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Posted by: AncestralHamster Jun 12 2006, 03:09 AM
A wintry glare.
Blighting the warmth of summer:
Unexpected frost.


Posted by: rufiangel Jun 12 2006, 05:15 AM
[limerick~ I can't top Shoka but I gave it a shot smile.gif]

He sensed that her feelings were low,
So he called her name wanting to know.
She looked back with a glare
Then walked on with no care
To the man suffering from that blow.

[and a haiku~]

A tentative call
He sees only her cold eyes
Strikes deep in his heart

Posted by: Haldane Jun 12 2006, 09:31 AM
The battle is done.
The victor expects honors,
but receives disdain.

Posted by: AkaiLady Jun 12 2006, 01:04 PM
Impressed by Piro
That he could get the sticks quick,
Walk/protect Kimi.

Inside once hollow,
Now filled with frustration, hurt
Men... what pigs they are!

Posted by: littlethunder Jun 12 2006, 01:33 PM

Idoru's sharp gaze
instructs: Anger and havoc
are not the True Path


LittleThunder

Posted by: Temenus Jun 12 2006, 02:02 PM
Cold starlight above
Her eyes hold no light for me
"What is it you want?"

/Temenus, who is worried but still hopefull of a good resolution of the situation...

Posted by: Irinei Jun 12 2006, 02:31 PM
Quickly forgotten
Weakness of idolatry
I don't know you now


Her gaze erects walls
Freezing and invisible
403 Denied

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Jun 12 2006, 06:44 PM
Even our heroes
Will fail in the arena
Rife with emotion

Posted by: Rapierman Jun 12 2006, 10:18 PM
[!haiku]

Been a while, AH. You need to come visit more often. wink.gif

[/!haiku]

This old, jaundiced eye
cannot see the difference
between is and was.

In the slow burn of anger,
prejudice clouds the judgement.

Posted by: mcfeegle Jun 12 2006, 10:26 PM
They are walking home,
she is very angry now,
He doesn't know why.

Posted by: AncestralHamster Jun 12 2006, 10:52 PM
QUOTE (Irinei)
Her gaze erects walls
Freezing and invisible
403 Denied

Earlier, a warm welcome.
Now, the black ice of a firewall.


QUOTE (Rapierman @ Jun 12 2006, 09:18 PM)
[!haiku]

Been a while, AH.  You need to come visit more often.  wink.gif

[/!haiku]


[!haiku]

Was meaning to, but the forums going down earlier in the year was bad timing. Just started geting back into the habit of checking the forum when it went down and I stopped checking again. And there have been other concerns as well that eat up time and energy.

[/!haiku]

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Jun 12 2006, 11:05 PM
By feelings betrayed
I am set back on my heels
A failed maneuver

Posted by: uberlegen Jun 12 2006, 11:11 PM
QUOTE (NekuraEtowaru @ Jun 12 2006, 10:05 PM)
By feelings betrayed
I am set back on my heels
A failed maneuver

Kindness misinterpreted,
How quickly the tables turn.

Posted by: Shoka Jun 13 2006, 12:09 AM
QUOTE (rufiangel @ Jun 12 2006, 05:15 AM)
[limerick~ I can't top Shoka but I gave it a shot smile.gif]

[!haiku]Limerick? They're Irish haiku! Really! Would I be after making up something like that?! wink.gif[/!haiku]

just a damn fanboy,
the same as all the others;
enough is enough.

[irish_haiku]
Nanasawa glanced back, and a 'thunk'
Could be heard then as Piro's heart sunk,
'Cuz her Eastwood-style squint,
That cut sharper than flint,
Said "So - do ya feel lucky, punk?"
[/irish_haiku]

Posted by: kensain Jun 13 2006, 06:09 AM
QUOTE (Shoka @ Jun 13 2006, 12:09 AM)
just a damn fanboy,
the same as all the others;
enough is enough.

Aiming my verbal weapons
Waiting for harsh words to form


A single loose word
Regret floods my fatig'd soul
Hollow victories

Posted by: Initial B Jun 13 2006, 08:56 AM
[!haiku]
Hey AH. I think I'll try giving this a shot:
[/!haiku]

With dead expression,
Beliefs and values shatter'd,
Zombified seiyuu.

Why bother acting?
All I believed is a lie.
Fanboys no Baka.

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Jun 13 2006, 09:33 PM
Disillusionment
Fanboys are not as I assumed
Vultures are kinder

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