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Megatokyo Forums > Story Discussions > Haiku [875] Chapter 8:Defect Mapping


Posted by: Shoka Jun 29 2006, 03:36 AM
sleepless and fading,
keys click beneath his fingers,
the summons ignored.

[irish_haiku]
It is five thirty-three in the morning,
When the 3v1l device sounds a warning,
One waking up dour
At this ungodly hour,
While the other looks like he's in mourning.
[/irish_haiku]

Posted by: Parinoid Jun 29 2006, 03:44 AM
up all night tak tak
bree bree bree evil device becons
answer or destroy?

Posted by: UltraPredAlien Jun 29 2006, 03:50 AM
I bet its Kimiko on the line trying to apologise to Piro. What tangle web he treves.

Posted by: Tehan Jun 29 2006, 04:34 AM
QUOTE (UltraPredAlien @ Jun 29 2006, 07:50 PM)
I bet its Kimiko on the line trying to apologise to Piro. What tangle web he treves.

Do not say that here
This is the place for haiku
To discussion thread!

If you must discuss
At least say it in haiku
Five-seven-five, dude.

Posted by: kensain Jun 29 2006, 07:07 AM
Risen from coma
My beer induced amnesia
steals memories...

Posted by: Wing alpha Jun 29 2006, 07:45 AM
tak tak tak
the nigth fades
tak tak tak
the sun rises
tak tak tak
that stupid tirade
tak tak tak
why she did it
tak tak tak
here Im alone
taktak tak
maybe thatsme

breep breep
my phone
breep breep
I know who it is
breep breep
will I answer?
breep breep
No Im still damaged
Breep breep
Largo is awake
Breep breep
wonder If ?
breep breep
I should let him smash
breep breep
that 3vil contraption
breep breep
nah Illl just not answer
breep breep
after all i know who that is
breep breep
damn where is a beer when you need it

Posted by: Hiryu Kaga Jun 29 2006, 02:25 PM
Last night's denial
Enforced through the sleepless hours
I still stand my ground

Posted by: AkaiLady Jun 29 2006, 03:23 PM
A fresh beginning
One tak-tak-tak's on the keys,
One is awoken.

In the silent dawn,
Noises threaten the still peace,
What will silence them?

Posted by: uberlegen Jun 29 2006, 03:36 PM
Deprived of all sleep,
Imminent drowsiness from
Relationship-lag.

Posted by: Kaiba Jun 29 2006, 07:51 PM
He is all whiny
taking on that PC, it
appears he's now fried.

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Jun 29 2006, 08:51 PM
Morpheus denied
Ambien can't trump his pain
Reality warps

Posted by: Rapierman Jun 29 2006, 10:23 PM
What drowns my sorrows
is the constant clattering.
Electronic words.

It got me through the nighttime
but I forget to get sleep.

Posted by: Aarin Jun 29 2006, 10:30 PM
Another morning
Insomnia rules Piro
Largo wakes to ‘Breee’

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Jun 29 2006, 11:44 PM
Ringing breaks the silence
Daybreak brings them little peace
New day brings fresh starts

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