2006, 09:34 PM
Mysteries abound.
At least posters stopped saying,
"W04h! Ping's got b00b13s!"

Posted by: Fithel Aug 10 2006, 09:36 PM
I double posted.
The page was acting funny,
so I say "gomen".

Posted by: 4kum4_73n5h1 Aug 10 2006, 09:38 PM
She's Inflatable?
They can be used as balloons.
AH SHE'S ATTACKING!!!

Bleeding on the ground...
Where is the beer...i need it!
Now i pass out here... sleep.gif

Posted by: ThatGuyFromToriKoro Aug 10 2006, 09:39 PM
Junpei post haiku,
Though not in strip for long time.
Junpei miss old days.

Posted by: Fithel Aug 10 2006, 10:40 PM
Yes, the good old days.
Though it seems like yesterday,
many things have changed.


So many questions.
The plotlines left unanswered
are now forgotten.



I think that someone
should start a spinoff comic
to fill in the holes.

Posted by: L337 Aug 10 2006, 11:44 PM
That would be cool.
But would it be truly great?
And would the holes fill?

Fred shall fill the holes.
In time will it be revealed
what is happening.

But maybe I'm wrong.
I don't really have a clue,
but that is my take.

Posted by: ThatGuyFromToriKoro Aug 10 2006, 11:59 PM
Miho did record
Something Piro did not see
Kimiko's regret

Ominously she
Leaves Piro speechless as she
Calmly glides away

Piro's wish may be
Multiple choice responses
For simplicity

Posted by: Fithel Aug 11 2006, 12:33 AM
Cant view the last strip.
Refresh monkees killed the site.
I must post again.

Posted by: codepoetica Aug 11 2006, 05:14 AM
QUOTE (Fithel @ Aug 11 2006, 02:33 AM)
Cant view the last strip.
Refresh monkees killed the site.
I must post again.


Long term memory falters,
was stored on magnetic planes.

So take your rest now,
oh weary of server-rins.
We will wait for you.

Posted by: Jakerei Aug 11 2006, 08:00 AM
QUOTE
That would be cool.
But would it be truly great?
And would the holes fill?


First line has four,
Second catches the fifth one.
Caught me by surprise.

I'm no master here.
I know not all of the rules.
But this intruiges me.

If there be no 'er,
If nothing is wrong up there,
Please forgive my post.

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This is an edit:
The second has just seven-
Not the eight I thought.

Not to badger you
I saw your haiku just then
Nothing else to do.

Posted by: kendermouse Aug 11 2006, 09:27 AM
QUOTE (codepoetica @ Aug 10 2006, 03:27 AM)
Lady of Shadows,
hurt, alone, now insecure
over tracts of land?

a python ref'rence?
largo as the french taunter
flings piro's dead cowzzz

Posted by: goober Aug 11 2006, 10:10 AM
I like it a lot
It has a very good plot
F34r B0tz 4r3 n33d3d
happy.gif

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