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Posted by: Shoka May 3 2006, 11:02 PM
a bloody sunset
on a moraine of corpses;
echoing thunder.

For what did Piroko-Unlucky
Fall dupe to the Prince of the Yucky?
On a pile of the dead
They will fight head-to-head,
For the fate of the Most Holy Ducky!

[!haiku], it was just a theory. ^^;;[/!haiku]

Posted by: Mintaka May 4 2006, 09:43 PM
Miss Emily said
This was how you could tell that
This is poetry:

So cold no fire could warm
The head's top taken off

"moraine of corpses":
That stark line has frozen me
On a warm spring night

Posted by: AkaiLady May 5 2006, 02:30 PM
Fallen and broken,
Seeds of betrayal blooming,
What will unfold next?

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru May 6 2006, 09:22 AM
Creeping doom awaits
Bravado no match for him
Deceit the victor

Posted by: Mae May 6 2006, 08:31 PM
Boldy he climbs up
Piles of souless carcasses
Shouting defiance

Posted by: Hoob May 6 2006, 09:27 PM
Blackened cessation
Dawn's enemy Night's ribbons
hope forthwith extinct

Posted by: kensain May 7 2006, 05:13 AM
the 3vil rises
the predator hunts again
backstabbing asshole!

laugh.gif laugh.gif laugh.gif

thru my shattered mind
my comrade thirsts for vengence
only hate remains

I see through his words
He will regret toying with life
I fight for friendship

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru May 7 2006, 11:08 PM
Hard fought victory
Will not come this darkened day
Black traces bind him

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