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Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Apr 28 2006, 08:17 AM
Devil's pleasing shape
Coils around her broken heart
To slowly constrict

Posted by: rufiangel Apr 28 2006, 09:46 AM
QUOTE
Devil's pleasing shape
Coils around her broken heart
To slowly constrict


Alas, unbeknownst to him
Her fragments bleed through him too.

[!haiku]Am I doing this right? wacko.gif Sorry if I'm not! [/!haiku]

Unspeakable pain
Enervates her damaged soul
But empowers him.

Posted by: Shoka Apr 28 2006, 12:02 PM
no leech, this comrade,
but a serpent in our midst;
how could we have known?

[irish_haiku]
When you're out and about on the hunt,
And you're stuck with a blood-sucking runt,
Don't waste time with speech,
Just launch out that leech
With a well-timed and vigorous punt!
[/irish_haiku]

QUOTE (rufiangel)
Alas, unbeknownst to him
Her fragments bleed through him too.

sudden ice and heat-
betrayal is the dagger
that pierces her heart.

QUOTE (ruf)
[!haiku]Am I doing this right?  Sorry if I'm not! [/!haiku]

[!haiku]You did just fine.^^[/!quote]

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Apr 29 2006, 12:52 PM
QUOTE (rufiangel @ Apr 28 2006, 08:46 AM)

Alas, unbeknownst to him
Her fragments bleed through him too.

[!haiku]Am I doing this right? wacko.gif Sorry if I'm not! [/!haiku]

Unspeakable pain
Enervates her damaged soul
But empowers him.

[!haiku] You did just fine, rufi! Nice to see you in the *other* Artist's Corner wink.gif [/!haiku]

Subsisting on agony
In her suffering, he lives

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