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|Megatokyo Forums > Story Discussions > [haiku] 879: No Time for a Pity Party|
|Posted by: Mintaka Jul 7 2006, 10:14 AM|
| The clock's still ticking
The sun still rises early
I still remember
If you forgave my blow then
My kindness won't be harder
|Posted by: AkaiLady Jul 7 2006, 01:08 PM|
| Friendship has a hold,
Though she does not want to deal,
A peace offering.
[haiku]Mintaka, I love your haiku! It's amazing and captures the strip well.[/haiku]
|Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Jul 7 2006, 01:26 PM|
| Remembered losses
She-wolf moves to protect cub
Wounded and shaken
|Posted by: Shoka Jul 7 2006, 09:35 PM|
| tea and comforters:
the sovereign remedy
for a ragged heart.
I am going to pester you partly
To engage you in passionate parley,
And to palliate pain
Talking properly plain,
For a pluperfect-past pity party.
|Posted by: AceofOpus Jul 8 2006, 07:03 AM|
| Her mind a vortex
Shes not cut out for stardom
She wishes to help
Remebering in times past
When she was in need of it
|Posted by: AncestralHamster Jul 8 2006, 08:41 AM|
| A warm comforter:
Yet compassion and friendship
proves warmer overall.
|Posted by: Artemi Jul 8 2006, 11:35 AM|
| Iíll hold on for you,
My best friend and my savior.
Take your time and cry!
Wake you up, and help you too,
I canít let wounded dreams die!
|Posted by: codepoetica Jul 8 2006, 02:03 PM|
| Forceful insertion
bringing comfort and coffee
shatter heart's ice flows.
|Posted by: uberlegen Jul 8 2006, 03:58 PM|
| Bossy gift bearer,
Largesse of java suspends
Drinks at the pity party,
Form a coffee colloquy.
[!haiku]shoka, I'm lovin' your limericks. [/!haiku]
|Posted by: Mae Jul 8 2006, 06:15 PM|
| Damn coffee, I want
To hide my head and forget
what I did last night.