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Posted by: AncestralHamster Jun 21 2006, 10:51 AM
Winter's fury ends
But for me there is no spring.
My heart is frozen.


[3-5-3]

Fury spent
Seed of horror grows
In pained heart.

[/3-5-3]

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Jun 21 2006, 11:21 AM
Her spent energy
Echoes down dark corridors
Destructive longing

Posted by: Shannon M. Jun 21 2006, 11:38 AM
Watching in silence
A depressing waterfall
No more games in mind

[verse]

A sliver of pity, a slight emotion
For a kitten shaking and shuddering
For words risen and fallen
that left a heart torn
A mind torn
Everything torn.

Nobody will even look her way,
as the tears rolled down
Nobody will even save the day,
as one looks with a frown

If only she didn't say those words
If only their friendship was not torn.

[/verse]

[!haiku] I'm kind of a noob at this, but eh. I wanted to write something. [/!haiku]

Posted by: TibbyMSTie Jun 21 2006, 02:53 PM
Her head bowed in tears
Can this really be the end
Of chapter or love?

Posted by: AkaiLady Jun 21 2006, 03:25 PM
Walls fallen around,
Shame, guilt, and pain wrack her soul,
Yet, the world moves on.

Posted by: Monkey-Sensei Jun 21 2006, 03:29 PM
This, our epic war
often has casualties.
Sad, but not too much.

Posted by: omnilynx Jun 21 2006, 03:52 PM
Time in his slow step
drags her unresisting, like
rivers after floods.

Posted by: Mae Jun 21 2006, 04:48 PM
The raging storm passed
Leaving only gentle rain
Quietly falling

Posted by: Dark_Kitsunegirl Jun 21 2006, 04:52 PM
Lurking in shadow
love is testing and trying
Will it be ending?

*heh. I'm a new at writing haiku, but i like it!*

Posted by: russianwolf Jun 21 2006, 05:00 PM
energy gone,
love flowing away,
someone lurks in the shadow,

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Jun 21 2006, 10:33 PM
Tears like the spring rain
Sowing seeds of suffering there
In her wounded heart

Posted by: Torien Jun 21 2006, 10:48 PM
Alone in her heart
with a friendship burnt to ash
is love a phoenix?

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Jun 21 2006, 10:52 PM
Recover, renew
The objective now so clear
Once obscured by hurt

Posted by: Appiration Jun 22 2006, 07:17 AM
Eight Seven One Verse Piro-san
"Sees Not Through Her Blurry Sight"
"Can't Join Her, She Walks Alone"

Eight Seven Two Verse Kimiko-san
"Fire Blurrs My Sight Tonight"
"Through Blind Rage, What I Have Sewn?"

Future Guise Of Miho-san?

[reverse hokku (7-5-7)]

Autumn's Final Leaf Blistered
Spring's Warmth Distant Dreams
Winter's Chilling Hand Beckons

Malestorm Of Wrath Subsides
Scrys From The Abyss
Invite The Shadow's Embrace

[/reverse hokku (7-5-7)]

*EDITED FOR HAIKU POST TRADITION!*

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Jun 22 2006, 01:06 PM
Words superfluous
Severe pain is palpable
Affects the witness

Posted by: Temenus Jun 22 2006, 01:28 PM
Storm segued to rain
She is both victim and source
Predator watches

/Temenus, who blaims the booze... even if he has only had one beer tonight.

Posted by: AkaiLady Jun 22 2006, 01:38 PM
Shrouded in self-hate,
Everything, she pushed away
Will she want him back?

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Jun 22 2006, 07:05 PM
Misjudged and maligned
Spoken in haste that she may
Repent at leisure

Posted by: Torien Jun 22 2006, 07:21 PM
kimi's heart fills
with regret or resentment?
her journey darkens

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