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|Megatokyo Forums > Story Discussions > Haiku  C) Yell at Her and Make Her Cry|
|Posted by: Rapierman May 17 2006, 02:10 PM|
| Missile of Anger
breaks open the massive dam.
River of tears flow.
|Posted by: russianwolf May 17 2006, 07:03 PM|
Ice caps melt
tears all around the world
|Posted by: AkaiLady May 17 2006, 07:44 PM|
| An irrelavance,
Pent up anger and sorrow,
D'oh man, not again.
|Posted by: Shoka May 18 2006, 01:14 AM|
| excuse my feelings!
does it feel good not to care?
(must be a chick thing).
"You're jealous that he got the girl!"
Was the thought that sent Largo awhirl,
And the ride made him spew
Out a mouthful of brew,
And almost provoked him to hurl.
Largo Barko bitters and beer,
Pissed the girl and made her sneer,
When he hit her where it hurts,
Largo Barko made it worse.
|Posted by: rufiangel May 18 2006, 04:42 AM|
"Feelings betrayed her."
A sharp pain stabs; why on earth
Are you with me then?
Her words come bitter
Without realising, she cuts
Where he hides his hurt.
His rage flares at her.
"Of course I cared!!" She sees now.
She sees his feelings.
Destroyed by just one sentence
Tears spill, resolve gone.
Even through her tears
She sees her effect on him.
Is he baffled? Good.
[!haiku]>_< Everyone on the thread rocks! This comic is such a good on to haiku [/!haiku]
[EDIT] Miscounted a syllable. [/EDIT]