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Megatokyo Forums > Story Discussions > Haiku [863] The Purity of Your Attention

Posted by: Small Pink Mouse May 31 2006, 01:31 PM
Pure attention, eh?
Very well, now you have it.
Attention has teeth.

Posted by: AkaiLady May 31 2006, 02:12 PM
An accident here,
A devious plot revealed,
Stupid otaku.

The table rotates,
Accusations fly from them,
She reveals a truth.

Posted by: mcfeegle May 31 2006, 09:34 PM
Let's see if I can write one.

Otaku's failed plot,
They could never blame themselves,
Piro should watch out.

I like both of yours a lot!

Posted by: Shoka May 31 2006, 10:50 PM
hypocrisy swells
this tide of righteous outrage;
shame saps its rising.

When a fanboy of doubtful maturity
Was wracked by intense insecurity,
He tried dumping on Piro,
But he scored a big zero
When the girl found his bag of impurity.

[!haiku]Edit: uberlegen, Piro's name is taken from a Japanese manga character (a cat, actually). Whenever you see the letter "i" in a Japanese word, it is always pronounced like the "i" in "machine" or "magazine".[/!haiku]

Posted by: uberlegen May 31 2006, 11:11 PM
Above the table, drama,
Below, camera obscura,
Still, the tables turn.

[!haiku]Shoka, is it "Pee-roh" or "Pye-roh"? I've never pronounced it like that.[/!haiku]

Posted by: rufiangel May 31 2006, 11:28 PM
[!haiku] Fred's said that Piro's name is pronounce 'Pee-roh'. And shoka's limericks rock.[/!haiku]

Innocent image
Assurance of compliance
Broken illusion

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