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|Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Apr 28 2006, 08:17 AM|
| Devil's pleasing shape
Coils around her broken heart
To slowly constrict
|Posted by: rufiangel Apr 28 2006, 09:46 AM|
Alas, unbeknownst to him
Her fragments bleed through him too.
[!haiku]Am I doing this right? Sorry if I'm not! [/!haiku]
Enervates her damaged soul
But empowers him.
|Posted by: Shoka Apr 28 2006, 12:02 PM|
| no leech, this comrade,
but a serpent in our midst;
how could we have known?
When you're out and about on the hunt,
And you're stuck with a blood-sucking runt,
Don't waste time with speech,
Just launch out that leech
With a well-timed and vigorous punt!
sudden ice and heat-
betrayal is the dagger
that pierces her heart.
[!haiku]You did just fine.^^[/!quote]
|Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Apr 29 2006, 12:52 PM|
[!haiku] You did just fine, rufi! Nice to see you in the *other* Artist's Corner [/!haiku]
Subsisting on agony
In her suffering, he lives