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|Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Jun 29 2006, 11:50 PM|
| Concern brings the call
Untangling the disaster
Lost in translation
|Posted by: Neosavetk Jun 30 2006, 01:29 AM|
|Posted by: Tehan Jun 30 2006, 01:31 AM|
| Link to underworld
Becomes Largo's method to
Sweet-talk his umfriend
Not as dramatic, but hey, I ain't much of a poet.
|Posted by: Stibbons9 Jun 30 2006, 02:56 AM|
| A morning phone call
But what message does it bring
Hope or damnation
And now for something completely different.
There was a young fellow called Piro
Who's luck with the ladies was zero
And the one that he liked
Their relationship spiked
Even though he behaved like a hero.
|Posted by: Aarin Jun 30 2006, 03:04 AM|
| A voice, an answer
Girl and boy in love
|Posted by: rufiangel Jun 30 2006, 06:34 AM|
Sorry if I'm wrong, but doesn't the 'spiked' thing mean their relationship hit a peak? >_>
Her question: "Is he sobbing?"
The response: "He's watching porn."
["Irish Haiku" ]
He picked up the phone full of woe
On the screen he saw her name glow
So though it was dawn
He stifled a yawn
And answered quite casually, "Yo."
|Posted by: Stibbons9 Jun 30 2006, 06:43 AM|
Hmmm, was worried if people would take that meaning, but I was using spiked in the meaning of "wrecked" as in having a large spike driven into it. I must use better slang next time...
The fridge is raided
Thank God he's wearing some pants
It's B33r for breakfast
|Posted by: Seth Jun 30 2006, 06:58 AM|
| The phone rings annoyingly
Discussions about 3vil and w33ps
Souls turn to porn games
|Posted by: Haldane Jun 30 2006, 07:48 AM|
Think of it more as a short and sudden pulse. This could be referring to the strong downturn after the peak. As explained, 'got spiked' was the intended image.
|Posted by: Blayze Jun 30 2006, 10:44 AM|
| There was a young man named Largo
Who woke to his friend called Piro
Awake at an hour
That makes Largo dour
Looking at digital porno
|Posted by: Shoka Jun 30 2006, 02:28 PM|
| when the real world bites,
immersion in dating sims
is balm for the soul.
He is acting surpassingly lame,
While playing some girly porn game;
He's dumpy and fussy
And grumpy and wussy,
And a gluteus-maximal pain.
|Posted by: AkaiLady Jun 30 2006, 02:44 PM|
| 3v1l awoke him,
A morning conversation,
|Posted by: MasterOfAll Jun 30 2006, 03:12 PM|
| The phone, its ringing
Gonna answer it Piro?
Just play your dumb games
|Posted by: Wing alpha Jun 30 2006, 08:53 PM|
| 3vil shut up
a welcome call
what is he?