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|Posted by: Shoka Jul 28 2006, 10:02 PM|
| behind weeping skies
the sun tries vainly to emerge;
the rain pours harder.
the weatherman says
"100% chance of
Hayasaka tries lamely to fill a
Sad moment with jokes to instill a
Minute bit of light
Into Kimiko's plight;
It's Gam-erika vee-ess Kimi-zilla!
[!haiku]It may not always be good, but I kin always make it rhyme, dad-gummit! [/!haiku]
I'm beginning to think I am bad
'Cuz I like seein' Kimiko sad!
Her bedraggled chagrin
Is so cute it's a sin,
And that's making me feel like a cad. ^^;;
|Posted by: littlethunder Jul 29 2006, 09:22 AM|
lists just three ingredients:
fans, time and pressure
|Posted by: uberlegen Jul 29 2006, 12:29 PM|
| Sip. Lecture. Repeat.
Add a pinch of sarcasm.
Let simmer a bit.
In the case of tear-spillage,
Prepare separate advice.
[!haiku] Wow, Shoka. That first limerick was so forced. [/!haiku]
|Posted by: Mintaka Jul 31 2006, 07:59 PM|
| 'All or nothing' thought --
A logical fallacy
Held by the depressed
The sense of humor left town
With the sense of proportion
Pirokyo's buildings to dust --
Beauty is also a Beast
The hero must kiss them both
|Posted by: AkaiLady Jul 31 2006, 09:04 PM|
| Sipping her coffee,
Words tumble into awkward lines,
Oh, broken humor...
|Posted by: Rapierman Jul 31 2006, 09:05 PM|
| When in a glass house,
you should never throw stones here,
lest you break the glass.
The fragility of her
makes caution more important.
|Posted by: Sothiaz Jul 31 2006, 09:08 PM|
| ~wai!~ Haiku's are back! i thought that they had been given up on! lovey work, everyone....
|Posted by: Sam111111 Jul 31 2006, 09:10 PM|
| Sometimes, there is no
answer for sticks that do not
bend. Break, and rebuild.
|Posted by: snark Jul 31 2006, 11:09 PM|
| Please excuse the dust...
Kimiko's been doing her rag,
And she's feeling a bit of a hag,
So now Erika's jokes,
Are the wrong kind of pokes,
And they only result in "Unnnnhhhwaaaaagh!"
Hmmm... needs a touch more Guinness; where's my measuring spoons...
[irish to try again*]
The penultimate knot of her rope,
Has been marked with a tag "You must mope!"
So her powerless friend,
Can't set her on the mend:
Poor Kimiko's not feeling much hope.
[/irish to try again]
Er... perhaps I've gotten the recipe wrong?
* Sorry. Really, I am.
|Posted by: Shoka Jul 31 2006, 11:55 PM|
Using verse I am moved to remark
On this quite sudden shot from the dark!
Has he been resurrected?
It's a most unexpected
Return of a prodigal snark!
[!haiku]...and speaking as one weird creature to another, it's nice to see yer serrated little back around here again. [/!haiku]